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Reviews for Greenleaf & Imladris 22-Bereth:To Have and To Hold

By : MPB
  • From ANON - Cainthar on March 02, 2004
    This is a bit of a stretch for me. It kinda read like a Scooby Doo moment with the explanations and muddled dialougue. I would think the Lomion would have been a bit more prepared. I am also surprised that a building/fortress suchyou you describe could have been built without attracting just a little bit of attention.
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  • From MJLuvsPolar on March 02, 2004
    OMG! Just when I think you can't pull of a more evil cliffhanger, you go and just prove me wrong! Gimli wounded, Elladan fighting for his life, Elrohir about to be *gulp* er, ravaged, eaten, killed? And what the hell is Legolas up to? Eresseeeeeee! Come back and put us out of misery.

    Marie | ^_~ |
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  • From ANON - Dark Angel on March 02, 2004
    AAAAHH nooo!!! How could that happen now! :( I so hope Elrohir can deal with the mad elven lady and that no bad surprises will be waiting for him in there... I'm not even trying to guess where you are going with this any more! Very good! Now I can't wait at all for the next chapter! :/
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  • From ANON - Jamie on March 02, 2004
    Can't end at that cliffy!!! wonder what's beyond that wooden door, the evil elf himself? You captured the suspense and adventure really well in this chp, and I don't know what to expect from one paragraph to the next.... I'm so loving it!
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  • From ANON - Talasi on March 02, 2004
    You are killing me with this cliffhanger! Its a good thing you update nearly every day. I'm still completely engrossed in this story. Perhaps this will snap legolas out of whatever daze he has been in to treat his mate in such a manner. If not, its nothing a good spanking at the hand of Elrohir can't solve. lol
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  • From MPB on March 01, 2004
    Hi Deathangelw,
    I don't know about the castle (or rather fortress) but I will confess to getting my inspiration for the cocoons from the movie "Alien."



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  • From ANON - Rainien on March 01, 2004
    ARGH!! Cliffhanger!!! Poor Elrohir. LOL For once his troubles are not Legolas' fault. Hopefully Legolas can get him out before anything bad happens.
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  • From ANON - HHS on March 01, 2004
    NNNOOOO!!!!Damn creatures!I hope that Legolas will find a way to Elrohir soon.
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  • From ANON - Deathangelgw on March 01, 2004
    oh that wasn't nice at all...leave us hanging like that!!! for some reason the castle and cocoons sound very familiar, but I'm not sure as to why juuuuuuuust yet. Mind muzzle...MORE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - Tinni on March 01, 2004
    What place to end. Any chance of a second chapter today?
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  • From ANON - kiki on March 01, 2004
    F**K noooo, why Elrohir.He is always getting crushed and mushed.Please let him be okay.
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on February 29, 2004
    Very very good though I do admit I am seriously woundering just what is up with legolas

    huggs
    louise
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  • From ANON - HHS on February 29, 2004
    Thank goodness Elrohir managed to survive his ordeal.
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  • From ANON - Tinni on February 29, 2004
    And the mending begins.
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  • From ANON - Rainien on February 29, 2004
    Well what do you know...Legolas actually seems to be catching on. Will wonders never cease? *S* Personally, I think that after this mystery is cleared up, Legolas needs to court his spouse. LOL I know I'd certainly like to see it.

    Once again, well done.
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