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Reviews for Greenleaf & Imladris 22-Bereth:To Have and To Hold

By : MPB
  • From ANON - Aelin-uial on February 22, 2004
    Sorry, I meant "now swathed". Can't see the keyboard with sweat running in my eyes.
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  • From ANON - Aelin-uial on February 22, 2004
    Hooray, another part of the story! But what is Legolas's problem now? Poor Elrohir! I've been meaning to ask you this for the last few instalments - is the sea-longing bothering Legolas at all? I don't recall you mentioning it. Of course, that's book-verse and not movie-verse.
    I'm going to read the prologue over and over just for the description of winter. It was 42 degrees (108 Fahrenheit) here today and an aerosol can in my bathroom exploded in the heat. My bathroom is not swathed in fragrant ribbons of shaving cream. It actually smells nice but how am I going to get it off the ceiling? Sorry, I'm rambling - the heat's making me delirious.
    Anyway, I'm very pleased to see a new part of the story and any descriptions of , ic, ice or freezing would be greatly appreciated.


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  • From ANON - Eresse on February 22, 2004
    Hi Tinni, please bear with me. This story isn't as long as Heart of a Prince so the resolution will come along much more quickly.

    Dearest Marie, concupiscence means a "strong appetite, especially for sex." In other words, sheer lust. ;) As for the misunderstanding, consider it one of omission rather than commission.

    To Deathangelgw & Inwitari, there will be hints throughout the story as to why Legolas acts as he does.

    Hope you all enjoy this story. Thanks for continuing to follow the series.








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  • From ANON - Inwitari on February 22, 2004
    AHH! What is happening to Legolas? why is he always so troublesome... please write more soon.. thank you
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  • From ANON - Deathangelgw on February 22, 2004
    *cocks an eyebrow, disturbed* Indeed...why doesn't he feel these 'spousal urges'?! My my, what a way to start it! Oh now I can't wait!!
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  • From MJLuvsPolar on February 22, 2004
    Yay, you're Ere Eresse! Oh but what an offering...I can already tell I'm going to be in agonies reading this one. I *do not* like the turn events have taken for Elrohir and Legolas. What sort of *misunderstanding* could bring about this almost abusive behaviour? Actually, I'm not sure I even understand what is happening between them- I'll have to go back and re-read chapter 1 I guess. and and I found another 'expedition' word - "concupiscence" which I'm assuming you're using in the context of illicit sexual desire? *sigh* I'm sorry if this review sounds scatty Eresse, of course I'm ecstatic that you've updated and I *am* intrigued as to what sort of evil is now wreaking havoc in Middle Earth. |^_~|

    Marie
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  • From ANON - Tinni on February 22, 2004
    *groan* What's up with Legolas now? Are we going to have another near death experience or a death?
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