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Reviews for In the Chains of Honor: Shades of the Past

By : Tanesa
  • From sivan325 on April 26, 2004
    More please...

    I still need more, as I still love what I read.

    Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic.

    Sivan
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  • From sivan325 on April 25, 2004
    More please...

    I still love what I read.

    Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic.

    Sivan
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  • From ANON - LadyDrea on April 19, 2004
    I've got so many questions to ask,but since U declared U're answering them in in the next chapters,I won't bother U asking them.***I've been reading your story with great pleasure and great suffering together;for yours looks really like a hopeless story.
    Painful and cruel is Legolas'life:I see no happy end for him from what I read and this makes me feel like not reading anymore.But I'm still keeping reading..hopehope lies for a happy ending,yes,after so much suffering!^_^
    *bows* Your Drea.
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  • From ANON - Rutaari on April 19, 2004
    This is... wow... *sigh*... amazing. I adore it. I feel so bad for Legolas, my heart is wrenching, its going to comg tearing right out of my chest. It helps that you're such a gifted writer, and that you add SO much detail! It's absolutely fabulous. I can not WAIT for more! Personally, I like happy endings, but anything you write I'm sure will xquixquisite. Also, I think thispterpter was great! Hope you'reger ger feels better soon!
    Fantastic job!
    Rutaari
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 18, 2004
    This is so good, but so so sad! Please give us the two endings because I can only enjoy the angst when I know there is happy ending.
    Poor Legolas! You write his pain so well I can practically feel it.
    I can't wait for more from the third age to watch his relationship with Glorfindel progress.
    Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Calenharn Elflover on April 18, 2004
    Chapter 8.... Ai, this is truly getting grim! Elessar is dead, and that after suffering/slavery (?) in the Kingdom of Men? Glorfindel has gone over Sea? Everyone has been alienated by Legolas? He is condemned to remain on the Hither Shores? Ai!

    I truly would like a happy ending... or at least a not unhappy ending. It is certainly looking less and less likely.

    Apart from the content, I would like to comment that the writing quality seems to have improved over the last few chapters, with respect to writing mechanics. There are fewer typos, errors of grammar/spelling, errors (presumably) from cut-n-paste editing. I don't know what the problem was in some of the earlier chapters (it wasn't extreme, but it was enough to be annoying), but it seems to have been fixed, and that gladdens me. A well told tale should not be marred by these sorts of things.


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  • From ANON - Buttercup on April 18, 2004
    Wow, this was a heartbreaking chapter to read, so much pain; it almost brought me to tears! I do hope that this story has a happy ending, for Legolas has suffered so much that he has earned it. Poor baby. :o)
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  • From ANON - Iraci on April 11, 2004
    Hi. I just wanted to tell you that your story is so deep. I really like reading it. I just hope Legolas won't have a sad end. Please just tell me that you're not going to kill the poor elf at the end or make him to lost his hope or something... I need to know before continue reading it.
    Congratulations. Yoe a e a great writer.
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  • From ANON - rose on April 09, 2004
    Please, more, more, please, quickly, and , wo, wow, this is incredible, please write more.
    Rose
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  • From Yakkorat on April 08, 2004
    Gah! Holy JESUS, woman!!! I am so wrapped up in this story!!! Good, GOD, poor Legolas! I ache so badly for him that my HAIR hurts! And I'm just dying to see him in loving, caring hands... Just... AHHH!!! I am impressed beyond coherency! Write write write write write!!! Must have MORE!!!
    Love,
    Julie-Rae
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  • From sivan325 on April 08, 2004
    Again wonderful chapter.

    Free as he wanted to be...

    I still love what I read, more please, soon?

    Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic.

    Sivan
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  • From ANON - giggle on April 08, 2004
    Well I am glad that Legolas is away from the Mirkwood bullies that kept beating him up but he certainly seems to want out of life. He doesn't know that Elrond and Glorfindel would be very nice to him. Much nicer than his father anyway. He was like a Timex watch, he took a lickin' and kept on tickin'. Gracious did they ever make hambuger out of him.
    The Imladris group needs to haul him out of that river, clean him up, put him on a horse and get him to safety. I am thrilled that the Mirkwood group didn't manage to kill him. I want Thral tol to be disappointed just as much as I want Glorfindel to finally have a loving relationship with this poor prince. giggle
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  • From ANON - Buttercup on April 08, 2004
    Finally, he is away from those wretched guards... Excellent update :o)
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  • From ANON - Steph on March 31, 2004
    ch 6 - Glorfindel's character is really well done in this. I love how much time you spend on his description, and in hea head space. And in regards to your author's note; I agree that this is not too closely linked to the storyline of Feud. I have been reading that story from the get go, and though there are similar themes of fallen grace, this is a piece all its own, clearly. I'm so glad you updated. I'm loving every second of it!
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  • From sivan325 on March 31, 2004
    Wonderful chapter.

    I still love what I read.

    Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic.

    Sivan
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