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Reviews for In the Chains of Honor: Shades of the Past

By : Tanesa
  • From ANON - Anon on March 13, 2004
    >> To Kryspen, I foresee that it will be fairly long, so you are right.> I think I’ve got the ‘H’ pretty well laid out...> however I’m not as comfortable with the ‘C’ as you put it, so if you would like you could give me some suggestions later on.
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  • From ANON - Steph on March 13, 2004
    Hey, what do you mean it will be a while until the good stuff? This has been awesome from the get go. I was thrilled that you updated, because I've had this story on my mind these last few days. It has all the elements I love; Hero Legolas, injustice on the part of Thranduil, and the interest and respect of both Elrond and Glorfindel towards our lovely Prince. Lovely! I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - giggle on March 08, 2004
    Well this sounds like a good tale. Full of angst, horror, elf sex, mpreg (one of my favorites) and unrequited love. Or requited love but with star crossed lovers. I never tire of this in all combinations.
    It was nicely written and wasn't too wordy.
    As far as AU goes for me personally all works besides those of the good professor are AU. Peter Jackson's movie is AU. Also Christopher Tolkien is AU. I enjoy and appreciate what they have given us but only the professor's own words for publication are canon.
    I also appreciate what fan writers share with us. I am unable to write anything more complicated than a grocery list so I need fanon writers to feed my obsession. Thank you in advance for a new story. giggle
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  • From ANON - Cara on March 07, 2004
    Ummm . . . I'm confused. I like this fic and it has great potential, but it's quite hard to work out what's going on. It might be an idea to use a character's name (or at least a description) instead of loads of "he"s, especially wyouyou're moving from one character to another. Otherwise very good, with plenty of description and scene-setting - hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kryspen on March 07, 2004
    Kiril! Most intriguing! And it appears we're in for a lengthy tale [which I LOVE] as it begins way before 'The Hpbbit' and through 'Lord of thr Rings'? Excellent.
    I don't mind the rough stuff at all, being a major H/C addict... but do look forward to that eventual 'C'.
    Riveting beginngint... You've definitely got my attention!

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  • From ANON - Buttercup :o) on March 06, 2004
    This is an excellent start! Very well written.
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