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Reviews for WEST WIND OVER EDORAS

By : Silverfrost
  • From ANON - Blue Magic on April 09, 2004
    Whew - there is all of life in this chapter, a binding of two hears, death, the birth of a baby. It is all here. I lvoe that it reminds us what a hyusical world this is. Women give birth where they have to , everyone fights when they have to, it is all about doing what needs to be done. Morwen reunited with her chldren is so powerful for me. As a mother, the scene where she sends them off to be safe just about killed me.

    My very famovirte moment in the chaper, is Legolas drawing from the tree, like the tree from the earth. It was perfect.
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  • From ANON - Blue Magic on April 09, 2004
    Rozzan, I just love this chapter - there is so much here that is WONDERFUL. I love the language lessons. If I were going t learnElvish, I'd start with I desire you and I love you too!

    Herons are an interesting choice - Do you know they mate for loife? It's a tradition in some native American nations to give a heron feather as a wedding present. In ase you an use that....

    I love the line about feeling the music in her body, since they have to be quiet and can't make any noise. It's the sensuality in the scene that makes it so sexuallly charged. Does that make sense to you? Keep inspiring me, my friend....

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  • From ANON - ACE on April 07, 2004
    I really love this story, please keep updating. It is coming along very well, i can't wait to rest the rest of it!
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  • From ANON - Angel on April 06, 2004
    Rozzan,

    Yet another beautiful chapter! This time wraught with tension and drama and danger as the warg's attack! Love this pulsing between the beautiful explanation of the Eldar and Edain through to Legolas' and Rowannen's pledging to each other, witnessed by Aragorn and Eowyn! This is incredibly well done! Then the threat of the Warg attack, combined with the pregnancy and birth. Powerful stuff, so much happening, creating create tension and drama that is fast-paced and ever moving. Left me feeling anxious, thank goodness I know Legolas will return or I'd be having a slight heart attack about now.

    As ever you amaze me with your wonderful ability to capture emotion and scenery in such a magical way.

    Love it, and as always await the next chapter with pleasure.

    Angel
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  • From ANON - Doreen on April 04, 2004
    Incredible! Phenomenal! Fantastic! Wow! Okay, I think I am out of the appropriate adjectives to use for your story. All I will say now is, More, please!

    Doreen
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  • From Threthiel on April 03, 2004
    Rozzan, what can I say? I love it. You keep me wanting more. Your character descriptions are great and I can just shut my eyes and see it all happening. Also, thanks for your help with my own story. Love Ya, Red
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  • From ANON - Ithilin Palandriel on April 01, 2004
    “Gods! Legolas.” I hear Aragorn’s voice in the darkness. “You managed to keep quiet tonight, but did you know you made the very ground shake! Can we get some sleep now at last?”
    I thought I was going to laugh my arse off. You might want to take a look at my "Of Quarrels anmenmen" and "Mornie a Estel" on Fanfiction.net. I did something similar. I love how you have done this. You do need to separate the quotations from the paragraphs, though. And some of the dialog is run together. General semantics type of thing. But as ever I love your story.
    Ithilin
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  • From ANON - Angel on April 01, 2004
    Hi Rozzan, it's me...just finished reading Chapter 7 and what can I say...I know I keep repeating myself but I do love this story. Beautiful, evocative and enchanting, it has a touch of sadness, desperation, yet it's uplifting and filled with hope. Your words capture everything perfectly, like this“Ano“Anor is Sindarin for the sun, that is you, red and gold and warm and burning. Ithil is the moon, that is me, mysterious and cool.”

    It is just perfect! There is magic in your words, and I'll never tire of reading your writing. Now that you've started I demand :-) that you never quit! It would be a tragedy!

    And Legolas explaining about being a stranger amongst the fellowship and would have felt worse without Aragorn is pure genius!

    Oh my God and the section with Ro's bird...her letting it go and the unspoken message as to why she is, had me in tears! Wow, your words move me so much, Rozzan!

    And theu nou not only make me cry but leaving me laughing at the end! You have such a great talent. I personally feel a great story is born from a writer who has the ability to capture the scenery without boring, which you do perfectly, to make one feel what the characters are feeling, which your writing does and to envoke strong emotions, like sadness, joy, arousal, and happiness, which you do with your writing. Just keeps getting better and better and better!

    I love this story so much. My heart actually aches when reading it, because it really is that beautiful!

    Angel
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  • From ANON - Phairesse on April 01, 2004
    Oh wow sooooooooooooooo romantic
    poor Aragorn :)
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  • From ANON - katy on April 01, 2004
    BRILLIANT NEW CHAPTER!! (7)
    ...I'm feeling a bit weak kneed after that 'ground shaking' finale!
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  • From ANON - Reader on March 29, 2004
    Please, continue your story. It's so sweet and romantic. I have read some fics about Legolas, you your fiction is the most beautiful. And It was so good to make it from two sides of view. Great! Interesting, will he bind her in future or it has already happened? Your aealleally good writer. May be, because your alredy said some words about Eomer, you will write a fiction with a romance about him. But please, please, don't bring Lothiriel in your story (if you will decide to write:-)), i just hate her, i din't know why, but I thing she is not a good match for Eomer!
    Anyway, the romance between Legolas and Rowannen is a perfect idea. I hope their love will grow stronger. Thanks alot for a good scene of love too.
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  • From ANON - Blue Magic on March 28, 2004
    Whew!!!! This story is amazing! I can't begin to say how impressed I am that your language is so gorgeous and poetic and at the same time you wrote some of the best, leave-me-breathless steamy scenes I've read. I can hardly wait for the next update!!!
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  • From ANON - Ithilin Palandiriel on March 26, 2004
    Hehehehehehe! Oh yeah! That was a REALLY good ride. I want him to do that to me! Your descriptions are overwhelmingly beautiful and erotic. I found myself pushed over the edge. I wish I could write my scenes like that.
    Ithilin
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  • From on March 24, 2004
    I love the intimacy that you have built here. I just could not stop reading. Your descriptions are so vivid and beautiful even writing in first person(my personal bane as it is difficult for me to really get the entire picture across). I have enjoyed reading this story I hope you continue and bitter-sweet endings are always fun to read. Happily ever after doesn't alway have to happen even in romantic fiction. I can't wait to see where you take this. I will be putting this on my rec read list. You are very talanted don't ever let anyone tell you otherwise.
    Ithilin
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  • From on March 23, 2004
    U R KILLIN ME HERE! I love the way that this is written, my compliments to you. Very flowing and romantic..keep it up and give us Chapter 5...PLEASE!!!!
    Blessed Be
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