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Reviews for Princes Three: The Beginning

By : nuwing
  • From ANON - Sheeijan on April 14, 2004
    Awww, that was sweet. I'm happy that Legolas has finally come to an understanding. I'm happy they all got to have a good romp in the proverbial sheets. I'm happy that Legolas gets to wear both colors in his hair (man, those twins are bound and determined to make it known to every elf that Legolas is theirs, aren't they?). I'm happy that Glorfindel and Erestor were able to help Legolas out, and do we get any smut with those two, btw? I'm just plain happy with everything, right now.

    I hope we get to see the three of them interacting and stuff in public. Haven't seen too much of that (outside of the party), that would be kind of neat. Not trying to pressure you or anything, just throwing out a random idea.

    I like how you write the dialogue, it fits how I imagine it to be.
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  • From ANON - Jasmine on April 14, 2004
    Thanks for the long chapter!!! Impressed, intrigued, and entertained, as always - and looking forward to more! :)
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  • From nuwing on April 14, 2004
    Thanks for the info : 0 (gasps in dismay) My canon critic has failed me (he-he: just kidding,Lady A.)...I'll check it out, when I'm done with this installment!
    Minuial
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  • From ANON - Hyperbole on April 14, 2004
    I'm in chapter 3 so far - good story BTW - and I found one minor mistake:
    The number of recorded twins in LotR/Silm is 4, not three. The other pair of twins was Elrond's es, es, Eluréd and Elurín, brothers of Elwing. When the sons of Fëanor attacked Menegroth to take the silmaril from Dior (son of Beren and Luthien, successor to the throne of Doriath after Thingol's death), Dior's sons were captured and abandoned to die. Their sister escaped with the survivors of the Kinslaying (of which the fall of Doriath was the second of three) and settled in Arvernien (the havens of Sirion) and eventually married Ëarendil and parented another of that list of twins.

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  • From ANON - Am on April 14, 2004
    =(
    awwwww
    hope things turn out ok

    This has been a great story so far.
    I'm glad I found it and I look forward to more.
    Am
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  • From ANON - attirb on April 11, 2004
    Whoa!
    It's good!
    So chateyatey-bittersweet!
    :-)
    Please continue!
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  • From ANON - kirameki on April 10, 2004
    Omygosh! That was so sad! Poor Elladan, I want to huggle him! Aiya, that was painful. Though I can understand why Legolas would need time to sort out his feelings. It's not everyday that your best friends (twins no less) tell you they BOTH love you. I do hope they all make up in the next chapter... Which I hope you won't make us wait long for. Not after a cliffie like that. ^_~ Oh, and I like the endearment the twins have given Legolas. It's sweet. ^_^ So was how the twins braided their beads into his hair. So cute. ^_^
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  • From on April 10, 2004
    This is a wonderful story... I love the detail that you have put into describing the growing relationship between the twins and Legolas. I very much look forward to your next chapter :o)
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  • From on April 10, 2004
    This is a wonderful story... I love the detail that you have put into describing the growing relationship between the twins and Legolas. I very much look forward to your next chapter :o)
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  • From ANON - kirameki on April 09, 2004
    First off, I would like to thank you for reviewing my own story. ^_^ It made me happy.
    Now, onto the actual review. I must say this was a totally awesome chapter. I loved how they gave Legolas the gift of seeing them together, when they never let anyone before him do so. And how you portrayed it was just so beautiful. I also love how in the last chapter you made legolas particularly assertive and commanding during their love making. Too often he's portrayed as the submissive type. ^_^ It was also quite original. I don't think I've seen that before in a fanfiction w/ Legolas and the twins. Hmmm... And as for the 'talk' the next day, well I can't wait. ^_^ Me wants more. Eh heh. I just love Legolas & the twins. SO much fun. Heh heh. SO I look forward to your next update (as always :).
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  • From ANON - Elie on April 08, 2004
    Oh wow!
    This just keeps getting better and better!
    Keep up the GREAT WORK mellon-nin!!
    Can't wait for more! *bits finger nails in anticipation*

    -Elie
    xxx
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  • From ANON - Jasmine on April 08, 2004
    Mmmmm.... that was tasty! Really cool how you described the twins fusing - surprised me quite effectively.

    I can't wait for the talk - please update soon!! :)
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  • From kirameki on April 05, 2004
    Oh my! *fans herself* phew. Talk about hot elfin'in'. I hope you don't make us wait for the rest. And 'Las' answer had better be a "yes". ^_^ You certainly have made my day. ^_^ I loved how you got Elrond in on their games before he realized he'd better shut up because they weren't talking about food. *snicker* I was cracking up in my school's computer lab. I hope no one thinks I'm unhinged. But then again I do read and write so much about the twins... maybe they rubbed off on my. And of course, there's wise old Glorfindel. I wonder if he suspected, or was saying it out of the fact that he trully didn't want to know. Hmm... Once again you've given me a delicious chapter to sink my teeth on. And I needed one, I don't get any food, I'm just a poor college student. -_-;
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  • From ANON - kirameki on April 05, 2004
    Another delightfully delicious interlude. I loved how you used the conversation from the first interlude to correspond with the events of the second. Now I'm hungry for some cinamon buns with honey... wait a minute, what am I saying, I don't even know what they taste like! ^_^ Ah, well, does it even matter? Nope, not really. Actually, I'd much rather have Legolas and the Twins. Wonder where I can find me some of those? ^_~
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  • From ANON - Sheeijan on April 05, 2004
    Well, I'm glad that Elladan managed to get his turn at the honey butter without the interruption of distracting side dishes. Fair is fair, after all. You've managed to push off the talk, which is killing me. Guess I'll have to mollify myself with all the hot, steamy, sweaty action you've got going on. However will I cope? *evil grin*
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