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Reviews for Stand and Deliver!

By : Sal
  • From ANON - haligh on March 26, 2005
    this was wonderful :)
    the story had a great plot and the characters had depth
    keep going!

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  • From ANON - Sal on July 18, 2004
    I'm not sure if the song that you're on about is the same as the poem that gave me the bunny, but if not they are very similar. I really recommend the poem - excellent verse and very sad at the end.
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  • From ANON - BlackCat9 on July 09, 2004
    “No. Dominic, who is this man?”

    “William, I have no idea. Do we care?”

    “I think not.”

    YAY!!!!!!!!That's an ending I like!! Left me with a smile... And would you know ti my thought of you basing this on a song caught so hard in my throat I forgot all about that Dominic would not let Billy die without a try to save him...Silly me...*Blushes* Any how I loved it! It was very oringinal... in writing and other characters... and the plot itself was interesting, amusing and I dare say oringinal now that I actually think about it...(It wasn't as close to the song as I thought it was...I guess I made a silly asumption and I am sorry to you for the mistake! Fabulously done, hun!!!!
    ~BlackCat9~
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  • From ANON - BlackCat9 on July 09, 2004
    Claret Velvet?...hums a tune... "A coat of Claret velvet and breeches of brown doe skin,y fiy fitted with nar a wrinkle..." Maybe it's just me, I love that song...If you have no clue what I am talking about then you are not basing this story story on Loreena mcKennit's "Highwayman.." Though I knid of hope you're nto because of what happens in the end....won't say incase anyone reading the reviews haven't heard the song... Now onto the review of the story...lol
    I like this style of writing it. It thrusts you foreward to where the story is juiciest instead of staying with Dominic becoming Billy's partner it's like you say screw that...Dom's with Bill so deal...LOL...I like it!!! Very interesting. and since I stopped halfway through the second chpater to write this I am going to rn arn and continue my readings...LOl
    ~BlackCat9~
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  • From ANON - Flick-chan on April 27, 2004
    That was beautiful. Just beautiful. Amazing character descriptions. Fabulous language. An incredibly original idea. This fan-fic had it all. You should be very proud of your work; it's full of thought provoking imagery aenarenarios. Trust me, if half the people who wrote fan fiction wrote it half as well as you do, then there would be no hope of anyone becomming an author; there wouldn't be enough publishers! Right, I've babbled long enough - excellent work. I commend you most highly, and will definitely be on the look out for more work from you. Fabulous job!
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  • From ANON - Nariel_Skye on April 24, 2004
    OMG.......*drools* damn its good......you got me listening to adam and the ants now.....great song.......great story....keep up the great work!

    ~willow
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  • From ANON - Mrs Silmarwen on April 01, 2004
    The most original fic I have ever read! What beautiful use of language. I especially liked this sentence: "Across the water in Southwark and in the narrower alleys of the town itself whores plied their thankless trade." Wow! The story is very romantic and I really wished I was Lord Monaghan. *I bow for thee!*
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  • From Legyviel on March 30, 2004
    oh my god this is so cute!
    I love dominating Billy and the robber idea is a stroke of pure genius!
    please update soon!
    *cheers and kisses*
    ~Legyviel
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