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Reviews for Greenleaf & Imladris 29 - Aduial: Soul of a Knight

By : MPB
  • From ANON - leggylover on April 11, 2004
    sory!new poem i made up after reading Greenleaf and imladris 29 Apr. 11th, 2004 @ 11:16 am
    I weep as i think of you,
    I wish you were just sleeping.
    I weep as I think of you,
    think of what we've lost.
    I weep as I think of you,
    you're promise to hold on,we will meet again.
    I weep as I think of you,
    I try to fall not to despair,
    I weep as I think of you,
    As I wait for your return,
    I laugh as we meet again,
    As I feel your lips on mine,
    I cry out as I feel you,
    As you fill me with your love,
    I feel as I'm with you,
    Safe in my arms again you are just sleeping,
    We are now at journey's end,
    I love you with all my heart.
    we are safe now,
    We will be toge til till the end of time.

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  • From ANON - HHS on April 11, 2004
    This almost brought me to tears.Again.Legolas and Elrohir are almost reunited.MUCHO KUDOS!!!
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  • From ANON - leggylover on April 11, 2004
    i have followed your stornce nce the beginning and i thought of a poem.

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  • From ANON - Sian on April 11, 2004
    "Yea" dancing around happily... Wonderful. Do we get to enjoy Elrohir growing up with Legolas beside him then regaining his memories??? Another wonderful, beautful chapter. Thanks
    D
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  • From ANON - Tux on April 11, 2004
    *Melts into a puddle* Wonderful, just wonderful! I am at a loss for words!

    *Hugs* Tux


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  • From ANON - Kym on April 11, 2004
    Excuse while I sit here impatiently hitting the reload button. :) Loved this series from the beginning, and still loving it now.
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  • From ANON - martouf59 on April 10, 2004
    Only one thing to say.I LOVE YOUR STORIES>
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  • From ANON - lego forever on April 10, 2004
    What a nice way to start Easter morn reading two additional chapters. I anticipate that it's going to be hard, complicated path for the two lovers but that will bring their reunion even sweeter in the end. And of course your brilliant writing will guarentee the reading of this series more heartfelt and fulfilling. Wow, I swear I have picked up some old English from you and made conversation for me a little more literary than I would be capable of.
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  • From ANON - Brin on April 10, 2004
    Damn it! You made me cry again ... so sad and yet so beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Tux on April 10, 2004
    I think seeing Legolas trying to live on was actually sadder than Elrohir's death! I felt so sorry for him having to tell Elrond and Celebrian. I hope he's back by the time Elladan arrives - what a nice surprise that would be!
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  • From ANON - HHS on April 10, 2004
    NNNNOOO!!!!Elrohir,please come back now!!!
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  • From ANON - Anita on April 10, 2004
    And here I am again, but now for the newly added chapter about Valinor. Quite beautiful they are too, really lovely. I believe that in my very first review of the first part I said that you write very discriptive...this just proves that once again I am right *bg* I could see Valinor, and the homes that have been build there, clearly before me. Good work (as always)!!
    Now, I saw 'TBC'...so, I wonder what will come up next :)
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  • From ANON - Dark Angel on April 10, 2004
    Wow these 2 chapters lifted my spirits. So we know that Elrohir will return and I just hope it will not take too long, I feel sorry for Legolas :(.

    Thank you so much for posting 2 ch. at once :)!!
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  • From ANON - Teri on April 10, 2004
    Oh my God! I can't believe you let that psychotic witch kill Elrohir. I can't stop crying. I am counting on a happy ending somehow. Elrohir has to come back to Legolas. He must. Please, please, please. I am holding onto the connection between Elrohir and Legolas to bring him back. Besides this horror, I am also feeling somewhat sad for Eldarion. He loses his father, mother and his entire elven family with whom he was raised and all so swiftly. Next chapter soon please. Besides the fact that this is so depressing, your writing is just awesome. :):)
    Take Care,
    Teri

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  • From ANON - lilith on April 10, 2004
    NO !!! OMG !!! You killed him !!! How could you kill him ?! Now my only hope is that you’ll keep your promise and that there will be a happy ending. Pleeeeeease ?
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