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Reviews for Greenleaf & Imladris 29 - Aduial: Soul of a Knight

By : MPB
  • From ANON - HHS on April 19, 2004
    Poor Legolas!!!Make Elrohir remember faster about their binding!Don't want Legolas to suffer anymore than he has to.
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  • From ANON - lilith on April 19, 2004
    Oh come one...Don’t you think Legolas suffered enough ? How long will Elrohir need to remember his love for Leggy ? I know that now, Legolas can finally understand what Elrohir went through on the beginning of their relationship, but I hope it won’t end the same way. I mean Elrohir almost died but you won’t make Leggy almost fade....right ? Or is that your plan ? Whatever it is, I hope everything will end well. Remember that you said that there will be a happy ending !
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 19, 2004
    With all due respect, how much longer do you intend to drag this out? You would have done best to end it after part twenty, and it now seems as though you're just putting these two through this misery for the sake of it. Your writing style is very good, and the story started off brilliantly, but I can't help thinking that it's been spoiled because it's been allowed to drag on too long, just because you felt you could.

    It's come to the point where I'm skim-reading the chapters because I'm desperate for something -- anything -- to happen, but it's stagnant angst to the last. There are two remaining reasons I'm reading this: the first is that I do still admire your way with words and that you have the ability to pin-point an emotion so precisely. The second is that I'm just desperate to see *something* happen -- I've been reading this for too long to just give up, although at times I have been tempted.
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  • From ANON - lego forever on April 19, 2004
    Very very sad. If Legolas suffers heartbreak because of Elrohir's affection elsewhere, my heart would break with him. Who could bear such hurt? No amount of circumspection and rationallization would ease the pain. Bottom line is, if that happens, Legolas' heart would break. The only question is whether Elrohir would be in time to prevent him from going to the Halls of Awaiting. Grimmmmmm and I am a coward because from this chapter on I will start reading from the end. I sleep now win acn aching heart.
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  • From ANON - Somali on April 19, 2004
    I was worried that something like this will happen. Afterall things never did run smoothly for our beloved couple. *sigh* I only hope that Elrohir does not take another lover. That will really break Leggy's heart. Next chapter soon, very soon please?
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  • From ANON - Lllll== on April 19, 2004
    *sigh* So beautiful...
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  • From ANON - crimsonvioleteyes on April 19, 2004
    You continue to write so beautifully. Legolas waiting so patiently for Elrohir to reach his majority was both poignant and touching. Are you sure you don't write professionally? You are better than most of the published authors I'vad, ad, and I've read a lot. I look forward to your next chapter.


    take care--

    cve
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  • From ANON - magda on April 19, 2004
    I wondered the other day whether Legolas is still wearing the ring and what would he tell Elrohir if the boy asked about it. I'm actually proud of myself. I foresaw an important plot point. Perhaps I have a gift. Go me!
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  • From ANON - jamie on April 19, 2004
    This is torture....but sweet torture nonetheless. :) I just really hope for a reunion soon, the pain Legolas must be feeling must be all consuming. To have what you desire so near yet so far must be difficult to endure.Great work again, update soooon? Put me out of my misery pls?


    Hugz,
    Jamie
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on April 19, 2004
    So so so so good ;) :) loved it, Aii lovely

    huggs
    louise
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  • From ANON - Aelin-uial on April 18, 2004
    I swear I've tied my brain into a complete knot trying to work out how this is all going to turn out. What's going to happen if Elrohir comes of age without remembering their binding? Would it be more painful for Legolas to know that his mate was with someone else, or to be with Elrohir himself knowing that he doesn't remember? I suppose that can't happen now that Elrohir knows that Legolas is bound. Elrohir may desire Legolas but would he ask him to be unfaithful to his mate? What if Elrohir thinks that Legolas is unavailable and chooses someone else as his lover?
    See? Brain all in a knot. I must say that I'm finding this is the most suspenseful story of the series. The only answer is for you to put me out of misery, please.
    And brilliant work, as ever.
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  • From angstyelves on April 18, 2004
    It's ironic - all those times I wanted to whap Legolas for being so dense, now I want to hit Elrohir! Still, I'm sure all will come right in the end and their love will be all the stronger for it!

    Tux
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  • From ANON - lego forever on April 18, 2004
    Very sad chapter ...but nsarysary. You owe usgivegive flesh to Gandalf's ominous words --you know, Legolas' hardly having strength once Elrohir reclaims him ;))))) And oh what an irony. He is now the oneing ing a ring to Elrohir who does not know of the binding much like when Elrohir gave him his ring during the time Legolas did not know that he was the Elf knight's binding mate. I love it when you do that. Again excellent maror aor an excellent chapter. Vividly described sorrow for Legolas and hints of jealousy (which started with the knife by the way) from Elrohir.
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  • From ANON - HHS on April 18, 2004
    Oh damn it!!Legolas almost made me cry!!!Reunite them now!!!
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  • From ANON - Dark Angel on April 18, 2004
    Wow this was very depressing chapter.. I feel soooo sorry for Legolas. But it's good that Elrohir can't remember him yet because I am sure that they won't be able to keep their hands off each other other ways, and that is not allowed untill few more years :/
    And that with the ring aww *sobs*
    Please please please PLEASE try and update daily... I shn'tn't be complaining but this fic has become like a drug for me and I need my daily dozes :P

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