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Reviews for Greenleaf & Imladris 29 - Aduial: Soul of a Knight

By : MPB

From ANON - halandleg4ever on April 15, 2004
I know I don't review your stories nearly enough as I should, but I just want to tell you I think that they are extremely well written. I love the plots, the way you portray the characters, and all the little details. I didn't love the pairing of Legolas and Elrohir until I read your stories. Excellent job, and I can't wait to read more!
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From ANON - Sian on April 15, 2004
Ah, so had for Legolas to await his Elf-Kinght growing up. But it's very sweet to see Elrohir as a ch Thi This sould enrich their relationship even more. Wonderful as always.
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From ANON - Anita on April 15, 2004
It must have been our reviews that made you write the first part of the latest chapter. I think we have all been assured now that such things would not happen and that steps were taken so that a curious, innocent and persistant Elrohir could not 'influence' Legolas in such a way.

For the second part...just in his 30s and already remembering his previous life. That must be very hard...I wonder how long it will take before he recalls his bond with Legolas.

Keep writing!
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From ANON - Somali on April 15, 2004
*sigh* I am utterly bewitched by your writing. Can you believe it? I actually came in at least five times to see if you had put up another chapter for today. Pathetic ne? *sigh* Luckily for me, the next chapter is up. I do pity Legolas. Holding himself back must have been hard on him. Furthermore, he's refusing all lovers as well. But on the other hand, at least Elrohir is back with him!!!! Yes, no longer lost in the halls of waiting. No more denial, no other conniving woman to steal him away! Yes! Let's hope that Legolas survives his blue balls period *grins* More?????
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From ANON - Aelin-uial on April 14, 2004
Things are going so well, that there must be some major angst waiting just around the corner. Is Merenwe lurking around somewhere, waiting to pounce when Elrohir is old enough? Or do you have something else evil planned? Can't wait to find out!
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From ANON - daisy on April 14, 2004
Dear Eresse
Love it!
Bit troubled by the reaction of the nurse, though. Is she misinformed of the past relationship of Legolas and Elrohir, or
is she simply overprotective of Elrohir ? I get the feeling that she IS ( at least was) feeling sort of inadequate because Elrohir dose not seem to show any attachment toward her at all, plus the incident in this chapter...overeacting, I know. ;) I think I'm still traumatized by that what's-her-name-who-killed-Elrohir that I must suspect any female character who comes across Elrohir or Legolas, sorry. BUT, I know for sure that the last few sweet chapters are but the calm before the storm! If it's going to be as long as " Calenlass" then I'm sure of it.
I love how Legolas is now the center of admiration around him. Before valinor, it was rather Elrohir who seem to catch people's eyes all the time (for all the good reasons, of course). I say Legolas' beauty was too ethereal for the people in middle earth.. :)
Anyway...
Thank you so much for regular updates!!! You make me so happy! Thank you!! Thank you!! Thank you!!!!

Daisy
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From ANON - lego forever on April 13, 2004
I am relieved that Elrohir is slowly recalling things that happened to him in Middle Earth. I am just bothered at bit by Almariel's reactions. Did she not trust Legolas? How can she even think about Legolas with malice however slight? I hope she's the only one to do so. Excellent chapter as always. I love how you would inject statements Elrohir uttered before into his new life.
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From ANON - Louise_oblique on April 13, 2004
very very good :) jeez so prosumptous little thing ;) cute

can't wait for more

huggs Louise_oblique
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From ANON - Anita on April 13, 2004
You really spoil us with all these chapters :) But I don't mind! Hehe...

Anyway, I am enjoying Elrohir's childhood especially because of the memories...I was not quite sure if the Elrohir 'reborn' would be the same Elrohir as the one in Middle earth. But, the more I read, the more reassured I am that they are indeed the one and the same.

This also shows how much Celebrian and Elrond trust Legolas...to let your young child go with a mature elf to whom he is essentially bonded...I believe it will be especially hard in the last 5 years before Elrohir reaches maturity, all those hormones (if elves have those *g*) and all. Well, I am babbeling now, so I'll just shut up and read the chapter again!!
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From ANON - Jasmine on April 13, 2004
Eeeeks! I sure hope people don't get the wrong idea from Legolas allowing himself to 'sleep with' little Elrohir. Hehe - and as Elrohir grows into his more adult form, I imagine its going to get pretty hard for poor Leggy to keep such trysts chaste. Please update again tomorrow!!
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From ANON - jamie on April 13, 2004
Greatest apologies for having not reviewed in such a long time, too wrapped up in my Uni dissertation. But I have been following your fic faithfully like the addict that I am! I still need my daily dose of Greenleaf and Imladris no matter what.....hehe

I have loved this particular instalment since it's conception, from their great bond to Elrohir's death to his rebirth. Every single chp is written so beautifully they bring tears to my eyes. I still can't believe you made me cry so much in that chp where Elrohir 'passed away'. I've never been reduced to such a state from any fanfiction before, and that's the effect your moving writing has on me. I can only thank you for touching me with your stories. I will mourn the day when this series ends and you stop writing. You are an amazing writer!

I will be awaiting your next chp! Elrohir's early years with Legolas is just so heartwarming..... ^____^

Hugz,
Jamie
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From ANON - magda on April 13, 2004
That was yet another great chapter. Rather hard for Legolas, though. But it will be even worse for him when Elrohir is nearer his majority. He will look all grown up but he will be still beyond Legolas's reach. "Tradition frowned upon Elvestheitheir minority satisfying their concupiscence in partnership with another. More abhorred was the taking of a child by a mature Edhel, even in the name of instruction." - do you recognize that one? I'm sure it will be pure agony for him to wait through those last years. Because I'm sure he will wait. Legolas, the decency personified. It should be funny.
I'll let you know that I think this whole series is single most inspired piece of fanfiction on the whole net. I just cannot get enough of it. I visit this site at least three times a day with naive tht tht that you've taken pity on me and updated. What's more, I live in Poland, the time difference is not that easy to sort out so I probably look for your updates at all the wrong times - I suppose even you can't post anything new while you're sleeping. Frustrating, really. The only consolation for me is the fact that it seems that I'm not the only one so hopelessly addicted to your sto.
A.
And there I get to the point. You can't possibly think about ending this series. What will happen to us poor readers? We will certainly fade from grief ( I hope it's not very painful ).
Then, on second thought, you are right, Greenleaf & Imladris must come to an end. Elrohil is no longer of Imladris; he was born in Artirion. Therefore Greenleaf & Artirion would be much more in order *hint*. That must have been what you meant. After all, Elves are immortal, they have long eventful lives *hint hint* that would be so interesting for you to write about *hint hint hint*. Especially such fantistic samples of the species as Legolas and Elrohir. *can I get any more obvious?*
Please?

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From ANON - Nia on April 13, 2004
I am amazed at how you always manage to change the plot so that we see their incredible love anew...
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From ANON - Sheeijan on April 13, 2004
This series gets more fascinating and beautiful the more I read it.

I've been thinking rather deeply about the rebirth of our lovely Aduial. First, it is a testament to the beauty and strength of his fea that he was reborn so quickly. He must have really impressed Namo.

Initially, I was getting frustrated with Legolas for not contemplating the possibility of Celebrian's and Elrond's child being Elrohir, but it finally occurred to me he was expecting Elrohir to come back to him whole. Which leads me to Elrohir's childhood. I am glad that Legolas finds it fascinating to watch Elrohir grow up. The thought of it made me feel a little odd, at first. Watching your lover go through diapers, potty training, the awkwardness of adolescence (although I think Elrohir would be fairly easy on this subject)... I shuddered at the thought. I was finally able to reconcile this after this last chapter, however. I think I see that for Legolas, this isn't quite yet his Aduial. The Elrohir that he is helping raise is not yet his Elf Knight. Legolas is still waiting for *his* Elrohir to emerge, and that will not happen until Elrohir reaches his majority and regains his memories.

It will be interesting to see Elrohir regain his memories.

My hackles wen whe when I read about the other elves who are so interested in Legolas. I can't blame them for being so dazzled by his comeliness, but my protective instincts reared up. I will definitely feel smug satisfaction once Elrohir is back and they see how foolish they were to try to intervene.

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From ANON - lego forever on April 12, 2004
I miss Elrohir too. Such brilliant writing makes you feel Legolas' loneliness to the depths of your very soul. Legolas' fidelity and valour is so touching especialf yof you consider how often they coupled then because it best expresses their feelings for one another. . I wonder if Elrohir would be as "promiscuous" with both males and females as he was before -- before he fell in love with Legolas. If he would re-live that phase of his life before his memories of Legolas is fully restored -- that would be quite devastating for Legolas although he has to accept it. Well, so much for my musings. Thanks for this wonderful chapter! Thanks for the daily updates!
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