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Reviews for Breaking the Rain

By : AmoureuxDeSang
  • From EmmaSmith on April 22, 2007
    PLEASE, Please, Please update I love this fic SO much and I want to know what happens next!
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  • From EmmaSmith on March 16, 2007
    PLEASE, PLEASE update soon LOVE this fic!
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on April 12, 2005
    Hey! Is our poor little girl going to get left out of the smut? If this is only slash, I'd like to know.
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  • From ANON - Lilslasher on February 13, 2005
    You have a wonderful story going here. I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of it.
    You were right, Viggo and Orli did need time together, glad to see they put it to good use. Make up sex is the best!

    Now you promised me handcuffs in this story, ok, maybe you didn't, the fine line I walk between reality and fiction often blurs, beside the point, I want handcuffs. Not on the chica, I'm not a freak, (alright, again the blurry fine line.) Let's just say I don't deal in het.
    After make up sex, don't we get kinky sex, hmmm? With handcuffs?

    Uh, in the story, gotta be careful what kind of invitations I give to people I actually know.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 29, 2005
    good so far one little problem orlando has a sun tattoo not a star:) and a elven 9 on his right hand
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  • From Kix on September 26, 2004
    Your story is very well writen, indeed. Its got a great story line too, those two together make it very very cool. Its great, I also hope to see when you'll be posting more!
    Because Dogs Cant Look Up,
    Kix
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  • From ANON - Kes on June 03, 2004
    Update soon, yes? :)
    Kessy
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  • From ANON - Wanderer on June 03, 2004
    eesh.........Docter Daddy at your service......what an ass. Castration would be good...using the papers from the Medical Bar that ban him from practising medicine! (ouch...paper cut! HA!)
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  • From ANON - trin on May 21, 2004
    Its good, I think you should write more. this is actually something a bit more intellegent then others.
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  • From ANON - Wanderer on April 29, 2004
    Wow....I'm really liking it thus far...it's packing a pretty powerful punch for so little given just yet. I look forward to updates:)
    Oh, and happy belated birthday :)
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  • From ANON - Shieldmaiden on April 17, 2004
    I very much like the changes..'s 's perfect....
    Really I mean evil Sean was a bit much... and i like him so much :)
    Thank you for the notiication e-mail

    bye
    Shieldi
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  • From Shieldmaiden on April 14, 2004
    Hpüing Viggo would go away?!
    Stuuuupid ;)

    But seriously now I have a little enquiry. Cause I find it extremly inconvenient to starta chapter and then add the rest in the same chapterthingy, you know what I mean - cause then you always have to double and triple check if there is something new...
    But it's up to you how you post :)

    hug
    Shieldi
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  • From ANON - amoureux on April 14, 2004
    i apologize for the short chapters, but i also go back and reedit them. see, if i don't post them using the server as i type, i get confused and have to reedit a great deal after uploading. tried it, failed at it. it's back to just typing everything in for me. I have my mind set on a certain direction here, i just don't wand to reviel it. for a period of time, after the chapter with viggo, and orlando opening the door, i had a brain fart and suddenly didn't know what i wanted, and it's still possible that i might redo a great deal because i am just not completely satisfied with the past two chapters, one of which isven ven finished so i can still change. Personally, i want to do more with her inner pain right now, aka: the drug addiction. And I'm not saying, yet, what the doctor told viggo cause it's gonna be an interesting ending. i got it in my head, but don't want to give it away. sorry about the delays in getting it up, however.
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  • From ANON - Kes on April 14, 2004
    Okay, now this is going in a... weird direction. So you have this girl who's beeusedused, is addicted to drugs and alcohol and taken in by some stange guys. So far so good. But now you go and actually *tell* them about her past (abuse I should guess) and they *still* go and molest her? I mean, this whole evil!sean thing aside, what man with a bit of commen sense (and I'm talking about Viggo and Orli here) would go and just... snuggle up and kiss her? I liked where the story was going in the beginning, but now I'd really like to know what's going on on all their minds... maybe you have something coming up to explain it, but still. With these short chapters you're posting you leave the reader wonderin you you actually know what you're talking about. Explain, baby, I need more background on the girl.
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  • From ANON - Amoureux De Sang on April 11, 2004
    I'm not sure why i am always ing ing logged out. I'll have typed up a lovely chapter, just perfect to my wants and POOF!! i click save and find out i was logged out and loose it all. Now i am using word perfect to type it up in, lol.
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