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Reviews for The Pentanath: Adventures in the Avathar

By : Sienna
  • From ANON - Phairesse on May 04, 2004
    I finally had the chance to catch up with this
    Most interesting. I hope they stay together
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  • From ANON - Anais on May 03, 2004
    uh oh!
    boy, they're cute, but incredibly thick! but it does make angst, lovely lovely angst!
    Could we have soon another description or a travel in the Blessed Realm? I really love your atmospheres. And some action too! Fluff is nice, but, ah, adventure! that's the thing! I want to know more bout those strange new Elves!
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  • From ANON - Chris on May 03, 2004
    Wow! What a chapter! I need to go take a cold shower!
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  • From ANON - Anais on May 02, 2004
    so they're married now, right? stupid, intrusive gran'pa can't do anything, right? Or can he? (evil music, Darth Vader theme-like)
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  • From ANON - Anais on May 02, 2004
    I love your story, it's really well written and intriguing, and I love your vision of the Blessed Realm. So all not's perfect in paradise, hmm? These Elves are quite human I think, though they would probably hate to hear that.
    And about Haldir and Lisse: WELL IT'S ABOUT BLOODY TIME! *mumbles: stupid, over-complicated Elves*
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  • From ANON - Teri on May 02, 2004
    Holy! Holy! Holy! Heading for a long cold shower. :):):)
    Take Care,
    Teri

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  • From ANON - Teri on May 01, 2004
    Oh God, this just keeps getting more and more intense. I don't know who is more frustrating, Lisse or her grandfather. He is getting more and more dangerous. I was stunned to find out that Lisse's Guve Hall actually belongs to her grandfather and not her...that is until she marries. If Haldir marries Lisse her grandfather loses all. What a vile creature he is. I just simply cannot wait for more of the unfolding of this story. What a web of intrigue you weave. I love it.

    Take Care,
    Teri
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  • From ANON - Iamme on May 01, 2004
    Very Intersting!
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  • From ANON - Gwenny on April 30, 2004
    I meant ladders. Typing was never my strong point. lol
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  • From ANON - Gwenny on April 30, 2004
    I just wanted to review and let you know that I like your writting style. The plot is interesting and keeps me coming back for more. One question I have, though, is why are they standing on latters to get to the grapes? I've done a lot of farming and ranching in my time and I've never had to do that. Other that that, I love the story. :)
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  • From ANON - Jana on April 29, 2004
    I check your story before all others for updates. You are a talented writer. The emotion, depth and rich dialogue in this story are well appreciated.
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  • From ANON - Teri on April 25, 2004
    So many chapters, soooooo much fun. I am still so hooked on this story and again, I find your writing to be outstanding. I am so glad Niel and Orophin have come together. She deserves happiness too. The Valar needs to deal with that disgusting creep of a father/grandfather. I'm glad Lisse got a shot at the old buzzard and pissed him off. Poor Lisse thinks Haldir has a mistress. When he shows up, she will kick his behind. This darkness that spreads is giving me the creeps. I can't wait to find out what that is all about and how ill all affect everyone. I'm also dying to understand Haldir's mission.
    After all that writing, feel free to take a bit of a rest, just not too long. :):):)
    Take Care,
    Teri

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  • From ANON - Earina on April 22, 2004
    Wow! I don't think I have ever read a story that was so well written. It's like I can almost see the old book sitting on my desk. Have you ever considered writting professionally? Please post more as soon as you can.

    Earina
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  • From ANON - Teri on April 22, 2004
    Wow! I am so glad Haldir and Lisse have come together again even if it is a bit strained between them. Boy-oh-boy, this story is going for the twists and turns. I am loving the way you weave this. Congratulations on you new job and training. Sometimes real life has to come first. I happily await the next part...no pressure! :):):)
    Take Care,
    Teri

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  • From ANON - Talasi on April 21, 2004
    Cliffhanger!!! There is an excellent story. Please update soon. What does she have planned for him?

    Talasi
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