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Reviews for The Pentanath: Adventures in the Avathar

By : Sienna
  • From ANON - Teri on April 18, 2004
    Eadendir just doesn't get it. He lost his daughter and now his granddaughter. I'm glad Lisse moved out. But let me just say about Varda...WOW!
    Please more soon.
    Take Care,
    Teri

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  • From ANON - Serenityblack2000 on April 18, 2004
    Cliff Hanger!!! aaahhhhh. *faint .....Thunk ... falls out of chair*

    What happens next !!!!!!!!!!!!

    Update soon ....... Now ?? Ok Now ???

    How about Now? Ok , Ok, I will just have to wait. I love this fic!!

    Please continue........ Ok how about now?

    SB

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  • From ANON - Teri on April 15, 2004
    Eadendir is making me nuts! I wish Haldir would kick his butt. This is just so frustrating. I love this story and I simply cannot get enough. More please.
    Take Care,
    Teri

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  • From ANON - Talasi on April 12, 2004
    I am absolutely spellbound! Your descriptions of the culture, love lost, and their undeniable attraction to each other is wonderful! He is a very stubborn elf and needs to be taught a lession. For all his years, I have to agree with you that he is as muc inn innocent as she in certain matters of the heart. What better teacher than someone as led aed as himself. *sigh*

    Please update soon!

    Talasi
    Haldir Worshiper and Wanton Elfbanger
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  • From ANON - Teri on April 10, 2004
    I can't get enough of this story. Haldir is so frustratingly stubborn and so is Lisse. Frankly, I am getting sick at my stomach thinking about Lisse's grandfather meddling in her life they way he did with her mother's. I hope the Valar has better sense than to allow Haldir to be hurt again. That sea creature is also creepy. I'm dying to know what s ths that drives it so close to the shores. Could it possibly be something that Lisse's grandfather is causing and the reason he doesn't want Haldir around is that he is afraid Haldir will find out? Your story is so intriguing. Please write more soon.
    Take Care,
    Teri

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  • From ANON - Teri on April 03, 2004
    This has to be the most incredible story I have ever read. It is brilliant! I have read hundreds of slash and het fiction and this is the first story of its kind that I have read. Truly, I'm not sure anyone has written a story that involves the lives of the elves after they all left Middle Earth for Valinor. This story is intriguing and one of the most well written I've read in a long time. Considering this is a romance with Haldir as the primary character, you might want to post it on this particular website as it is devoted to Haldir fiction: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Julie_Fiannahive/ / This way your story gets read by even more people. I beg you to continue writing this story with consistent chapter postings on a regular basis. I have read some stories that take over a year to get finished because the chapters come out months between postings. Your story is captivating and I hope more people read this.
    Brilliant, just brilliant.
    Take Care,
    Teri

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  • From ANON - Zee on April 02, 2004
    What an awesome bningning. Rich, fluid imagery, fabulous emotional content. You have created a new atmosphere of what happened when Elves returned to Valinor - I want to know what lurks in the waters; I want to know what happ bet between Haldir and Min.

    I will be watching this one...
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