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Reviews for A heart's miscommunication

By : peniel
  • From ANON - nitpick on May 02, 2004
    Your story would lose nothing if you used no Elvish at all, at the moment there is too much of it. Single words are OK, but not whole sentences. Too bothersome to follow, especially as those odd characters often appear on the screen ted ted beyond recognition anyway. So much hard work going to waste.
    Still, your story, your choice. I can always skip such parts.
    Oh, by the way. Third Age elves speak Sindarin. Same goes for names, even when they are of Noldorin descent. Quenya is for scholars (the equivalent of Latin) and for ceremonial purposes. And for nostalgic moments of Exiles like Galadriel, who grew up with it.

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