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Reviews for Dark Journey

By : rigby
  • From ANON - MarzBar on August 10, 2005
    Thank you so much for the latest installment. I continue to hope that The Gifted One can heal Anaria before they get home. She needs to know that not only Legolas share her pain, Syshae does as well. Another beautiful story with the three bonded ones and I hope you give us more soon.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on July 21, 2005
    Thank you for the update. I love Heart Sister. I hope the four of them will be able to help each other heal from all their injuries, physical and psychological. More please.
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  • From ANON - Jaylen on July 21, 2005
    Hello Vaire,

    I am enjoying your stories immensely. Thankyou for updating the missing part to chap. 4. Poor Legolas!!

    Let me get this straight: Legolas and Syshae are 1st cousins and Syshae and Anaria are 3rd cousins. Am I getting this right?

    I was a little dissapointed with the start of this chapter, in that I was hoping you would go into more detail of Legolas' recuperation and what he went through before he met again with Haldir and Syshae. I wanted the details of how Glorfindal helped him. Legolas angst is always good!! I got the feeling that when Syshae healed Legolas' fae in the previous story, he didn't really understand what Legolas had gone through. You had made mention that he thought his grief was for Gandalf. I guess I feel a little put out that they don't understand what Legolas went through for them. So, we assume that Legolas is healed through the years and goes on the quest for whatever reasons and is reunited with his loves and we are now back to the ending of your first story - in reality starting a new story. I enjoy your writing very much - I just can't help feeling that you left out part of the story. Hopefully you might add it in later?? Please????

    Still enjoying your writing and looking forward to reading future posts,
    Jaylen
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  • From ANON - jaylen on July 08, 2005
    Yeah!! I am so glad you are updating this story. I really was dying to see what happened.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on July 07, 2005
    I am looking forward to our beautiful threesome interacting with Anaria. I found this story today, learned I needed to read Nightstar first so have just come back to this one. Ordinarily not a fan of male slash but the love story here is very compelling. More please.
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  • From ANON - Sian on July 14, 2004
    I take back all earlier comments about having any sympathy for Thranduil! Horrid-moving chapter, liking watching a train coming towards you and unable to out out of the way! I never dreamed when I read NightStar that Legolas had suffered that much. As always, written wonderful, emotional, descriptive, a real learning experience on how a real writer does it!
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  • From ANON - jadzia on May 13, 2004
    Cripes!! Can we figure out a way to put your Glorfindel in a box and send him my way??? Please??!!

    It is so great to see another story from you. I really enjoyed Nightstar and often wondered what happened during some of those missing years, especially to Legolas; so it's great to now see things from his side of life. Keep up the wonderful writing.

    *goes to cool off*
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  • From ANON - Jasmine on May 01, 2004
    I'm looking forward to more!! I just read your other tale when I saw this one, and now I've caught up to you - you're really an incredible writer, and your stories are quite original. I love your OC - a lot of people don't seem to have the courage to bring in somebody new. Please continue! Even if you haven't gotten many reviews, please know that there are a bunch of us who don't always review but are enjoying your work. (Sadly enough, I was only moved to review when I looked you back up and saw the horrible injustice of you only having 1 review!! That was something I had to fix, even if I can't add more than 1!) Again, please don't abandon us - 'cause I'm already hooked!!! :)

    Take care, too.
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  • From ANON - Sian on April 26, 2004
    Well since I have already sent you my comments and expressed how happy I was for the new story. Only one more thought. I wonder if Erestor reminded Thranduil of Syshae. They have the same coloring???
    D
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