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Reviews for Mea Culpa

By : imogenlily
  • From ANON - Marie on December 11, 2005
    Excellent story. Incredibly sad though - domestic abuse is such a horrible thing to write about. But you are doing a really good job here and I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 11, 2004
    i hope mark gets his ass kicked GGRRR poor Orli please write next chapter soon
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  • From ANON - Cerasi on August 10, 2004
    FINALLY!!! I looked almost every day to see if you ahd updated because I love this story and I am sooooo happy that you finally did. Great chapter. There was a lot of thinking, and if I could give constructive critisism I don't think that some of the reactions were very real. there was one in particular... which I cant seem to remember oh I remember now. When Viggo said basically that he loves Orlando not lovED, no one reacted to it. Maybe it was a typo and it was supposed to be loved but viggo said taht he is scared of how much he LOVES orlando and Orlando or Viggo didnt react to that. Just thought there shoudl be a reaction from Viggo at least, a biting of the tongue or something. Also there was a lot of thinking involved in between dialogue and it got kind of tedious to read through after awhile... or for me it did. Just an opinion though. Update soon! I love how this is unfolding!!

    Cerasi
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  • From sivan325 on August 09, 2004
    It was worth, and enjoyable...

    I love your story, and I hope that you will find your time to update this lovely and angsty story.

    Keep up the perfect work that you are doing with your fic.

    Sivan
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  • From ANON - celticdewin on July 21, 2004
    this story is sweet and touching. please e-mail me with updates!
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  • From ANON - Sivan on July 14, 2004
    More please...

    I'm eagerly cannot wait to read what will happen next.

    Please update soon.

    I still love what I read.

    Keep up the perfect work that you are doing with your fic.

    Sivan
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  • From ANON - loopyloo on June 30, 2004
    Ahh!!! Look what you did! You made me cry all over my new shirt!! *sob sob* but it's a good cry, i suppose...
    You can't stop there! I repeat, you can't stop there! Such a naughty evil writer to leave us poor souls hanging in mid air like that... tsk tsk... update soon! :)
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  • From ANON - Miyu on June 29, 2004
    Hi,
    Nice fic, I really like it. But...
    HOW COULD YOow cow could you end the last chapter like that. I want to know what will happen now! WRITE!
    Miyu
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  • From ANON - Kiril on June 29, 2004
    Starving are you? Maybe I can help with that. I am greatly enjoying your tale, the sorrows and the interactions between Viggo, Orlando, Dom and Lij. It is well-written and I am glad the chapters are long because it means more to read before I have to wait for more! Keep up the good work, and I hope Viggo can help Orlando without too many difficulties, poor Orli!
    Kiril Tanesa
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  • From ANON - cerasi on June 28, 2004
    *sobs* What a touching chapter! I love this story so mcuh! I can't wait for the next chapter. I just want a happy beginning, if you know what I mean. I want Orlando to remember everything that Viggo has said to him while he was asleep and while he was still with him. I kind of want Dom and Elijah to take a break and let Viggo spend his time with him. I want Viggo to go rlanrlando's bed and apologize. something like.
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    "Viggo leaned closer to Orlando, reaching out and tracing the air around his face, afraid to actually touch him. Afraid that touching him would hurt him. Afraid that he would turn away, or worse, lean back in to the familiar contact. His heart was aching, and he blinked away the tears that threatended to fall. He had no right to feel pain. This was all his fault. Evrything was Viggo's fault. He had caused the one person that he never wanted to hurt more pain than anyone should ever have to feel..."

    Then proceed to tell him how sorry he is about everything. Of course he kind of did this with Dom and Lij but I want Viggo to be the one to tell him. Of course you already have a plan but hey, it never hurts to tell the way I see it happening. Nevertheless I can't way for the next chapter, did I asay that already? Ah well, please update soon.

    Also I think that the first six chapters dragged a lot, there were too many flashbacks and talks about what happened and what should have happened and who was to blame and who was blaming who etc. etc. Keep up a faster pace. I understand that the info was vital to the story but it was still all thrown together. Spreading it out more would have helped a bit for the readers.
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  • From ANON - amy on June 28, 2004
    This story continues to excel and take my breath away. Your writing is crisp and clear and the story moves me to tears.
    I am so excited that Orlando finally woke up and has seen Viggo. I know it's going to be a long road to recovery but I can't wait to read it and I'm hopeful for a happy ending. Please?
    Anyway, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - L on June 28, 2004
    Awesome can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Danica on June 27, 2004
    HOLY SHIT! There better be another chapter by Thursday before 4!!!, Af, After that , I wont have access to a computer for a month! Please updates ASAP!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 27, 2004
    i can not wait for the next chapter please write it soon this story pulls at the heart strings*sob*
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  • From ANON - Rutaari on June 27, 2004
    *GASP* NO!!!!!!!!!!!! You can't...go... *gasp* Go back and keep writing, little missy! Right now!!!! Don't leave those eyes just staring! AAARRRGGG! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Rutaari
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