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Reviews for Check My Body All Night (extended edition)

By : boxcarglamour
  • From ANON - NEWENIT on May 28, 2004
    Oh, and melanie(as you call yourself) while that is your opinion about this author's writing....i beg to differ...it is you who is annoying!!!! What? Do you enjoy trying to bring people down? DO YOU THINK YOU COULD WRITE A GREAT EROTIC PIECE LIKE THIS? I doubt it, and if you do I WANT TO READ IT and see if you could even come close to writing this well!!! IN FACT THAT IS A CHALLENGE....let's see what you're made of huh?

    NEWENIT
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  • From ANON - NEWENIT on May 28, 2004
    Ummmmmm....holy......that was....umm.....HOT HOT HOT!!! VERY HOT!!

    CAN WE HAVE AN EXTENDED....EXTENDED VERSION???????? PUHHHLLLLLEAAAASSEE?????

    NEWENIT
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  • From ANON - melanie on May 04, 2004
    your grammar is bad, your way of writing is crappy, why are you posting this story other than to annoy people?
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 02, 2004
    okay... i am not lying here... that was the best Dom/Orlando fic I have EVER read! *drools* you write beautifully. I especially love your descriptions of their eyes. bravo!
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