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Reviews for Chain Lightning II: Sheet Lightning

By : islandwight
  • From ANON - Renee on March 01, 2005
    More, more, more! Please. You've got me hooked. I love this story!
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  • From ANON - Penny on January 26, 2005
    Now that's what I'm talking about! I am wondering though... Sean and Viggo ever? Billy and Dom? It would be hot! :-P

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  • From islandwight on October 17, 2004
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    anonymous slashytrashy@yahoo.com 2004-06-15 id # 234213
    Just when I thought it couldn't possibly get any hotter, you turned up the fucking heat! In the immortal words of Eddie Murphy's grandmother character in The Nutty Professor, "You made me moist!" Thisry iry is absolutely the best of both worlds. You get to enjoy the action between those two gorg men men and share in the pleasure that Jean derives from sharing them both. I must admit that I can't help but imagine myself in her place. It has been dwelling in my mind every since I started reading this great story. I even drifted off to sleep following a couple of intense orgasms brought about by fantasies of myself being lucky enough to be in Jean's situation. I can't praise you enough for how well your writing of this story is progressing. Please keep up the great work. You have me hanging on your every word. I simply love it!!!!! Don't keep me waiting long.
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  • From islandwight on October 17, 2004
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    anonymous slashytrashy@yahoo.com 2004-06-13 id # 233004
    This story just keeps getting better and HOTTER, if that's possible. Very heavy on the oral, which I just adore. Now you've added anal which I love almost as much as oral. I Love both of these sex acts between M/M & M/F, and as you can probably tell from my reviews, I also love performing both in my real sex life. Believe me, it's not all fantasy for me! But the real icing on the cake, is that it's done so well. The writing and structure are top notch. If all this is just from your head, then you hareatreat imagination. If not, I sure wish you, I, and other/others could get together! Please don't stop. I'm looking forward to every chapter!
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  • From islandwight on October 17, 2004
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    slashytrashy@yahoo.com 2004-06-03 id # 226855
    I can express my reaction to this little tidbit with one word: WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was so fucking hot! I am so fucking into oral sex and that includes both giving and receiving. I would have traded places with anyone of the three in a heartbeat. ved ved it when Billy licked Sean's come from his lip and then when Jean and Billy were swapping Sean's come back and forth I got hotter than a fresh fucked fox in a forest fire! Sean did exactly as I would have loved to have done when he started eating Jean's cunt after Billy had flooded it with his come! Yummy! I loved reading this! Please don't make me wait long for more and heavy on the oral please, please, pretty please.
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  • From ANON - CathyAPA on July 18, 2004
    Damn girl! This keeps getting better and better. This chapter has really "moved" me in such a delicious way. I think it's time for me to take a bit of a break and relieve some of this aching.

    An excellent job as always. I'm am breathlessly awaiting the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - CathyAPA on July 02, 2004
    A new chapter, yay!

    Poor Billy! How could he possibly feel unwanted? Viggo has many desireable qualities, to be sure, but he's NOT Billy. Listen to Jean, Billy! No on could EVER take your place.
    But now, here is the conflict I've been expecting. I'm sure Sean will realize things for what they are so they can get past this. I'd hate to see jealousy break up my favorite threesome.
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  • From ANON - CathyAPA on July 02, 2004
    Oh baby!

    Do you know what you are doing to me? Your descriptive powers are stunning. The build up, release and build pu, again, leave me panting as much as the characters in the story. This is some of the hottest sex I've ever read in fan fiction. It's romantic, sensual and wickedly dirty all at the same time. I could swaer you have read my mind.

    I breathlessly await more.
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  • From ANON - Mari on June 03, 2004
    What can I say? Besides that whole bad experience with those 2 other bastards, I'd want to be in her place. Billy and Sean are so sweet and caring, and totally sexy. As for the shower scene, this song comes to mind, "It's getting hot in here..." hehe. Can't wait to read what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Aurora on June 01, 2004
    Absolutely HATED it. Hated that fucking bitch. What the fuck! Get some therapy. Then have sex where you don't whine and puke all over yourself. This story was a digrace to all women. In my humble opinion.
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  • From ANON - loveofmusic on May 31, 2004
    Great story keep up the work. I can wait for the next chapter.
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