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By : Esteliel

From ANON - JastaElf on March 03, 2003
Oh my goodness....

(yes, yes, I know, goodness had nothing to do with it... )

So! Now Glorfindel is determined that Legolas's eldertherther learn the art of surrender...at least as far as need be that he understand where his brother stands in relationship to all that's going on! Hmmm...

Elladan is thoroughly icky in this, as is Haldir. They're even worse than Glorfindel!! And poor little Legolas keeps giving of himself and giving in to keep others safe... it's just a good thing that Glorfindel DOES care for him and at least does SOME things to keep him safe, because at the moment everyone else is either seeing him as nothing but a selfishly submissive slut or a plaything to be used--and there is, deep down, a core of great courage, guts, daring, and compassion in Legolas that I *think* Glorfindel can see. There is also a stunning loyalty and love in him, and IF Glorfindel can become worthy of it, he will have found a soul-mate who is easily his equal! I think back to what Glorfy said to Elrond a couple chapters back: that he would like to teach Legolas to overcome his fears, if he would but allow it. Hmmm...

OK, more, more, please!!!!
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From ANON - Elflover on March 03, 2003
*groan*

How much worse are things going to get?!!! Legolas is going to get punished for this, for sure... quite probably with the audience of 3 watching... About the only thing that is certain is that Glorfindel won't allow E/H to touch Legolas as a part of it...

One can almost feel sorry for Legolas' brother.... I say almost, because of the horrible things that he said to Legolas earlier. (Bloodthirsty, vindictive me. JastaElf is very correct in pointing out that Thranduil, and apparently also the brother, are monsters.) Presumably now he has *some* idea of what Legolas (at least, potentially) has suffered. You will note, however, that he still has not broken. So can he truly yet comprehend or sympathize with Legolas, to the point of forgiving him? That's the question... (I don't think that he can, at this juncture, understand or sympathize with Legolas' vativation of submission in order to save his child.)

Still, this installment was a great relief, knowing that there is still some (howsoever small) core of personal integrity and courage in Legolas -- in his steadfast endurance of the other Elves' humiliations (without crying to Glorfindel), and especially in his daring attempt to rescue his brother. I fervently hope that whatever more abuse is coming his way, that this inner core is not extinguished.

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From ANON - Lady of Legolas on March 02, 2003
Is Glorfindel going to make Legolas pleasure his own brother?Sure he will.That's Glorfindel's nature.He's one sadistic,perverted sicko.And we love him for it.MORE!!!!!
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From ANON - JastaElf on March 02, 2003
Oh dear, I was *hoping* there would be another chapter tonight, but had no IDEA you would have things take a turn like THIS!!

Wow.

Haldir and Elladan are EVIL to try and make Legolas buy his brother's relief with incest... I hope Glorfindel beats the crap out of those two bad Elves, and doesn't do much that is bad to Legolas for his disobedience. The kid is just trying to save his brother, after all.... *SOB!*

Glorfindel please, please, I'm begging you.... show us *something* of how much you are coming to love poor little Legolas, PLEASE....
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From ANON - Anon on March 02, 2003
Oh Celeird�r...poor poor elf..

Poor Legolas too, and I am about ready to kill your Glorfindel if he doesn't protect Legolas from that evil duo.

Hmm..must commend you on the use of "lass", it's almost like a double entendre.

Another fantastic chapter. There's a heartwrenching "reality" of situation that is very disturbing..very addictive to read.
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From ANON - Glorfindel on March 02, 2003
Great job, as ever. I am eager to find out what Glorfindel plans now... and, poor poor brother. Please give mhandhandkerchief, my eyes are full of tears *sobs*
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From ANON - crazy_she_elf on March 02, 2003
OMG!!! I will kill you lol how could you stop there nooo...aww it's so awesome story that i keep checking every hour for updates and i was sooo happy to find the new chapter!! But i hate the ends cos i hardly can wait for the next chapters ;)

Aww poor prince now he sees what was like to legolas..and the new nick name is great :) really leggy doesn't fit haha but omg i loooove this story it's the only one which made me so crazy to chek it every day couple of times woow I'm so excited! Please I'm beggging you write mooooooore soon :D
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From ANON - kiki on March 02, 2003
Ai,what are they doing with poor Celeirdur.It's so brave of Legolas to try to save his bro.*sigh.bb
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From ANON - Esy on March 01, 2003
Wow, this is amazing! I've been reading this story for a week or two now, and I still can't believe how wonderful it is. You have done an amazing job taking something most would laugh at (male pregnancy) and turned it into a fully believeable aspect. My one thing is: When will we find out the sex of the baby?! It's driving me nuts waiting! Anyway, keep up the good work, and write, write, write!
Thanks so much,
Esy
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From ANON - Lady of Legolas on March 01, 2003
So,it's Celeidur's turn to be hurt?It' not nice but serves him right for not defending his younger brother.But you know,it's showing that the Noldor is much more cruel than the Sindar.It's like what ever happened to their people in Thranduil's hands,they do it to the Sindar.Well,violence begets violence and no matter what they do to Legolas' brother,it most certainly will give Thranduil the reason to start a war with the Noldor.Too bad because I thought that the Noldor wants peace with the Sindar.Keep them coming please.
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From ANON - kiki on March 01, 2003
I think that Cereduir should get preggy with Elladan child,so he can see what it's like to walk in Legolas shoes.Whooopsie where did I get that idea.Heh.LOL
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From ANON - farewell on March 01, 2003
grrrr. mean MEAN glorfindel. i've actually only read the first few paragraphs, but i had to get that off my chest. PLEASE say he gets nicer? must go read the rest of it now. yay!
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From ANON - Elflover on March 01, 2003
Excellent chapter..... I had been wondering if Glorfindel would turn Legolas' brother over to Haldir, and if so, what justification he could possibly use (other than punishment for his cruelty towards Legolas), that wouldn't screw up the hostage plans.

It is gratifying to see some small amount of concern for Legolas on Glorfindel's part (though it was also distressing the way he set Legolas up, and used him in front of his brother).

Need I say, please continue?
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From ANON - Anon on March 01, 2003
Celeird�r..I like him, a lot.

And this story, too. Iterrierribly fascinating.
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From ANON - JastaElf on March 01, 2003
Oh wow, TWO chapters to read on the same day!!! Woo-hooo!! :-)

OK, so things are now getting a great deal more complicated for poor Legolas. Now his mean old brother, who does not even WANT to consider that Legolas might be a victim here, is a prisoner in Imladris--and being mean as a snake to boot. Oh dear, and what's this?? Glorfindel is giving the elder brother to Elladan and Haldir?? Oh that's NOT going to be a good thing....

You have a grand way with starting a chapter like this off in such a nice way... a little snuggle, some niceness, then WHAM!!

I love it....

I think part of the confusion over Legolas's nature stems from the fact that there is not a lot of rational logic to a d/s relationship. Real nurture is going on here, but there is real control as well. Legolas seems to have always been somewhat de-valued by his family, hence their immediate insistence that the child gave himself meekly to the enemy... they won't stop to hear his explanation that he was raped the first time, then forced to experience pleasure at the hands of his rapist. Where were they to protect the child then?? Why was he sent alone to guard ho at at a time when there are enemy spies all over the place? Then they have the nerve to berate, beat up, then banish the child--is it really any wonder that he went to Imladris, alone and terrified and pregnant, to find the one who caused the problem in the first place? Legolas is young, both physically and emotionally, and is pregnant. Pregnancy makes you a little nuts, and overly emotional. I think we need to cut him a break and just wait to see what happens over the course of the tale.

Whether we like it or not, understand it or not, Glorfindel took immediate responsibility for his actions and their result. Yes, he is using his much older experience and awareness to take full advantage of a youth barely out of childhood, and not quite yet of age; Glorfindel is way past adult, and knows many ways to give and receive pleasure. He also knows Legolas is young and inexperienced, lonely and neglected, and in that full hormonal flush that youngsters undergo when they are first sexually awakened--and yes, he IS taking full advantage of that. And he derives pleasure from causing pain and humiliation. But he also always makes up for it with caresses and loving regard. Is it sick and twisted of him to do this, and of Legolas to accept it? Maybe. But who is the bigger monster? Glorfindel for what he does--or Legolas's family for what they do (and fail to do)?

In the best of all possible worlds, Glorfindel will continue what it looks as if he has begun to do: truly love Legolas, grateful for an heir and actually coming to know his little Sindar better and better, until a more age-appropriate relationship blossoms overe. e. Certainly Legolas is being treated better inadriadris than he was in Mirkwood. And maybe Thranduil will realize that war is stupid, that his youngest son was abused at home LONG before he was abused by Glorfindel, that any grandchild is better than none, and there will be peace and much good sex in the world. :-)

But also, I hope Legolas will continue to maturefelyfely somehow have his child, and slowly evolve into the stronger, secure, intelligent and fiercely loyal young Elf he is by the time of the Fellowship Quest. But for the moment, I'm just enjoying this dark and difficult ride. :-)

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