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By : Esteliel

From ANON - Aelin-uial on April 20, 2003
Now you're talking! Thanks for the extended repost. Who's Thalaron? I don't think Glorfindel is ready to share Legolas, so what's Thalaron there for? Is he the local piercing/tattoo artist, about to do some decorating of Legolas at Glorfindel's request? Maybe he's aven ven smith and is going to weld a slave collar around Legolas's neck? Or maybe he's Rivendell'sgreatest sculptor, who's about to sculpt Legolas naked so Glorfindel can put the statue in the Hall of Fire for everyone else to use as a coat/hatrack or out in the garden for everyone to look at? That would certainly be humiliating for Legolas. I you you won't leave me guessing for too long!
I'd love to read a prequel, about Glorfindel's visit to Mirkwood, their first encounters, and what was going through Legolas's mind when he realised he was pregnant and was exiled. Are you planning to write one?
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From ANON - Elflover on April 20, 2003
more comments.... can't hold back....

*aagh* I can't stand it!

It's bad enough that Legolas has been degraded into performing such an intimate, submissive sex act for Glorfindel, whenever and whereever Glorfindel demands. Even worse, that he apparently takes no shame in it.... even *likes* it!

*Now* we've got this newcomer.... and I don't get the impression that he is there to have Legolas perform menial, usual-servant-type tasks for him. Oh, no, preciouss..... one recalls Elrond's long-ago comments to the effect that Glorfindel might want to see somebody else play with Legolas...

Ai, I can't stand it!!! Legolas, don't allow yourself to be used like that!! Remember that you were born a prince!! Remember the pride of Mirkwood!!! Glorfindel does *not* own you!!

Aiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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From ANON - Elflover on April 20, 2003
Lady of Legolas -- Yep, ff.net seems to be going on a purge... they also took out Bound & Torn (rewrite of Bound and Torn), which is merely R-rated... and it hadn't even gotten to anything anyone could call offensive, yet. (I'm hoping the author will post here.)

Ophirianne -- Speaking of responding to Lady of Legolas re your Anestel interlude story, I'm wondering if you ever got my email on that...

Re chapter 33 repost -- YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING!!!! No WAY Glorfindel is going to do that to Legolas?!!! Would he??? What ever happened to "he is *MINE*" and no one else is going to touch him?!!!!

Also, agree with comments on Legolas' reaction to pain. This is at least the 2nd time we have seen this... no way that Glorfindel would not have clued in on it.

Ai, poor Legolas!

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From ANON - ophirianne on April 19, 2003
Whoa!!!! Totally HOT!!! I love this repost- twice as long, twice as evil!!! I can not WAIT to see the next part Esteliel. Thank you for this. The only thing I think is lacking is Legolas's arousal from the pain which is not really apparent. It would be nice if you could show how he learns to be turned on from pain.

Lady of LEgolas- if you have any specific comments about my ficlet please email me and I will be happy to respond. And yes- it was meant to be non-consensual- isn't it wonderful!!!??

Esteliel- stay evil and keep writing. I myself plan to write porn to celebrate Easter.

Happy Easter!!!
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From ANON - Vuaryn on April 19, 2003
This is way much better. Thanks for the repost. Update soon.
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From ANON - Lady of Legolas on April 19, 2003
I was right about your fic getting booted off ff.net.Even so,ff.net might go as far on removing R-rated fics as well if they want to.That is not right and absolutey sad.Oh well.BTW,I read that fic about Celeduir.What can I say,I was offended that he got raped by Glorfindel.Yes,raped.All I can say is Glorfindel is one .....elf and I can't imagine the Noldor being like that.Legolas,grow a spine,a big one so at least you can say something about what happened.I am still going to read Anestel till the end because I'm hooked on wanting to know what will be the end.
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From on April 19, 2003
*snorts* Oh, yes, concealing his identity, something Glorfindel would have done under the circumstances, warrants punishment. An expected beating/rape/fucking. Fine. I'm sure Legolas expected that. But to be given to someone else...God.
*takes Legolas far, far away.*
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From ANON - Lady of Legolas on April 19, 2003
So it's a three-way now?
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From ANON - Siobhan on April 19, 2003
I've finally decided to review!
I've been reading this for some time now, and I must say, it's fiendishly brilliant, and very different to the usual kind of stuff people write; you have more imagination put into it, and it's decidedly twisted in a very good way.
I love the way you've decided to present the characters, and when I read through the reviews and see people wishing harm upon Glorfindel, I can't believe it! I thought your version was incredibly sexy - you can almost feel his fire, and you get a good idea just why he gets respect; would you want to challenge _his_ whim? He's just so vibrant, wicked and naughty ^_~!

Can't wait for more,

~Siobhan

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From ANON - Anu on April 19, 2003
(chapter 33) *screams and hides under bed* Evil!Glorfindel is on the loose!! HIDE!!! AHHHH!!! *cowers under bed, quivering in fear*
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From ANON - Lady of Legolas on April 19, 2003
Did your fic at ff.net get booted out?I can't find it anymore.
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From ANON - Elflover on April 19, 2003
One thing that I loathe about this, and that just shows the extent of mind control Glorfindel has gained, is that Legolas is actually *agreeing* with the idea that he has earned this punishment -- Glo Glorfindel is within his rights to do so.

Sheer and utter nonsense!

Even Glorfindel should have to admit thatcealcealing his identity was the only sane, logical, and rational thing to do -- not to mention the only loyal thing for a son of Mirkwood to do. Glorfindel's decree of punishment was, I guess, a combination of the initial shock of revelation, and his sense of ownership betrayed -- his slave (call it what you want, but that's what it amounts to) had failed under threat of punishment to reveal this, so he *must* be punished! And what Glorfindel promises...

So it was rather sad to see that Legolas had internalized all this, and actually *felt* that he had done something worthy of punishment... when, if anything, it was quite the opposite. *sigh*

Legolas, wake up from this dark enchantment, and find your spine!

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From on April 18, 2003
This story....it is difficult to state exactly how I respond to thtorytory. It is, first and foremost, brint, nt, as well as quite scary. It is my guilty pleasure, since I normally run the other way from rape!BDSM fics. Yet something in this one has me coming back. Most people do not regard the elves as 'evil', and I am certain that there are aspects to Glorfindel that can be considered redeemable. That being said, I sincerely hope he dies a slow, extremely painful death, and I hope Legolas somehow escapes.

~Minuial
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From ANON - Elflover on April 18, 2003
Thanks for explaining the name genesis. 'Anestel' -- very interesting, that one.

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From ANON - Esteliel on April 18, 2003
@Jastaelf: Well, what can I say to this? It's exactly what I want their relationship to be like. *laughs* There still has a lot to happen for that situation to arrive, but hopefully I'm going to achieve this with the sequel. And... there is the possibility for your wish to be fulfilled. *g*

@elflover Believe me, I can take construc cri criticism. :) Now, if people tell me "this is sick and wrong because a male can't get pregnant", I'm simply going to laugh and delete the mail, but if there are mistakes to my characterization/plot/grammar etc., I'm always glad if people point it out to me.
Names: "Esteliel" ist just the female version of the name "Estel" and means "hope" as well (hey, it's a nice word :), while anestel means "with hope" ['an-' = 'with' in Sindarin]. Yes, I admit it, I was practicing Sindarin grammar by declining the word "estel" when I had the idea to use this as a title, but it was fitting somehow... because no matter how dire Legolas' situation seems, there is still hope for him, and furthermore, it's also a play with words... in German, there is the expression "guter Hoffnung sein" = "being with good hope" which means "being pregnant". It seemed to fit this fic. :)

(And, personally, I thought Glorfindel's comprison to breaking a colt was totally hot. ;) But I don't think that Legolas could appreciate it, either. *g*)
And now I'm going to answer your loooong mail. (Thanks for it, btw! :)
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