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By : Esteliel

From ANON - Viconiaa on March 22, 2003
Glorfindel is so cruel! I'm starting to believe that there will be no happy ending, not after all these things that Glorfindel did to Legolas.
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From ANON - gabriel on March 22, 2003
you know, as much as i like dis story, i find glorfindel incredibly cruel and annoying sometimes... must be cause i'm partial to the pretty prince... -gets smacked by boyfriend- yeah well... continue on! wow this fic just goes on and on and on... heh.

gabe -goes to placate his not really upset boyfriend-
(sometimes i wish i had a girlfriend instead... at least they're meant to be pissy at times)
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From ANON - Elflover on March 22, 2003
*strokes Lady of Legolas* Wasn't sure what you meant... glad you weren't down on me. * Elflover's a bit paranoid and insecure... * Please don't go back to lurking mode! I value your comments (when I know for sure what they mean). And I totally agree with you that name calling is inappropriate. (On the other hand, calling our author here wicked and cruel when s/he is torturing us (along with Legolas) with all these cliffhangers...)

This latest chapter...... *groan*

In the library??!! *moan* I don't know whether or not to hope Elrond walks through that door. He's the only one that seems to have the ability to rein in Glorfindel's excesses, but given their friendship, I would say it would be 2% in favor of Legolas if Elrond did walk in (before Glorfindel's return). Just please, please, please, NOT Erestor or Elladan or Haldir.

This is getting sadder by the minute for Legolas. Are we heading towards some suicidal angst here? And what on earth did he do that he's fearing Glorfindel's discovery and retribution for?

Like some others, I love Legolas and Haldir fics. I can take angst, torture, non-con, rape.... but not mutilation or character death. But this dominance/submission/humiliation (emphasis here on humilation) is tough to take. I *hate* to see Legolas suffer like this, and he's spiraling downward into worse and worse degradation! Little honor left... that seems to be for sure. AUGH the anguish! Somebody save him!!!!

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From ANON - Lady of Legolas on March 21, 2003
No,I'm not critical about your review Elflover.What I mean is that if somebody flames an author(good or bad),I seriously think that name-calling should not be included.If they don't like the story,then they should just say that they don't like it and leave it at that.I read a review on one at ff.net and they called her a bitch(even though it's an acceptable word now-not womewomen though)and for what?She is a really good writer.I just hate it when I used the review board for some other reason rather than review a story.I try not to do that but when push comes to shove,you can only take so much.Oh dagnabit,I'm doing it right now am I?For all of you other readers who might be offended,I'm really sorry.I'm a Legolas fan(and Haldir)and that is why I can sometimes take it personally when Legolas is tortured,raped or you name it in a story.THIS IS A REALLY GOOD STORY!!!! I will admit that I love this one.I'm hoping that Legolas will eventually be treated right by Glorfindel.Oh crap,I'm seriously having a guilt trip on my previous review.I'll hide in my hole now.
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From ANON - Lady of Legolas on March 21, 2003
What the hell are those balls for?!Some S & M kink for Glorfindel?Oh boy!!!I think I'm beginning to have second thoughts about this story.NOT!!!BTW,doesn't those things hurt especially for a male?How big are they?
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From ANON - erb on March 21, 2003
*frowns*...I see all these people asking for a happy ending and I am wondering what they mean. Personally, Legolas has been treated with total disrespect by Glorfindel. I think this story is morbidly fascinating but it is very sad. You write well and I cannot help but wonder where you are going. Endless Legolas torture? My hope is that Legolas finds someone who truly loves him and gets out of this situation. You need respect for love.
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From ANON - Elflover on March 21, 2003
Lady of Legolas -- I'm trying to figure out exactly you you were saying in your last review. I hope that you don't think that I was flaming the author. I don't think that I was... if it was taken that way (especially by the author!), then my apologies! Consider my comments an expression of my emotional response to the particular episode (and last episode was enough to provoke a sense of despair and horror). Evocation of emotional response is, if you will, a testimony to the author's talent. Or so I feel. If positions were reversed, I would like to know how a particular scene or situation resonated with the readers.

(There is a difference, I think, in saying that such-an-such a scene or action was disturbing, and addressing the author as "you &^%$#@!, you %" etc. Which latter I have not done. Not even in language fit for civilized company. Believe me, if I were flaming the author, it would be pretty obvious (having coldly done so recently on another site, and to another author, for bushwhacking the readers with an unwarned character death -- something that I feel is highly inconsiderate, to say the least).)

I read a little over at ff.net, and I wasn't aware of any flames there for R content (I don't read all the reviews, though). Too bad that some readers are childish in that respect. And thank you to this site ownership for providing a safe haven for adult fanfiction.

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From ANON - Lady of Legolas on March 21, 2003
Can I say something?Okay,since ff.net banned NC-17 fics,some R-rated ones are being flamed.It's one of the reasons I like this site because readers give mature(if not flaming)criticism good or bad.At ff.net,if you get flamed,they add name-calling too and some 4-letter words.But then again,at least this fic is over 300(hoping for more)reviews there.Although I still don't like how Glorfindel is treating Legolas despite giving birth to his son.And yeah,what happened to Celeduir and his other brother?I know Celeduir's back in Mirkwood.The other brother is a hostage in Lorien?I guess the Noldor gave Thranduil no choice in the matter.I also hope that Thranduil will eventually accept Legolas back in Mirkwood.
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From ANON - Legolas` Bride on March 19, 2003
Super...hab gerade zu Ende gelesen, und kann die Fortsetzung kaum noch abwarten!
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From ANON - crazy_she_elf on March 19, 2003
Pretty! But....is Glorfindel still gonna be the mean guy :( I thought he will change and will be nice to Legolas...but he still thinks of punishments :(... please can you do something about it, poor Legolas will he ever suffer enaugh?
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From ANON - Elflover on March 19, 2003
The feeding part isn't odd.... if you've ever breastfed. (The baby's feeding, and Legolas' physical response and emotions, that is. As for Glorfindel... you would expect a certain amount of natural curiosity as to taste and so on and so forth. As to the rest of it, well, more Glorfindel control and dominance and possesiveness.)

I do question the quick resumption of, er, relations.... on the other hand, we do not know the explicit details of the birth canal and all that in male Elves (not sure that I want to know!), so who knows. I do know that in human female births, there is a prohibition on relations for some period of time after birth, due to the real danger of death (yes, it has happened)by embolism. It's been long enough, though, that I don't recall the exact period of time. Possibly the information is available in books on pregnancy and childbirth.

What was disturbing and nauseating to me, was Glorfindel's suggestion (more like a command) that Legolas keep himself oiled for Glorfindel's convenience and use. *shudder* Oiling yourself would be, well, a humiliation.... Having to keep yourself 24/7 in an oiled state, feeling that lubrication constantly, reminding yourself of why (so you can be used anywhere, anytime).... how totally humiliating, degrading, and dehumanizing.

Really, how can Legolas bear all this? I would be in despair. I would be considering suicide.

And how can Elrond continue to countenance what is effectively slavery... that escapes me, and is disturbing also.

Really, no nice Elves (excepting Legolas) in this fic....

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From ANON - gabriel on March 19, 2003
Chapter 25 review:
that was ceratinly strange... -shudders- the feeding part does disturb me... just because it's odd i guess... anyway... i really wish Glorfindel wouldn't be so mean to Legolas... poor dear's been through so much as it is! continue!

gabe
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From ANON - Elflover on March 18, 2003
Part 25....

Well, that answers *that* question, doesn't it....

I can scarcely believe that Legolas has recovered enough from birthing for *that* kind of activity. But there's evil, vile, selfish, rat bastard Glorfindel, taking him hard for his pleasure. No consideration for him whatsoever -- in fact, rather the opposite.... careless of any physical pain he inflicts, careless for that matter of whether or not he impregnates Legolas again, and delighting in the mental cruelty of the threatened punishment, the potential humiliation of the setting, and asserting his ownership and control.

Nope, no love forolasolas there.

And poor Legolas still has to endure facing the Imladris Elves again... who knows what new humilations Glorfindel is going to heap on him....

AUGH, how can his son be enough to help him endure this wretched life?

AUGH, all is despair.....

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From ANON - Lady of Legolas on March 18, 2003
More Legolas torture?If I didn't know better,you like spoiling us.SWEET!!!More please!
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From ANON - Kitsune Hashiba on March 18, 2003
YAY! That last scene was just SO sweet! *coughs* I can't believe I'm behaving like a preppy cheerleader.... when did that happen? Oh well, as long as it works. Please have the next chappie up soon, I can't wait to see what Thranduil's reaction is!
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