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Reviews for Twilight Tales - Hallowed Fate

By : MPB
  • From ANON - Isabeau of Greenlea on September 18, 2004
    Hello Eresse--

    I enjoyed your story very much. Got to Chapter Ten this morning, and then the site went down! Very frustrating. I'm usually chary of Imrahil stories because I write a lot about him myself, and it's hard to get past my own vision of the character. But your Imrahil was sufficiently different that I could appreciate the story. The solution you gave to the problem of Mithrellas and her descendents was well reasoned, I think, and I rather like the idea of the Elven blood cropping up more strongly in some members of the family than others. Elladan was a good choice of mate for him, and the pitfalls of the relationship were well-depicted. The smutty parts were also well-rendered... always a plus! If I have any quibble at all, it's that when Imrahil was contemplating his choice, you said a lot about him being parted from his children for eternity, but nothing at all about poor Aerin. She had featured heavily in his thoughts in the earlier part of the story, but towards the end is not mentioned seperately from the children. Other than that, a very enjoyable story. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Asha Dreamweaver on July 24, 2004
    as usual, simply brilliant. Your characterisation is very detailed, very realistic and very compelling. you really have a gift for writing! Ever consider yourself as a professional author? You're definitely good enough! I am eagerly waiting on the stories you have hinted at and implore you to poste them quickly before i expire from the waiting! To conclude@ yet another astonishing and bifulifuly crafted piece of work! :)

    Your loyal fan,
    Asha
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  • From ANON - Shanna on July 16, 2004
    Beautiful. I like much everything what you write.
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  • From ANON - Kryspen on July 15, 2004
    Lovely lovely lovely *sigh* Fantastic ending... and we even got to know a bit of what happened to Imrahil's wonderful beloved children. What a beautiful story, Eresse. And I'm so thrilled to read there will be MORE!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - lego forever on July 15, 2004
    Another brilliant and heartwarming story! Even more romantic than Aragorn and Arwen's! I am soooo looking forward to your next stories which I hope would have daily updates. :) Thanks again for sharing your writings. Am also excited about the prequel of Hallowed Fate with my favoriteolasolas and Elrohir!!!
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  • From ANON - Ella on July 15, 2004
    Absolutely bloody brilliant.
    I LOVE your stories - they are exceptional and by far the best LOTR fics I have EVER read - and I've read HUNDREDS! LOL!

    I cannot WAIT for more of your brilliant work!
    Thank you for bringing me many laughs and smiles and nbitibiting and tear-jerking moments!

    Wonderful stuff! As always!

    *Ella*
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  • From ANON - Anita on July 15, 2004
    Lovely lovely! Such a wonderfull story :) I will be waiting for the sequel of course!
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  • From ANON - eawen penallion on July 15, 2004
    Once again I bow to your adroit skill and passion with words. Now tell me if you hwritwritten any published books on any topic and where the hell I can get them!!!
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  • From ANON - lydia on July 15, 2004
    You are an amazing writer! Everything you have written is just wonderous- great imagery, dialogue, oh man. I'm a fan! I will read anything you out out! Thanks so much for continuing after Greenlead and Imladris!
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  • From ANON - Deathangelgw on July 15, 2004
    GUH!! This has been....just like G&I...I swear!! On your feet, heart clenching, throat closing, tears coming, other things coming...hehe. MAN!! Oh, this was good!! I can't wait for more!! You are an inspiration and a bane...keeping us other authors on our toes. SHEESH!! Love, DA
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  • From ANON - Minuial Nuwing on July 13, 2004
    Oh, this was so lovely! I actually could have cried, first for their pain, then for their joy. I am lutelutely awestruck by the depth and range of emotion in this entire story, and this chapter (19) in partic. B. Beautiful! Please don't stop with their arrival...I would love to read Imrahil's reaction to his new immortal life...

    Minuial ;)
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  • From ANON - MJLuvsPolar on July 11, 2004
    Oh how lovely Eresse! I'm so glad Elladan has his Imrahil back. You know I think I like him much better for him having suffered a little. Does that make me some sort of sadist? No really, you've converted me, I like Elladan now. Hmmm, I wonder what other surprises are instore for them both now that Imrahil is an Elf? Loved the little joke about being a 'recent' elf btw - very quirky! I also liked the very believable "death" for Imrahil, elegant and simple but touching also with his children only being aware of his ultimate destination. And I have to admit that I enjoyed the whole 'almost too late' scenario more than I thought I would. But then I have a feeling your writing could make me interested in a paper bag blowing down the street. ~_^
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  • From ANON - Sian on July 10, 2004
    Oh Eresse! I got goosebumps when his ship was sighted! So wonderful..can't describe how beautful your words and descriptions are...
    Very moving chapter, and this story along with your others are once again added to my for-all-time favorites list! Incrediable done, meldir!
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  • From ANON - Kryspen on July 10, 2004
    As it shoud be ^_^ Breathtaking, Eresse!
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  • From ANON - Elle on July 05, 2004
    I can't wait for the next chapter! You are a great storyteller.
    And BTW, I just noticed your author's note in chapter 11, I believe, and I'd like to see the Glorfindel/Erestor story. It'd be nice to see more of them in your series. :)
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