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Reviews for Darkest Before Dawn

By : Blossomwitch
  • From ANON - Anon on August 19, 2004
    i can not wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - ki Tki Tachibana on August 19, 2004
    weee! good chapter! Can't wait to read more!

    Yeah AFF.net has been really annoying with it's constant down times, not that i'm blaming anyone, but it does make it hard to read ones favorite stuffs :D

    Anyway i checked out your website where you're putting your stories now, looks fine to me, a suggestion though. You might want to think about linking putting links to each chapter under the title in the fanfiction page, it makes it easier for people to tell if a stories been updated. I hope that made sense...
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  • From ANON - Calenharn Elflover on August 18, 2004
    If you are going to move this fic to your own website (and I don't blame you for feeling frustrated), then please have pity on us and change the background and font colors. White font on navy really isn't pleasant to try to read.

    A few glitches in this chapter re continuity and wording, but otherwise good.

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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on August 18, 2004
    very good. i do hope you continue

    huggs
    louise
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2004
    please new chapter poor legolas is the baby gimli's? if it will be what a nice surprise for him please writet cht chapter soon
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  • From ANON - Tanesa on July 19, 2004
    I love your s! I! I have only recently read it, but love it nonetheless. Your Gimli and Legolas are both very well written, especially Legolas in his distraught condition, and the hint of his pregnancy is something i did not expect, maybe I did not see the warnings, but I am looking forward to more, much more. Including some Elf-love with Gimli, eventually, as Legolas probably does not want much with him too soon. But Gimli is coming to the rescue!
    Tanesa
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  • From MorierBlackleaf on July 18, 2004
    Wonderfully written. Makes me feel very sorry for Legolas! And pregnant! You said it was mpreg, but I didn't expect it so soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2004
    Hurry with the next chapter please GIMLI hurry *sob*:(
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  • From ANON - Aurora on July 18, 2004
    evil evil woman. i love it!! hehe gotta love a pregnant legolas, and the situation jmakemakes it better. keep writing and updating A.S.A.P!!!
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  • From ANON - Calenharn Elflover on July 18, 2004
    Legolas' POV - well written. Sad, but utterly believable.

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  • From ANON - daughterofthemidnightmoon on July 13, 2004
    *sigh*... I still don't think you should switch to Legolas' POV. I know people are asking for it, but in the long run i think your story would be so much better if you didn't. It would just create more of an aura of suspense. Good stuff all around otherwise. Please. I know people asked, but sometimes an author needs to write as he/she feels, and I really don't think you should switch POVs just yet. Sometimes the opinion of the masses just isn't what is best... Wait until Gimli actually sees Legolas in the brothel to then get the elf's feelings and thought. I really hope you get them together in the end. And I'm really excited about the mpreg. I really really hope somehow Legolas and Gimli get together and it's Gimli as the father of the baby. I've always wondered what a child between those two would look like. You know, there's a lot of mpreg stories out there, but none of them that have Legolas and Gimli having a child. Aren't you the least buit curious what a dwarf/elf hybrid would look like?! Hopefully that'll be the case for this story. (oh I hope i hope I hope ^_^) Hurry with more soon. And just before I go again, please reconsider changing POVs.

    Till your next update!
    -daughterofthemidnightmoon
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  • From ANON - Sian on July 13, 2004
    Ugh! Gods! Hurry Gimli! Poor Legolas, I hope we won't have to much Elvish suffering, I'm a softy and hate to read about Leggy Torture!
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  • From ANON - Celesta Hellewise Harman on July 11, 2004
    AH!!! MORE!!! SOON!!!!! PLEEEEEEAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! IS BEGIN YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Alwyn on July 09, 2004
    hmm well you could have gimli go tearing off to the brothel, perhaps getting waylaid somewhat on the way there, but eventually making it and then getting to see the elf, who of course is tied up or something. maybe he is blindfolded and can't see gimli, and gimli has to decide then what to do. will he kiss legolas before he frees him? then they have to escape the brothel. could be gimli pays for the elf (though i can't see the brothel owner being willing to part with him for less than an exorbitant amount of gold) or the run away, in which case you have all sorts of possibilities. maybe when they get out they have to pretend legolas is gimli's slave, and they have to put on a publice tce that agrees with that.

    anyway. enough ideas. get writing! pretty please? let me know when you update; i'm really enjoying this story.
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  • From ANON - daughterofthemidnightmoon on July 05, 2004
    Ok, here's some more things I've though of while reading some of the other readers' reviews. First off, yes. No teary, whimpering, Legolas. That just won't do. Best characterization for him is strong, proud, not yet broken, and fights till subdued or beaten into submission and even then refused to willingly yield! Got it? Alrighty then... Next, agaies. es. No immediate sexual comfort. Gimli should be a strong support for Legolas in the days following any kind of escape, but not as a let's-have-sex-and-make-you-forget-all-about-those-nasty-men-that-raped-you thing. No no no! Later, they could get together, but as someone else said, just not right away. Moving on! Mpreg... Well, I've read other fics where elves chose when they want to concieve and become pregnant. If Legolas did not want to become pregnant (let alone be raped...) then that would very plausibly rule out forced pregnancy by one of his nightly customers. He might also have been clinging to life with the hope of one day escaping and finding his friends again. Don't forget, if Gimli was so adamant about finding Legolas, Legolas might have been just as adament as holding on life and trying to one day reunite with him. I know that's kind of mussy, but it'll work as long as you don't dwell on sugery sweetness (which by the way you did very well with Gimli's side of waiting out the year waiting for Legolas to show up again. Very good!) Also, just one last thing, I don't suggest switching to Legolas' point of view. It creates a greater aura of suspense to leae the reader wondering what Legolas is going through until we actually see him in the brothel when Gimli gets there. That's about it. I'm eagerly anticipating another chapter soon. Don't leave us waiting too long!

    -daughterofthemidnightmoon (again! :P)
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