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Reviews for Morning's Embrace Part I

By : LadyofIthilien
  • From ANON - red_lasbelin on September 23, 2004
    I recently read your story, and felt compelled to comment. THIS IS A WONDERFUL STORY!!! I am hoping you will update soon. Thank you very much for posting this.

    red
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  • From ANON - Sheeijan on June 18, 2004
    Uh oh... Now, I love Legolas (as does pretty much the entire female population who has seen LotR). But why do I get the feeling he may cause some issues for our lovely couple? I'm not even going to talk about Whiny-Elf. grr. Well, at least there's no fear of Glorfindel tumbling that one.

    Erestor loves Glorfindel so much, I'm so afraid he's going to suffer heartbreak before too long. *sigh*


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  • From ANON - eawen penallion on June 18, 2004
    Glorfindel and Erestor are my favourite elves, so I am dying to see how this story progresses. *Glorfindel* is the one retident about revealing their relationship? usually it is the other way around... Please post again soon!
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  • From ANON - Morgul on June 18, 2004
    Mae Govannen, My name is Morgul....but you can call me...*thinks*....Morgul!

    You are a Fanfic writer, one of a very rare few - you can spell and your grammar is decipherable. (Go you!)

    However, you are using Silmarillion names for your Original Characters. This is something that you sho't 't do, I appreciate that it's easier than making up your own, but there are several reasons why you should not do this.

    (1) Everyone already knows these characters, therefore they will associate your OC's with the ones from the Silm. You will find it hard to convince your readers to like these characters and enjoy reading about them because they will be thinking of someone completely different. E.g. If someone wrote a story about Finrod, daughter of Elrond, you would feel as if the author was trying to be stupid as you will associate the name 'Finrod' with Finrod Felagund, King of Nargothrond and son of Finarfin, not this so called 'Daughter of Elrond'. See?

    (2) Doing so annoys most people. If you read aforementioned, non-existant (as far as I know) story about Lady Finrod, would you not be angry about the Kigs name being tarnished in such a way?

    (3) The PPC. If you annoy the Protectors of the Plot Continuum (who are foresworn to destroy all Mary-sues and destroyers of the Tolkien canon) they will mercilessly hunt down, and destroy your OCs.

    (4) You don't need to, Prof. Tolkien included a perfectly good Elvish dictionary in the Silmarilion and The Lost Road. If you don't have these books in your possession, I recomend going to your local library and borrowing them.

    Yours sincerely,
    Morgul.
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  • From ANON - Sheeijan on June 16, 2004
    This was lovely. Glorfindel/Erestor are my favorite couple, they are just so right together. Loved how Glorfindel punished Erestor. Although I'm not too happy about Glorfindel wanting to keep their relashipship secret - keeping relationships secret always seem as if they are ashamed of it. I wonder how Erestor feels about it. On the other hand, Glorfindel unable to keep his hands off of Erestor in public like that may indicate a change of heart. Dunno. Oh well.

    Lovely start, I'll definitely be watching for more of this in the future. Thank you for writing!
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