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Reviews for Vacation

By : Krit
  • From ANON - Linchen on December 29, 2005
    Wow, this is a great story.
    It's a nice idea to let the vala take a vacation.
    But I hope Manwe will get Lindir. I think Lindir wouldn't mind that he's a vala.
    And I'm curious who Lorien found in the garden.
    I hope you will write more soon.
    -Linchen
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  • From ANON - Kim on May 02, 2005
    I love your story. Can't wait to read more on Lindir/Manwe!! I'll keep checking for updates.
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  • From ANON - Haldir's Heart & Soul on September 09, 2004
    GROWL!!!
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  • From ANON - Lada on August 29, 2004
    Finally, after so many chapters there is the beginning of Manwe/Lindir romance! Wonderful! Please, continue. I am just so eager to read more about them!
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  • From ANON - Anita on August 06, 2004
    Now, the ground is a spot where I don't think Glorfindel has spend a lot of time *bg* Untill now! Hehe. Your chapters are a bit short but I do enjoy your story...I wonder what Lorien has is store for Erestor and Manwë for Lindir :) Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Lada on July 09, 2004
    Very well written! Lorien is incredible with his tricks and pranks:-) But I still wait for Manwe/Lindir romance. If Manwe will win the coitioition, does it mean he will get a prize and who will be a prize, may be Lindir?:-)

    Please, continue.
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  • From ANON - Sheeijan on July 09, 2004
    Tricky, tricky, tricky! That Valar is one sneaky little runt. Hmm, he never said *who* the dinner and kiss would be with, I noticed. ;-)

    My only complaint is that the chapter was too short, I wanted more! hehe, thanks for the update though!
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  • From ANON - Sheeijan on June 30, 2004
    Oooh, Update! More Lorien, too - bonus! I just had a thought, that Lorien is the ultimate Peeping Tom. I'm kind of sulking since we didn't get to see what Lorien saw in Erestor's dreams. At least share, you nosy Vala. I get the impression the dream was *good*, and I have to live vicariously, considering that last night I dreamt about Crunch n' Munch toffee-covered popcorn, and the night before it was strawberry cream cake. *sigh*


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  • From ANON - Sheeijan on June 28, 2004
    May not be the wisest course of action, going to sleep and leaving that so very mischevious Valar of Dreams to play. Hmm. *grin* I have the feeling that before the end of it Manwe (and Lindir) will wish they had their own rooms too, for the privacy....

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  • From ANON - Lada on June 27, 2004
    This is really interesting story with nice humor and funny situation, but I am sorry that chapters are so short!:-) I would indeed enjoy the development of Manwe and Lindidr's romance with Lorien as a matchmaker. I bet Lindir will be in owe at first:-) And I would like to see how behavior of population of Imladris will change after they will find out that two Gods spend their vacation in this particular place, if author will bring it in the story:-)
    Please, update soon and bring Manwe/Lindir romance in the story soon, I can't wait of shy Lindir will find out about his mighty admirer:-) May be Manwe will take Lindir with him back to Valar?
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  • From ANON - Anita on June 27, 2004
    Really, such a silly story and I love it! I am waiting for chapter 5 :)

    Anita

    ps: I wonder if Glorfindel will 'recognise' one or both of the Valar...I mean, he did spend quite some time in a certain Valar's Hall's *g*
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  • From ANON - Verg on June 23, 2004
    I can't wait to see the next installment.
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  • From ANON - Anita on June 17, 2004
    I have had a rather rotten day, but this did help to lift my spirit *g* Humorous and easy to read, do continue :)
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  • From ANON - Hyperbole on June 17, 2004
    LOL! So far this fic is great! I *so* want to see more! I just love the banter between Lórien and Manwë!

    I do have one minor request though, if she ever gets mentioned at any point I would apreciate it greatly if Varda is treated well, not bashed just because you are slashing her husband with someone else. I would like to think that she has an open mind and is accepting of other relationships Manwë hand and in turn he does her the same honour).

    But besides that, I can't wait to see what will happen!
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  • From ANON - Sheeijan on June 17, 2004
    After having read Troglodytic (or something), I have to say: I LOVE Lorien! He is the funniest little Valar ever. *big grin*

    I had this mental image of Glorfindel challenging Manwe to a friendly little match, since he's so big. I also had this mental image of Manwe not knowing a thing about swordfighting, since he's, well, a Valar. I then had a mental image of Lorien laughing so hard he's practically convulsing. Then I had a mental image of Lorien as the FrogLord. *evil grin*

    Loved it, I hope you continue this (and the other - I never said I wasn't greedy) soon!
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