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Reviews for How Does It Feel

By : palephoenix
  • From ANON - Mercury\'s Isis on April 21, 2005
    Update this!!! You haven't updated this in months. I would like to see some more since I like reading Legolas/OC stories.
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  • From ANON - mylildreams on November 12, 2004
    This story is totally awesome. Oh I hope you don't get bored with it and write loads and loads of chapters. It is a real pleasure to read. I will have to keep checking back to see when you do an update.
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  • From ANON - mylildreams on November 12, 2004
    This story is totally awesome. Oh I hope you don't get bored with it and write loads and loads of chapters. It is a real pleasure to read. I will have to keep checking back to see when you do an update.
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  • From ANON - mylildreams on November 12, 2004
    This story is totally awesome. Oh I hope you don't get bored with it and write loads and loads of chapters. It is a real pleasure to read. I will have to keep checking back to see when you do an update.
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  • From ANON - padawan_jinx on November 11, 2004
    Well I only needed a quick fic to pass the time away and so far, this one has turned out to be a surprise! :D I have passed by the hospital in this fic, and though I have only been to Vancouver a handful of times, I absolutely LOVE the place and you couldnt pick a better spot to start off thory!ory! Oh, I have that shirt too , "i may not be perfect...ect'.... my adopted sisin Nin New Brunswhick sent me one and told me I'm an honorary Canadian. :D If it wasnt so cold, i'd defect there in a heartbeat! Well i'm off to read another chapter....

    PJ
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  • From ANON - Alaskan Blue on November 11, 2004
    As a standard Mary Sue it does read about average. I'll be honest its not exactly my kind of MS, I usually like characters that are closer to my personality and this one is pretty far from me. I would encourage you to keep writing because I think you've got a lot of potential and will probably develop a very unique style in the next few years for fanfiction writing or something more professional if you choose to pursue it. There's only a couple of things I would like to point out. You're using a lot of elven terms in this story and while that's perfectly fine it is very frustrating for a person who isn't familiar with what they mean. I would suggest putting a translation at the beginning or end of each chapter so that people like me know what they're saying it makes for much easier reading. Lastly, you've either got a really good grasp of grammar and spelling or a great beta, or some combination of both. I think I only saw one typo (and I'm not sure) and it is very easy to read sentence and paragraph structure wise. I am curious though because from your subject and some of the points made in the plot, how old are you? It's fine if you don't want to respond.
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  • From ANON - Alaskan Blue on November 10, 2004
    I started reading this because I was in the mood for a Mary Sue and I liked the first part of it, but the fact that you had your female character know about LOTR kind of killed it for me. I think Mary Sue fics are better when the MS doesn't know anything about the world they're in, it makes it more interesting to have them unfamiliar, because then the MS holds all the cards. She knows everything about the love interest and he/she knows nothing about her. It kills the anticipation of the "getting to know you" period. I'm going to go ahead and read the rest of what you have posted and I'll let you what I think.
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