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Reviews for A Prince's Desire

By : nimeme
  • From on July 16, 2004
    Poor Legolas... so sad. Thank goodness he has Elladan :o)
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  • From ANON - Minuial on July 16, 2004
    Oh wow. . . . . that was heartbreaking. Poor Legolas, on the verge of fading. :( Thank the Valar for Elladan.

    Speaking of Elladan. . . . .I like the way you've portrayed his character. He seems very opnd und understanding. I'm glad Legolas has found him. A lot of girls have always seemed to favor Elrohir, but I'm one of those who's always had a weak spot for Elladan. Thank you for making him such a good character in this fic.

    So, I wonder if Haldir is weakening at all to the pince's charms? Dunno, guess I'll have to keep reading to find out.

    Btw, glad you're on a roll. Keep writing and I'll keep reviewing. Cheers

    Minuial
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  • From ANON - Malï¨al on July 15, 2004
    Good chapter. Though I have a question. When Legolas had that kind of memory flashback of his fathertingting him, did that really happen or it ait a dream he'd had or something? I kind of got the impression that it had really happened. My goodness, Thranduil is a real bitch of a father isn't he? In the story I am writing about Legolas, I've described Thranduil as a good father. It takes guts to make a well-known character hated, so for that, I bow down befoou. ou. :) Well done mate.

    As a sidenote, though, I think the battle sequence was a little unclear and I had to go back and read it a couple times before I understood what had happened, hehe. It's no big deal, really, but maybe explain more exactly what the battle entails next time. But you're doing really well, so don't stress, mate. :)

    Also, I'd like to thank you for being such a good updater. I check everyday to see if you've updated, and I always get a little thrill when I see that you've added a chapter. Some writers usually take at least a month to update, and that always sucks.

    Yeah, yeah I'm talking a lot, but can I ask you a favor? Could you maybe check out my story that I've written and tell me what you think? It's called Golden One: Story of a Prince in the LotR book section (it's not in the male/male section). It'd be great if I could get a fellow writer's opinion.

    Anyway, keep writing and I'll keep reviewingove ove ya!

    Minuial
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  • From ANON - Minuial on July 14, 2004
    Poor wittle Legolas. . . I just feel like running up and giving him a hug. I really hope that he finds some kind of solace and peace in Rivendel
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    I must say one thing for Legolas, he sure has a strong will. If "I" had one of the sexy Peredhil twins making advances on me, I doubt I would be able to say now. Hehe. Elladan seems like such a nice and understanding elf, I'm glad Legolas has found a friend who doesn't immediately want to "bed" him. . . .or does he? I don't know, I'll just wait and find out when you update next.

    Can't wait four nur next update! I look forward to the contact and *ahem* chemistry between Haldir and our beloved prince. Cheers!

    Minuial
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  • From ANON - Minuial on July 10, 2004
    Ack, Haldir's mean! How could he throw poor Leggy? Still, I find his cold, hard demeanor somewhat. . . . sexy.

    And the Twins! Gah! I love the twins! My favorite stories always include the twins! Sounds like Elladan is a very decent fellow and Elrohir is a very *ahem* forward one.

    Anyway, keep writing, and I'll keep reviewing!

    Btw, I'm adding you to my favs list. ;)

    Minuial
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  • From ANON - Minuial on July 09, 2004
    *starts pummeling Aew's father with fists* What an asshole. If I were Legolas, I would have kicked his ass. Sorry, I get all wrapped up in stories. Gosh, that was a depressing chapter. Now I feel all sad.

    You have a good grasp on the way Tolkien's character's spoke. I like how you don't use a modern way of speaking that so many other fanfic writers do.

    Keep writing, it's good. I'll continue to read and review.:)
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  • From ANON - Minuial on July 09, 2004
    Hmmm, this story does show promise and is interesting so far. Poor Aew! That was a depressing conclusion to the chapter. I'm guessing that it was orcs that shot him? I could be wrong.

    But anyway, keep writing. Though I do have a suggestion. Try and describe more details such as their surroundings, what time of day it is, what they're wearing. True, such intricate details are not needed, but you'd be surprised at how much they can give your story an extra boost.

    Anywho, keep writing, and I'll keep reading and reviewing. Best of luck to you!

    Minuial
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