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Reviews for The Fallen

By : ElvenDemagogue

From ANON - Beth on January 06, 2005
Just out of curiosity, which of you wrote this one? It doesn't say. I like it, even though I'm not the biggest of Boromir fans. Hee.
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From ANON - Beth on November 28, 2004
Wow, I loved this story so much. Is Sons of the Steward its sequel? Haven't read that one yet. I want Legolas to return for Vana...duhduhduuuuuhhh! XD Ahem. Yeah. So whipped, man. I am completely addicted.
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From ANON - Rangerlady on September 22, 2004
Oh, this SOOOOO cries for a sequel! I mean, come on... the consequences of Aragorn wearing the ring, if only for a short period of time. Legolas threatening to come back in a year, the whole Boromir situation... yes *nodds her head and starts poking authors* this certainly has "Sequel" written all over it. *jumps up and down*

Congrats on another fantastic story finished!!! Sorry, this review is short and sweet, but it is morning over here and I have to hurry to start work. :)
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From ANON - Rangerlady on September 19, 2004
*glaring daggers at authors*

Lucky YOU you gave me back my Steward. *hugs Boromir and gets out the athelas* And don't you hurt him again, he needs to be perfectly fit to *cough, cough* fullfil certain duties as the story continues. *g*

Those two remind me a bit of Red and Scarlett (don't laugh), obviously crazy about each other, but they would rather swallow their tongue before they would ever admit it, lol!

Cannot wfor for the next chapter and still love the fact you keep updating so frequently these days.

BTW, I was watching a French movie with my hubby a few days ago and got a nice idea out of it which you might find interesting for a new story. Will tell you about it once I find the tto gto go to the KOMS message board, OK?

CYA!
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From ANON - Marianne on September 17, 2004
It is fascinating to speculate on how Sauron's darkness would affect respective members of the Fellowship and their allies. I have enjoyed your stories (those that I have read, I think I am beginning to sense your style). And, of course, any kind of Boromir sexuality has me glued. Umm...has me riveted. Umm..well you get the idea. Time to pop in Lady Chatterly. Umm, watch it. Oh dear. Maybe just a cold shower? Please finish the story, must know what happens to Legolas, if Boromir et al escape.
Marianne
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From ANON - MoonSong on September 17, 2004
AWESOME, YA'LL!!!! Keep the pys pys coming, PLEASE!! I believe this is my fav storey yet, and I keep up with a BUNCH of them!! Gotta love the ever luscious Dark Legolas!! And Boromir aint so bad hisself, but WHAT HAPPENED TO HIM??? IS HE DEAD??? And who was the conduit that turned poor ole Legolas???? MORE MORE MORE MORE!! Its like a S&M soap opera with Elves for stars...
Blessed Be.....
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From ANON - deathskiss on September 14, 2004
Ohhhhh; Dark Legolas- my guilty pleasure. I love the way this story is going- update soon!
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From ANON - Rangerlady on September 14, 2004
I really enjoy the snappy banter between Boromir and the OFC in this story, very well done, I love it, when women are bitchy enough to verbally stand there ground, lol! And as for Bormir: Mind you, one really cannot make up one's mind, whether to kiss him or slap him, lol! But he *is* cute in a gruff sort of way! :)

And it's no use hiding your dream, Boromir, we girls *know* you dreamt of *HER*! :)

Interesting conversation between Legolas and Elrond. I liked the phrase about a fallen creature in a fallen place, very sad! And yes, Elrond, it was a downright stupid idea to go inside, silly...

OK, I am gready and I can only say, I want updates, updates, updates. *gives authors the Elrond LOOK*

BTW, don't even beginn to think, I have forgotten about your other stories, I will seriously start kicking your more precious body parts in the nearer future until you start posting new chapters for "Winter's Heart" for example. I told you I love the twins, especially when they are being naughty boys, lol!

See you on the message board, will post again in a few days and tell you about my encounter with some of the guys.
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From ANON - Rangerlady on September 02, 2004
You know, this may perhaps be one of your best stories, because it has such a strong plotline.

I like the interaction between Legolas, Boromir and your OC. What I truely love about this story: You have often used the motive of oneyouryour characters succumbing to darkness, but never was one of your OCs in danger of falling to the dark forces, this is the first time and it makes such a difference IMHO. Legolas as the one who has already sided with the dark forces and Bormor and your OC are in danger of doing so as well. The argument between Boromir and your OC were highly entertaining and the dream sequence was just brilliant, as one only realizes towards the end, that it is in fact Sauron she was tricked to lay with, not Boromir. I really think you should keep up the idea of having your characters change their positions (I was trying to find a different phrase for that, but I am too tired to think of one, hope you understand what I mean anyhow), it makes your stories less predictable. Because otherwise, it becomes really easy after a while to make out how things work: OC (generally good girl), elf or human (the bad guy for the hot N/C stuff ;) ), elf or human (the good guy coming to the rescue and the final happy end bed fun). Not that I don't enjoy that, mind you... *g* But you are taking your story two steps further this twhicwhich is a good thing. Surprise the readers.

I also liked the dream sequence, because I felt it was vwellwell and carefully written. It is nice to have these little details like rain on one's face etc. It makes the picture more vivid.

And BTW, since I am to lazy to go over there and post there, too: I like your latest story, too. Here, again, your female OC is appearently not the totall good girl, but quite inscrutable regarding her motives, which makes her all the more interesting.
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From ANON - MoonSong on August 28, 2004
Another freaky, goth, tortuous love storey from hell..I love it!! U just must add more to this one, it rocks! Theres nothin sexier than a dark Legolas..even tho something that LOOKS like that would be hard pressed to find someone to rape. Keep em comin (hehe) and blessed be, ya'll!
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From ANON - Jodi on August 20, 2004
Very nice concept. I like this aspect of Legolas and it's good to finally see Boromir portrayed with honor. Too often, people turn him into a brute. There are a few grammatical errors, but nothing that detracts from the story. I'm anxious for more. I would especially be interested to know if Haldir may perchance make an appearance. Hurry and post more. This is one of the storstories I haven't given up on after a few paragraphs. It's not some dreamy-eyed female succumbing to Legolas' noble charms. This one is fresh. More!
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From ANON - Rangerlady on August 18, 2004
Hi, ladies! :)

I am terribly sorry, I haven't been able to write a review for such a long , bu, but as you know, it took me some time to recover from my accident plus my laptop is giving me a bit of trouble, so I can't stay on the net too long, before it shuts down. However, I just wanted the both of you know, that I am still keeping up with your stories and loving all of them. I finished reading Broken Dream on your website. I wasn't too fond of that one at first, mainly because I was sceptical that the incest theme would fit into your writing scheme for your LOTR stories which I always felt had a lot to day with power and dominance combined with a scenario of being exposed to the enemy. I felt that didn't quite work with the incest part, as this is a different kind of concept. And don't get me wrong, I am not at all opposed to the incest idea (in stories only, of course!!!), I am just not sure, as I said, it really works with your kind of writing concept. However, I totally LOVED the OC-Elrond part, that was really beautiful: Interesting basis to begin with (marriage for "political" reasons) that evolves into true love and passion. After you portrayed Elrond as a mean bastard *g* a few times it was a very nice change to see him the way you portrayed him, very nice job.

Back to this very story I am reviewing: Totally loving it so far, I think chapter 3t hat have been one of the longest chapters you have ever posted, right? And Boromir won't win an Olympic medal for good behaviour and politeness, I feag* Cg* Can't wait for updates. Are you concentrating on finishing those stories now? Because with all the new ones you started (about five, I think) I lost touch at one point regarding what was happening in which story, lol!

Anyway, keep up the great work and don't worif Iif I don't review as often as I used to, I am still one of your very faithful readers. Hope you two ladies are doing well otherwise and a cha chance to enjoy the summer. We had our fair share of sunshine as well as some heavy rain over here in good old Europe, but I am glad we didn't get another eight week heat wave like the one we had last year! :)

Take care!
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From ANON - marianne on August 11, 2004
I look forward to the next chapter. I love Boromir and an original female character or even a taken canon one. The smuttier the better. Please, do continue!
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From ANON - Sivan on July 20, 2004
"Legolas maybe dead"?

More will be much welcome.

I love what I read so far.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic, just don't kill Legolas.

Sivan
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