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Reviews for Voices In The Dark

By : Nikkiling
  • From ANON - Crowdaughter on August 04, 2005
    Hi!
    WOW!!!! The personality shifts are written marvelously and leave me breathless. And Saeldis is quite aputz.Not very diplomatic to mention that specialsentence in the very house of Elrond and to the sons of Celebrian, but then it was not meant for *them* to hear, mainly, wasn*'t it? Grrr!!! What aglibry git!

    You write great. This fic has me hooked good, although I came late to read it.

    Aislynn


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  • From ANON - Crowdaughter on August 04, 2005
    Hi!
    Now, isn't Saeldis a nice one... wasting no time to make sure his host has the worst possible impression about the just arriving new guest,and being quite delighted when he sees it has the desired effect. Normally, one would ask himselfif Saeldis suspected that his charge had started the fire on purpose, and was of a disturbed mind, why he did not tell Legolas father,and would think it significant that he had left Mirkwood afterwards. But then, Elrond is not too believing either... PoorLegolas. I am very concerned about him (or should I say, them?)

    Aislynn
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  • From ANON - Crowdaughter on August 04, 2005
    Hi!

    This is an unbelievable good story! You deal with MPS here in a quiet astounding way, and very well, too; and it works! The shifts and mood swings are very well described, and Legolas behavioris very intriguing. I aöso like the idea of the wary trees.Great fic and very well written! Thank you for this!!!

    Aislynn
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  • From ANON - Frances Rolfe on April 06, 2005
    I wanted to compliment you on what an excellent story you've written. It was very believable in all ways, the flashbacks, the multiple personalities, etc. I totally enjoyed it. Also, the bonding ceremony is perhaps one of the beautiful versions I've read. Great job!
    Frances
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  • From ANON - Sarah on March 30, 2005
    Wow. Just wow. This whole story is amazing.

    I normally avoid this kind of story, rape is not for me. However, it was recommended to me by a close friend, so I took a look. I started to read and you had me hooked. It is just fantastic. You made me cry too, curse you, but it is really an excellent story.

    The way you developed each of the different 'voices', his personalities, was wonderful. There was a depth to each of the characters that it would have been easy to miss out on, but you managed to make each of the splinter personalities realistic.

    I'm not a fan of abusive Thranduil, but a busy Thranduil is very believable. Thank you for keeping his integrity intact, even if he was neglectful.

    I also appreciate how you were careful to put in a lot of time between Legolas returning from the Halls and he and Glorfindel admitting what they felt. Many stories that have the main character raped usually have the whole Healing Sex (tm) with whoever happens to be the chosen love interest. And also that taking the step was difficult for Legolas. There were memories very much alive within him if given sway, and usually authors forget that being abused and raped is traumatic. Victims do often become asexual, and it is so wonderful to read a well written and thought out story that I can't even begin to describe it to you. You dealt with a difficult topic well, not with the callus disregard many authors these days, most of which use it as a plot device.

    I'll stop my ramble now, I have to get going, but anyways, a great story, wonderful effort.

    ~Sarah
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  • From ANON - Yanic on March 03, 2005
    Oh that was awesome! But what do you mean "The End" it can't end! What about Thranduil's reaction? I guess I don't want it to end, an absolutely great story!! I'll have to go back and read it again and wait to see what you come out with next! Thanks for creating such a wonderful story!
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  • From MorierBlackleaf on March 03, 2005
    Ah, the Lorien brothers, eh? I suppose that must be the next plot on the burner, eh? Wonderful, eh? Eh? Eh? Ok, I'll stop being a wanton jackass. :-) I liked the bonding ceremony -- never read one at all like it! Very inventive! Mmm, apples and honey. I think I could have helped them get cleaned up, though. And yes, I think you WILL have to hurry up and begin the next story. :-)
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  • From ANON - Thalionwen on March 03, 2005
    Thank you for a wonderful, rich tale... :)
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  • From Ertia on March 03, 2005
    Beautiful. Simply absolutely beautiful. The bonding ceremony itself brought tears to my eyes... the blessings of the elements. And the physical bonding...HOT!!!!
    I loved every word of this story and I'm sad to see it end. But satisfied, too. As though everything has come full circle. *sigh* Thank you so much for sharing this!
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  • From ANON - Ertia on February 27, 2005
    :D
    Awww! Glori and Legs are being all cute again! Loved the merging of the personalities. Wish we could have had one last talk with Ravan about the whole thing, but alas, I guess it's all for the best! Whoo hooo! Lets go spy on the bonding, shall we?
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  • From MorierBlackleaf on February 27, 2005
    I liked the description of how the many Leggy's became one. I think you belie instead of belay, though. You know, I'd never really thought of it like that, but I suppose an elven ear is leaf-shaped, isn't it? :-) Well, that was not a nice place to end the chapter, but I suppose I should be happy that there will be another to read after this. Will the next be the last? *cries*

    Finish a story before you start another one? Gee, that's a novel idea. :-) Wish I had thought of that. Anyway, you have a LJ? I'll have to find you, then, because you know I'll want to read what you are writing, the moment you post it to the web. Nope, I have no idea how the equivalency works. It is not really equivalent... I mean, if one human life = one eternity, than how does one divide say 70 years by eternity? I think it is measured in something like 144 human years to one elven, but I can't remember! Go check the encyclopedia of middle earth for it. If I had a better internet connection, I'd do it for you, but alas...

    Anyway, I ramble. Wonderdful, as always, and I tearfully and horn-ily await the next installment!

    Morier
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  • From ANON - Yanic on February 27, 2005
    Yay, he's finally one! I'm so glad that it was a calm affair, it seemed much more fitting. And while Legolas's healing was well and good, I can't wait for his sexual healing. lol. Bring on the elf-smut! Although on a more serious note, I found this line "As he did so the twilight eyes opened, and Glorfindel could see dusk drawing near." to be absolutley fantastic. Very pretty and poetic. Keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 19, 2005
    What an absolutely fantastic chapter! The revelation of their love was so beautiful it was everything I'd hoped it would be and more. This has got to be one of the best stories I've read. The only thing I'd wish for would be to see some of Legolas' journies to Mirkwood. I would love an interlude showing him getting reaquainted his family and rediscovering his home through new eyes. But regardless, I love this story and I love you!
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  • From ANON - Crookis on February 18, 2005
    Hmmm, this chapter could only have been better had Legolas gotten his back rub. That said, It was beyond my expectations. (although it would have been nice to see a little more of Legolas in mirkwood)

    If you like the Princess Bride you should read the book. (if you havn't already) There is two versions, and I recommned the newer one.
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  • From ANON - Yanic on February 18, 2005
    Wow. That was great, you should do more of that!
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