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Reviews for Voices In The Dark

By : Nikkiling
  • From ANON - MorierBlackleaf on January 04, 2005
    YEAH! Legolas is awake and ostensibly better. It's so cute that Elanor finds Glorfindel to be her new hero. :-) And I like the switch to third peson plural when Legolas et al are talking. Makes it very clear that the personalities are no longer as divided, both within the consciousness and via the expression thereof in behavior and language. Ah, but your writing is taking the tone of that it's-almost-over flavor that makes me worry! Don't end it anytime soon!

    That is very good story fodder. And a very interesting form of aid to the mentally ailing. Just goes to show, however, that the simplest treatments are those that deal with the underlying problems rather than the symptoms. Ah well. Glad to see you've updated!
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  • From ANON - Jasmine on January 03, 2005
    Really enjoying your story!!! I just have one suggestion: I think you mean "palpable" instead of "palatable" in this chapter (and maybe in one other, too?)... when you say "the emotion was almost palpable in the air" it means it was thick enough to almost be solid, touchable. But "palatable" means something that is agreeable to your palate - i.e. tastes good. :)

    Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Yanic on January 01, 2005
    Ooo! I liked that chapter, and even though I've grown to hate him, that part with Saeldis really worked, it was totally unexpected (b/c lets be honest how many other authors would protray the "bad guy" in a different light) but I feel it added to the story, oh and I liked Legolas's mother being there, and Elrond having been all upset and .... actually I liked the whole cahpeter and can't wait to read the next
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  • From ANON - Ertia on December 26, 2004
    *picks up phone* "Hey, Santa! You know that thing I mentioned... nah, forget it. It's all good. In fact, maybe you can stick a little something extra on that delivery?"
    All is forgiven!
    Fabulous work! I like Oiolaires back-story! You made that work so beautifully! :) Very well done, indeed.
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  • From ANON - eep on December 24, 2004
    This story continues to exceed almost all others I've read. I love it!
    Sorry for the lack of reviews and the shortness of this one, but my computer met an untimely demise. I had to use my mother's computer to even leave this review. She's puttering behind my back as I type. (Pretty uncomfortable to be on aff.net with her over my shoulder, but I digress...)

    Anyhow, I lovelovelove this! Truly exceptional death of Master Saldeis, wonderful meeting of all the spirits within Legolas' mind, thrilling to see within Mandos' Halls, and so exciting to be brought back to life! I'm so looking forward to watching the healing begin and can't wait for more. (Hopefully my computer will get fixed so I can actually read it:)

    Happy holidays and thank you for your masterful work
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  • From ANON - Crookis on December 24, 2004
    Yay! Cute as elfling Glorfindel and Legolas would have been I'm very happy they don't have to grow up agian before they get together. I'm kinda currious about that human god though, I was under the impression all the peoples' or middle earth beleived in the Vala seeing as the Vala made them. But then this is AU and you can do what ever you want. ^_^

    (on another note, if you ever feel the need doing an alternate ending were they are reborn as elflings would be neat. Just imagine all the pointlessly cute things they could argue over...)
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  • From ANON - MorierBlackleaf on December 23, 2004
    Scary indeed. No need to apologize for the ramble. I love rambling. Great description of the Halls of Waiting. And poor Saedlis -- at least he will obtain some happiness. I've felt sort of sorry for him this whole time, merely because he seemed to have his own unresolved issues. How very true! Pain does beget pain. The statistics seem to evince that very thing. That is a very interesting book you've mentioned. I'll have to try to find it. Drug treatment in the mental health field does seem to be the easy way out. I suppose that the problem is rather the reliance on forms of medicine as therapy due to the intensity required for psychotherapy or other means of 'talking' therapies. In fact, I once had a psychologist tell me that the worst thing that ever happened to psychology was psychiatry. So, in short though, what method did this doctor use for treatment? I mean, was it psychoanalysis or hypnosis or regression or what? Um, updates to my stories are coming....

    (runs far, far away)
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  • From ANON - Ertia on December 21, 2004
    Oh! You're EVILLLLL! That's not nice at all! Fix this! Fix this right now! Or I'm calling Santa and cancelling all of your presents!

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  • From ANON - Capella on December 21, 2004
    Great story!
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  • From ANON - Yanic on December 21, 2004
    AHHH! You can't stop there!!! Despite your assurances of a happy ending, I gotta admit I'm nervous! Can't wait to read the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Crookis on December 21, 2004
    Åh! Don't kill Glorfindl! Don't kill Legolas ether for that matter. I sincerly hop your not going to do one of those 'they meet again in the next life' that would be just evil. That aside i really enjoyed this chapter (despite the heart attack at the end) and I really liked Legolas' litte relevation.
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  • From ANON - Dead Winter on December 21, 2004
    Please say that they are not all going to fade. I like Elenor and Ravan and Oiolaire, and even Morehua is interesting, and Legolas and Glorfindel are sweet together. So please don't let them die. I'm very attattched to the personalities.
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  • From ANON - uppacrick on December 21, 2004
    You are a wicked elfling! The End. INDEED! Very funny.
    I have been following this story faithfully and have enjoyed your skillful telling of it, sad though it may be. With this little note, I wish to impart the encouragement to you that I have been remiss in giving all along the way. Keep up the good work. Thank you for sharing your talent and reminding us that even the most beautiful are not without scars -- scars often caused by the very real monsters who walk among us in this world.
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  • From ANON - MorierBlackleaf on December 20, 2004
    You're welcome. Yes, we do seem to think along the same lines. Maybe we have the same mental deficiencies? ;-)

    Evil chapter... just how I like it. Have you decided how you are picking up the many pieces in which you have left our poor Legolas?
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  • From ANON - zed on December 19, 2004
    Ok, feeling a little bit sorry for Glorfindel. Hindsight - perfect in clarity, useless in practicality! He doesn't get full forgiveness though 'cos it wasn't like he didn't have a clue as to what was going on.

    You're just going to have to practise some more if you have troublr killing of the bad guys. You don't have to post it up but I really think it would be a good writing exercise to re-do the death scene but make Saeldis suffer some more.

    Still trying to think of a punishment for you but it is a bit hard trying to be evil so close to Christmas (actually I'd prefer to celebrate the Winter Solstice but it's hard to fight all the commercalisation).
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