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Reviews for Voices In The Dark

By : Nikkiling
  • From ANON - Crookis on December 14, 2004
    Your writting ability continues to amaze me, I also think I'm growing quite to fond of Glorfindel. (Legolas better be careful...) Looking forward to the next update with much anticipaion as usual.
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  • From ANON - Ertia on December 13, 2004
    Oh dear. It truly doesn't look very good at the moment, does it? And poor Glori, to have to deal with such a thing. I wonder if he needs comforting? Perhaps I should give him a call. ;)
    I love the insight we get into Elrond here - that moment when his careful facade cracks for an instant, and we see how much this eats at him. Very well done!
    Don't apologize for taking this from psychology to parapsychology. We love both!
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  • From ANON - Yanic on December 13, 2004
    Yay for happy endings! And you do not suck! I love this story and can't wait to see how it all turns out... can't imagine what else can happen to the poor guy...makes me want to nurse him back to help or rather let Glory do that lol eagerly anticipating the next installment!
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  • From ANON - MorierBlackleaf on December 13, 2004
    The 'oh my' was one of not knowing what to say to such wonderfully explicit violence. You know what's funny? I hadn't even thought about it reading like the death scene in Even the Odds until you mentioned it. In fact, I was more worried that a death scene I had planned many moons ago for another WIP story I'm writing would end up sounding like yours when I wrote it, and I would be accused of plagiarizing! But yeah, I can see the resemblance now, and stop dithering yourself into a lather, I don't mind. :-) It's not really THAT similar, and even if it is, I'm sure my subconscious picked it up from another story or movie or something, or perhaps we tapped into the collective unconscious, which meted out such a fine delicacy of bad guy murdering. Just desserts, indeed!

    Morier
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  • From ANON - zed on December 12, 2004
    Well well well, I finally get my internet connection back and what do I find has been going on in my absence? A certain fanfiction writer has developed an obsession with cliff hangers it would seem. Torturing both characters and readers is extremely naughty and raises the question of how one can dole out punishment in cyberspace. I'll have to think on it.

    After all Saeldis has done I think he died a bit too quickly. The cutting up of the body was all very well but he couldn't feel it and it only put Legolais in a bad light. Wasn't it only in chapter 21 or so that Ravan pointed out if they killed Saeldis before exposing him as a monster it would only look bad on them? I liked how the real Legolas made an appearance. Does that mean we're actually going to hear his voice at last? After all the grusome things that have just gone on a little bit of cute fluffyness would be nice. It is almost Christmas after all!

    Ah Glorfindel. What can we say there. If only, if only. Yes he deserves to have that going through his head. Couldn't believe it when he stopped to help Saeldis in the first place and then just let him go of on his own without a thought that he might go after Legolas for revenge. Elrond might want someone else to look after Rivendell's defences.
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  • From ANON - Ertia on December 07, 2004
    Oh! OhNo!
    Oh, this isn't good! This is bad. very very bad! I mean, Saeldis deserved to die, and really, I probably would have dismembered him while he still lived...but oh... wow.
    Intense intense chapter! I kept waiting for Glorfindel to come in and save the day, and with each new paragraph was asking, "WHERE is he? Why isn't he rescuing Legolas!" :) Loved this chapter, even for all its gore and horror. Saeldis deserved it. Every last bit!

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  • From ANON - Dead Winter on December 07, 2004
    *Grabs covers.* You...you...if he dies...you are WAY too good at suspense, girl!
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  • From ANON - Yanic on December 06, 2004
    that was wicked disturbing and gross and I LOVED IT!!!! Oh what a climactic chapter, I mean I'm not a big fan of Legolas getting raped and all that but that was just intense! Loved the dismemberment and the reactions of the "rescuers" Now comes the real question, does Legolas get a happy ending?
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  • From ANON - Crookis on December 06, 2004
    This chapter is just so good, I can't think of any words that woudn't just sound stupid. It's just, really, really, good. Please write more!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ash on December 06, 2004
    OMG! This story is so wonderful!! You've done a remarkable job on both grammar and spelling, as well as keeping everyone 'in character', even with consideration of Legolas' multiple personalities. I totally adore little Elanor, she's so cute! (I loved how she braided a feather into Legolas' hair and he got pissed afterwards) I can't believe I didn't read this sooner. It's wonderful!

    On a quick note though, which I hope you don't take any offence to, because it certainly isn't meant that way, Elves don't use slang, so 'ok' is a word I doubt they'd use, besides the fact the word didn't yet exist.

    Other then that, it's completely awesome! Please don't let Legolas die :( I love seeing Glorfindel take care of him. They're so sweet together, and Legolas/Glorfindel is actually one of my favourite pairings ^_^

    Please write more soon!

    ~Ash
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  • From ANON - Morier on December 06, 2004
    ....................oh my.........................
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  • From ANON - Karen on December 06, 2004
    This was sad, so sad for them to go through all they went through. Glad the bastard is dead though, and hope Legolas heals iin both ways.
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  • From ANON - MorierBlackleaf on December 04, 2004
    Hmmm. Think I missed a couple of chapters. Wonderful couple of chapters, they were. What an evil cliffie! I'm very angry/happy with you for it. :-P I say hurrah for overkill -- but this doesn't seem like overkill. Unless you plan to have Sirians save Legolas with their spaceship, you're safe from overkill. Looking foward to more,

    Morier
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  • From ANON - Yanic on December 03, 2004
    O_o what a cliffhanger!! Loved the ending, ut can't wait to see what happenens next and maybe Glory can come to his rescue?
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  • From ANON - Yanic (back from vaca) on December 03, 2004
    Yay go Mórehua, oh wait is that wrong to want him to kill the bastard? Oh well love the chapter, although for a little while I was concerned that he was going to be violated again
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