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Reviews for Voices In The Dark

By : Nikkiling

From ANON - lelann on November 15, 2004
ooohhh, the plot thickens! glorefindel and legolas relationship is wonderful, i love it! i can't wait to see what you write next!
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From ANON - zed on November 12, 2004
Wow, what a chapter. Finally got an explanation of what you meant when you said Legolas wasn't the original. There are two of them. Was that cheating a little bit? I'll let you off if you get a happy ever after ending.
Feels like a 'balencing on a knife edge' part of the story. They.ve found out what's wrong but don't know how to fix it and are running out of time. I think I indentify with Elrond the most. He's interested about it on several levels, healer, scientific, mere curiousity but seems more detached.
On an optimistic note it seems if they can heal the mind then the body will heal its self. However, by the looks of it, if the mind heals the 'original' Legolas gets to come out to play. Ravan said he was 'very young'. How young exactly? Is poor Glory going to have to wait for Legolas to grow up before he gets his lover? I wouldn't mind cos it would mean a longer story but Glorfindel might be a bit dissappointed.

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From MorierBlackleaf on November 10, 2004
Hmm, I think I missed a chapter or two. But hey, made a long, enjoyable read for today! Anyway, you've done an excellent job of indicating Legolas' inner turmoil about trusting Elrond and Glorfindel. Gee, he couldn't even trust his magistra -- still feeling sorry for the poor Elf! The change in eye colors is very effective. I can't remember, but this is G/L, eh? ;-)

Morier
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From ANON - trytoobeeornot2b on November 10, 2004
Hi, I've been following your story from the start. Sorry I haven't posted to tell you how wonderful it is. I constantly come here to adultfanfiction just to see if maybe this time we got an extra post. (I know wishfull thinking that I'm sure your muses don't appriciate. )

On the were to put your story there are sites like this where you post directly to the site and there are lists where people allso post. http://www.aragorn-legolas.5u.com, Cassia's site Melorn Chronicles would be a place it could go when it's done. (I don't remember if you said you were going to do slash or not. If no slash it could go there. MC is a slash-free site, even though on occation it's moderators have read some. Even if you do end up with slash at the end maybe you could author it in such a maner that you could easily write a non slash version too? Then it could go there. I'm sure it would be okay if slashless.) She does have a list on yahoo were works in progress are posted, and it's a fun list, it's watched so flames and stupid little wars can't start which is pretty good for a list with over 1000 people on it. Fanfiction.net is usless they pull stories and ban authors without every reading the stories. All someone has to do is complainmeonmeone complained about one of Cassia's stories there (one of her more tame ones so I don't get it at all) and Fanfiction.net pulled her story and banned her for awhille. Soooooo I would recomend avoiding them. Eternal at http://www.intense-illusions.net/eternal/search.php?action=recent might be okay but they're not much better for updating, infact they might be a little worse. You might want to consider joining some of the bigger lists, your stories are posted allot quicker that way. Cassia's is one but there are a bunch of good lists targeted to a large varity of fanfiction intersts and I could send you that info privavly if you want it. On the technology side it's very easy to post on a list, if you need help I'd be happy to walk you through it.

Again I LOVE your story please keep writting!!!
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From ANON - Elwenlj on November 10, 2004
This is a deep and thought provoking work. A masterpiece.looklook forward to each new chapter, eagerly. I note you say you have a live journal. Have you considered posting this at . . . http://www.livejournal.com/userinfo.bml?user=lotr_fanfiction? It's a friendly site that allows posting of all sorts of LOTR stories, as long as they are properly headed.

I'm waiting, breathlessly, for your future chapters. Thank you again for sharing your considerable talent.
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From ANON - Crookis on November 09, 2004
Wonderful chapter! The talk between Elrond and Raven was tastefully criptic (Meaning it's driving me crazy!) and Legolas' Panic was cute. Looking forward to many more Legolas/Glorfindel interactions! (As well as seeing Elrond enter Legolas' mind if he ever does)
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From ANON - Yanic on November 09, 2004
Ahh awesome as usual! Have you taken psychology classes? b/c you're descriptions of Legolas's mental issues are right on track with what I'm learning in my psych. class, lol I can read this story and be "studying" Can't wait for the next chapter!
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From ANON - eep on November 09, 2004
I don't know how you do it, but you continue to exceed my expectations! I have long been anticipating the meeting with Elrond and the following revelations and this was everything I could have wanted and m I l I loved Legolas' nervousness and bravery, the others coming out to play, and the following converstaion. I also love the budding relationship with Glorfindel that will hopefully blossom into delicious slash. *sigh* I'm still having palpitations from your excellent writing.
Thank the Valar for Ravan and the light he was able to shed on the situation. I'd be extremely anxious right now about them fading and the presence of Master Saeldis if I didn't know this was going to have a happy ending. This will have a happy ending, right? Of course it will. You know your loyal readers will hunt you down otherwise;) That's not to say there wont be lots of angst before we get there and I'm looking forward to each twist and turn.
Anyhow, you had the right idea about watching a movie during the election. I finally wised up, turned off the news and escaped into fan fiction. I have a feeling I'll be spending a lot of time there in the next four years. Thank you for being my salvation from reality:)
Can't wait for next week and to see where you take us next!
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From ANON - Ertia on November 09, 2004
YAY! The secret is out!
Good for Ravan! Phew...now the long path to putting the pieces together again.
Another fabu chapter. Ho yoo you do it! :)
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From ANON - Thalionwen on November 09, 2004
Masterful! absolutely masterful chapter!!. Not only is the premise for your story utterly fascinating, it is also *very* well written.. As always, I await your next update with baely constrained patience!! :)
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From ANON - Crookis on August 27, 2004
Good as always but teasingly short!!! more please!
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From ANON - zed on November 03, 2004
92 personalities! Wow, gives me a headache just thinking of that many never mind actually having them in your head.
There was a tv program on recently in my area about a woman with DID. She had 7 personalities. 2 were girls and 5 were boys. Is there always a mixture of girls and boys? I don't know if it was just the segments of film they happened to show but the youngest, which was a 5 year old boy, seemed to be the one that came out most of the time. The personalities ranged from 5 to 15 years. How does that compare to others that you've read about and does anyone have a personality older than the host (she was 35)?
Don't know an awful lot about posting on websites myself cos I don't do it at all but I've always found ofelvesandmen.com quiet reliable to read and is updated every week without fail. You're in the best position to say if posting on your LJ is a good idea or not. As many places as you can really cos I really want to see this story to completion!
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From ANON - eep on November 03, 2004
This is most certainly my favorite chapter yet! Th not not easy considering how much I have loved each and every chapter. It was wonderful to see Glory meet Elanor and to see him finally understand what is going on. I was spellbound and can't wait for the talk with Elrond.
I also have to thank you for the timing of this chapter because I certainly needed the destraction from the presedential election. I was driving myself crazy watching the votes come in and your exceptional writing mananged to take me to a better place, so thank you.
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From ANON - Crookis on November 02, 2004
Good to hear! I think I might have a mild heart attack if I even have to read another "I'm so sorry but I just can't finish it" note. WEE! Glorfindel met Elanor (And got called Glory to) That was unbearable cute in a good way.

Suggestions for Arcives: Library of Moria, they don't update as much but they're pretty big. Leoglas in chains, this story might qualify for this arcive but i'm not sure. (That and i'v never seen an update)

You could always make a freewebs account and just put it on the front page.
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From ANON - Ertia on November 02, 2004
YAY! All caught up!
Wonderfully smart of Glorfindel to catch on so fast. And I do hope Legolas talks to Elrond... although it might be far more entertaining if Elanor did it. :D

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