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Reviews for Love Lost and Found

By : Tarlwen
  • From bonksie on May 22, 2008
    AWWWWW
    This is AMAZING.
    Poor Orli, but a fab ending!
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  • From ANON - lelann on October 30, 2005
    oh, i'm so happy that you finished this!!! i loved the ending! sucked that so many people died though...the poor little dear will have to growup without his aunt...but he has 2 lovely daddies now...so sweet...
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  • From ANON - fan on December 20, 2004
    Great new chapter. can't wait for the nxt one, plz cont soon!
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  • From ANON - fan on December 18, 2004
    this is really really good. read all 31 chapters today, plz update soon, cant wait to find out wots happenin....
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2004
    AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sameone save orli
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2004
    AAAHHHH!!!! What are you doing to me you cannot leave it like that write more now right now !!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - angel on December 07, 2004
    absolutly fantastic i was gutted when id read all 29 pages and no more were there please update soon this is a great bit of fiction xx

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  • From ANON - Lia Tobin on November 21, 2004
    This is such a great story! You are an awsome writer, and also very original. You can keep anyone guessing until the very end! I also love how you update so often. Please keep it up, so I can see how this ends!:)
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  • From ANON - Aura on September 26, 2004
    Um ... wow ... is the first thing that comes to mind. Really. This is a great piece of writing. It's so hard to believe you haven't done much writing up to now.

    Hmmm ... lets see ... you're pace I think is just right. It's fast enough to keep the reader interested, and slow enough to build anticipation and suspence. Very well done. I like the "voice" with which you write, it's an easy, flowing kind of story-telling that makes the story comfortable to read and just makes you want to snuggle up and read more. *hinthint*

    If I may make one sugion,ion, set your scenes with more detail. When you tell us that Orlando is lying in a hospital room, what does it look like? Where is the bed? Um ... what is Orlando wearing, or Viggo for that matter? I don't mean describe to death, but give us a .... hmm ... visual que as to what you are seeing in your mind when you write it. It can't possibly improve your excet fit fiction, but it might enrich it to a degree. I don't know ... just a suggestion.

    Again, excellent work. Write more soon!!!
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  • From ANON - eep on September 11, 2004
    What a great story! I love this wonderful Orlando angst and can't wait to find out more of Orli's past. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - sd on September 10, 2004
    Great story-telling

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  • From ANON - The Big S on September 09, 2004
    A quite thrillin' piecea fiction. The ending makes me stay awake night and day. You're killing me.
    PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
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  • From ylith on September 07, 2004
    really very good, sweety darling...the suspense is really starting to build up well, and I look forward to the next installment. UPDATE SOON!!!!
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  • From ANON - Greenleaf's Daughter on September 05, 2004
    Oh please, write more of this lovely story!!! I read the first four chapters yesterday and downloaded the rest just now while scanning over it!!! You write so realistic!!! I like it, really! Please continue!!!

    Greetings from

    Greeny
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