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Reviews for Gone

By : ElvenDemagogue
  • From ANON - gginsc on August 14, 2012
    Hate Aragorn much? He seems to be the bad guy in all your stories. No explanation is given for his behavior in Gone and he was an utter creep in Possession. At least you let most of his victims get away.
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  • From SinKitty on December 12, 2004
    You have done something I cannot do. You have made Aragorn the villian. All I can say is - How could you??? It is terrible. I mean the story was good but it is terrible what you have done to our favorite hero. The King, the ranger, the HEALER. Did you not see the movies?? Do you not remember - "Frodo, I would have gone with you to the end, into the very fires of Mordor." Do you not remember - "For Frodo!!"??? While your story was entertaining and I was glad to see Faramir get the girl for once (because you know that man needs to get him some for dealing with his father), I still cannot recover from the shock of evil Aragorn. I kept waiting for him to pull out the Palantir to explain his madness. What you have done to our hero is Madness!!! I must go cry in my beer now!
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  • From ANON - Dread Lady Freya on November 09, 2004
    Okay, so I guess I owe you an apology for thinking you thought Boromir was a dense as I thought you thought he was. (huh?) I should’ve known you’d have something up his sleeve.

    I was a bit disappointed we never found out why Aragorn was acting the way he was. Was it simply grief? Was it some sort of enchantment? Do you even know? But I am very happy that Faramir finally gets the girl – eve if it’s only for a while.

    One of the benefits I find in your hanging “endings,” is that I can come up with my own endings. Wanna hear how this story actually ends? Too bad, sit back, shut up and read…
    - Aragorn mystuslyusly escapes Minas Tirith, forcing Boromir to hunt him down in the sequel (in which he (Boromir) meets a decidedly non-MarySue OFC named Freya (coincidence? don’t bet on it), they fall in love, get married, have lots of children, and live happily ever after)
    - Idril stays in ME with Faramir (who rules Gondor as Steward until Eldarion comes of age – Boromir is too busy with ‘other things’), they get married, have lots of children and very happily until Faramir dies at a ripe old age, Idril having promised her beloved husband not to follow him, finally goes West where she is comforted by her family and friends and loving memories of Faramir.
    - After Aragorn is removed from the throne, the mysterious darkness is lifted, life is once again worth living and peace and joy reign in ME.
    - Eldarion, despite his questionable parentage, grows up to be a fair and just king, loved by all his subjects.

    Now THAT is how you end a story. So what’s next?
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  • From ANON - Beth on October 27, 2004
    Ooooh. I like this one. I think the less predictable Aragorn is, the bettAlthAlthough I miss Legolas, Iwill make do. Hehehe.
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  • From ANON - Marianne on October 25, 2004
    I want to read the rest of the story!! Please? Is there more? I love the Faramir/Idril pairing. Faramir is such a lovely character, yumm.
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  • From ANON - Rangerlady on October 17, 2004
    Big apology! Sorry ladies if I cannot review as frequently as I normaly woudl, but I have some urgent family business to take care of at the moment and won't be around on a regular basis for a while on either the adultff.net or the MB. But please do not let that discourage you, after all there are many others who are reg ang and loving your stories even if they may not always come out into the open to say so. I will try and read your updates whenever I can and try to be back in touch with you as soon as I can, but right now, RL has completely taken over, I am afraid.

    Take care and hope to be able to talk to you again really soon!

    A. aka Rangerlady
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  • From ANON - moxie on October 11, 2004
    Hmmm...the suspense is killing me! So far this is very sad but quite intriguing. You are both doing a great job. I'm a little confused as to the pairings? Who's with who? Anyways, can't wait to read some more!
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  • From ANON - Rangerlady on October 11, 2004
    *test, test... is this thing on at last?*
    *sends of review to see if it finally makes it through*
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