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Reviews for My Heart's Desire - Part 2. If You Go Away.

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  • From ANON - bernsteinnixe on August 19, 2005
    An update =) I've been waiting for this. You know, this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read, if not *the* best. So, is Lindir always so straightforward? Will there be more of those two, and Legolas/Glorfindel? Anyways, I'm sure Haldir is going to cause himself trouble by following those two. Please, udate soooooon!!!
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on August 19, 2005
    AAH! I cant believe you stopped there!! This is killing me! Update!! Pleeeaase!

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  • From on August 19, 2005
    Will those two ever reconcile as friends if not lovers?
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on August 15, 2005
    I read the last chapter one more time just now. I find the wait increasingly hard endure. Please mail me when update!

    And whyyyyy wont Haldir DO something. Yes, yes of course I know why....but still it's driving me mad!!!
    *takes deep breaths* Ok, patience now...patience.
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  • From ANON - mirasaui on July 10, 2005
    I have not done much reading in the fandom lately, but once I started "My Heart's Desire". I could not tear myself away. I fell in love with the Haldir/Gildor pairing long ago from reading Rune Dancer's "Spoken" Arc. Your story is as different as night and day from hers, yet (to me), has just as big an impact. In fact, your Gildor is the most erotic. breath-taking, god-awful hawt (winks) elf that I have met in a story. No wonder Haldir cannot keep away. I'd grab him myself if I could.

    Seriously, your descriptions, dialogue, and wonderful characterization of both Haldir and Gildor have drawn me in and kept me mesmerized. From part one, where Haldir went through pure hell to get what he desired, to part two where both do everything but communicate. Arrrgh! Gildor wants Haldir for life but is scared Haldir is too young to make such committment. So he gives in to Haldir's every whim but the one that would make Haldir feel more secure in their relationship. Haldir's insecurities make him doubt Gildor's faithfulness - and why not - the elf seems to sleep with all his friends *smiles*. And everyone and his brother is determined to split them apart. Even Rumil, his intention to spare Haldir pain, propagates the rumour that Gildor has more feelings than friendship for the twins.

    Less thought and more talk would solve the problem. But each time one decides to take such action, like a Shakespearian comedy something disastrous happens. They are now in Mirkwood after years of separation and misery and Thranduil (Oh, will Haldir ever love this!)thinks to get them back together. I cannot wait until Haldir catches sight of Gildor's outfit.

    I started reading your story at Library of Moria and found it here on AFF last night with many new chapters. So I read it all over from the beginning. While everyone deserves a vacation and I truly hope you have a wonderful time, I will be biting my nails until your return and next post. An excellent story! Thank you so much for sharing.

    Mirasaui
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  • From ANON - HHS on July 02, 2005
    I would like to apologize to Ryo.I guess I got too emotional about this story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 29, 2005
    Jya, I don't know your email address and can't thank you personally so I'm doing it here. Thank you for your generous praise. :) It still amazes me that people find my writing so enjoyable. Feedback the like of yours helps support my belief in my own abilities. :) Thank you! I'm sorry you'll have to wait for the next chapter but RL is often an interference. ^^

    *hugs*
    Ryo.
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  • From ANON - Jya on June 26, 2005
    *gapes in shock*

    I cannot tell you how enthralled I am with your increadible sequel, not to mention how fantastic I found the first story!

    Oh this is truly brilliant. It is so rare to find such well written characters and plot.

    Brilllliiiiaant!

    I cannot WAIT for more...though it seems I shall have to :(

    *smiles* Kudos to you, this is truly excellent! I eagerly await the next chapter!!

    ~ Jya
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on June 26, 2005
    I'm sorry, but I dont have the time to read the new chapters right now. (but I will be in touch when I have) I just want to give you a huge hug for updating. You've made my day.
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  • From ANON - HHS on June 25, 2005
    If they can't reconcile,then they don't belong together.
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  • From ANON - Shanna on June 25, 2005
    Hola Ryo. Your writing, as always, was just beautiful, rich in description and a pleasure to read. I am wishing to read more, than you are very happy in your vacations...Until soon.
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  • From ANON - Annariel on June 11, 2005
    Hi Ryo, It enchanted me, though i think that Legolas forgave Glorfindel too easy, but It come out wonderful ;) Legolas is so cute, look that he's going to do a song about his experience.. i love him; And Thanduil was marvelous as a indignant father. And poor Haldir, and poor Gildor, why did he run away? Poor thing, he cannot endure the grief to see Haldir :'( uhmm I think that you were too easy in Glorfindel yet, but I love your story, bon voyage and come back soon!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - HHS on June 10, 2005
    Oh crap!Okay,Haldir wasn't faithful and so was Gildor.He should say to Haldir if they are definitely over.Of course that would make Haldir so sad that he might just fade from grief.STUBBORN ELVES!
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  • From ANON - Shanna on June 10, 2005
    Hello Ryo, I am happy for reading a new chapter of this one wonderful story. I am wishing to read more because he is one of my favorite stories, and one of the best ones. You understand something of Spanish? The English is not my first language and is difficult to write the revisions, sorry if it is not written correctly. Greetings.
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  • From ANON - bernsteinnixe on June 10, 2005
    And just when you think things couldn't get any worse.............
    Anyways, please update soon!
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