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Reviews for My Heart's Desire - Part 2. If You Go Away.

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  • From ANON - HHS on May 03, 2005
    They're not back together yet?!Stubborn elves!
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  • From ANON - Giggles on May 03, 2005
    I don't think I can take much more of this!! I want them together and happy. The last chapter did me in. I hate seeing both of them so miserable!!! Please get them back together soon!!!!!!

    I've really enjoyed these two stories. You're a very talented writer.
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  • From ANON - Minuial Nuwing on May 03, 2005
    **head=>desk** They both need to be beaten senseless by someone who knows how, then locked in a room together until they make up.
    Silly, silly elves...I'm not sure which I would shake first! **grin**

    Lovely chapter, Ryo!

    **hugs**
    Min ;) **who is still waiting for her happy ending...tap, tap, tap**

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  • From ANON - Anon on May 03, 2005
    please tell me you are going to do a part 3 - please don't leave them like that!!
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  • From ANON - Shanna on May 03, 2005
    I am happy for reading a new chapter of this wonderful story. I am wishing to know what is going to happen, if Gildor and Haldir were soon... A greeting Ryo.
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  • From ANON - HHS on April 14, 2005
    Well,they're both wrong.But I think that Gildor should be the one to make the first move and that's if he still wants Haldir.Clearly Haldir still loves him.
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  • From ANON - Shanna on April 14, 2005
    Hola Ryo. Ay, I have liked much! It is a VERY good story. He has been very intense and exciting... he is one of my favorite stories...
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  • From ANON - daughterofthemidnightmoon on April 13, 2005
    First off, I just want to tell you how sorry I am I didn't review the last few chapters... i was really bad about that. Honestly, this is such a good story and you left us dangling there at such a crucial point! AHHH!!! Well, at least you're back. I do hope you won't keep us all waiting as long again. This is so good, and I so desperately want to see Gildor and Haldir get back together. It's so wrong how they broke up... I wonder how they're going to get back together, because you know they HAVE to! They just HAVE to! Maybe while Gildor's on his little suicide mission he'll come across Haldir and they'll finally get the chance to put everything in the open. If Haldir tells him why he did what he did when Gildor walked in on him and the other Lorien warrior, I'm sure Gildor would forgive him. He'd probably be pissed, but if he knew it was only a failed attempt to deal with him thinking he no longer had Gildor, then maybe Gildor would be able to see the reason. Plus, with Haldir's guilt over such a thing (him thinking Gildor had cheated on him) that may open up the doors for sympathetic forgiveness... kind of like it was only a misguided attempt at revenge. I'm glad to see Elrohir was the smart one out of the twins -- keeping Gildor's bracelet for him like that. Cause he WILL at some point need it back, right? (hint hint wink wink). Oh, please hurry with more soon! I absolutely love this story and NEED to see it finished!!! I HAVE to see how this ends (*cough cough* with Haldir and Gildor back together! *cough cough*) I hope they don't take forever getting back together cause I don't think my nerves can take it! I'm literally on the edge of my seat with anticipation! Please please please please please hurry with more soon! I promise I'll review ever single chapter from now on, just please don't make us wait long for another chapter! Please please please!!!!! Gildor's ready to get himself killed and who knows how Haldir's going to be dealing with his leaving Gildor. YOU HAVE TO HURRY WITH MORE NOW!!!!

    Please update soon before I die of suspense!

    -daughterofthemidnightmoon

    P.S. Seriously, sorry about not reviewing more... Life's been hectic, but I will make it my #1 priority of reviewing your story from now on if you update soon! (an empty threat I know, since I'll review no matter how long it takes you to get a new chapter out, but still... just know that I'm dying for more! ^_^)
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on April 13, 2005
    Also, I feel I can relate to Elladan. Were both have this consuming feeling of helplessness(and it's all your fault). Elladan wants Gildor to get better, but cant do anything about it. And I want you to update within tre seconds and I cant do anything about that either ....I know. I'm trying to make you feel guilty. I'm a perfect devil, cant help it. *snickers*
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on April 13, 2005
    Thank you so much for updating!!! You know what? "A reason to live" sounds much more optimistic than it actually was. I certainly didn´t think that 'the reason' would be getting yourself killed by orchs!! I confess; I am devastated. But the writing was just as brilliant as always. I can understand why this was a hard chapter to write. Good job anyway. I cant stop thinking about how Haldir will feel when he finds out what has happened to Gildor. The guilt and the self-loathing... oh must be horrible! *shivers* Hurry up with the next chapter!!! And give Gildor a kiss and a hug from me, will you?
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  • From ANON - Minuial Nuwing on April 13, 2005
    **glares at Ryo** Don't you dare! You promised me a happy ending! **stomps feet like a spoiled kid**

    Don't make me send my elves to straighten things out... **snicker**

    **hugs**
    Min ;) **who is holding leather-and-kohl-Haldir *and* on-top-Thranduil over a vat of boiling oil...**

    PS: Your twins, though...**melts** Very nice!

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  • From ANON - HHS on March 17, 2005
    Oh my gulay!You're stupid Gildor!Why can't he just ask Haldir straight at his face if he wants to bind or not?The cruelest thing that could happen if Haldir says no.Then again,they are both stubborn.
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  • From ANON - Shanna on March 17, 2005
    Hello Ryo. Is a wonderful story. One of the best ones than I am reading. The chapter has been very intense, I am wishing to read more...
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on March 17, 2005
    And no, I'm not happy at all with Haldir only being the dominant role. *booooooriiing* I want Gildor to shag him, and I want him to do it good. Perhaps they have one of those trees in Imaldris as well? ;-)
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on March 17, 2005
    You're welcome. :)
    I know you cant update faster, but I cant keep myself from going crazy. It's all your fault. You simply write to good. Your characters are great, your plot is great, your dialogues are great, your sex scenes are more than great (loved the thing with Gildor and the tree in the first fic) and you're great at all the emotional stuff. You're simply too good.

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