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Reviews for My Heart's Desire - Part 2. If You Go Away.

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  • From ANON - Minuial Nuwing on March 17, 2005
    WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! RRR-YYYY-OOOOOOOO! **howl of anguish**

    How could you?!? **sniffle** Poor Gildor. I may even manage to feel sorry for Haldir after he suffers a bit. **grin** True, Gildor has not been exactly forthcoming about his needs, but Haldir has been so busy preening that he didn't think to ask. **grrrrrrrr** Then running off like a pouting elfling... **snort**

    Fix it, fix it, fix it! Pleeeeeeeze? **puppy dog eyes**

    I have some nice leather and kohl waiting... **dangles leather leggings temptingly**

    **hugs**
    Min ;)
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  • From ANON - Liopncourt on March 17, 2005
    AAAAAAAaaaaaaaahhhh!!!!! Give me a break!!! This is just to painful! The pieces if my shattered heart are spread all over the place. Now; You will update within an hour, and you will make Haldir and Gildor sort this out nicely. Do you hear me??!!
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  • From ANON - Ryo on March 05, 2005
    Lioncourt, I don't know your email address so I want to thank you here. :) I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Unfortunately, I can't promise things will improve as fast as you want them to, but eventually everything will be fine. ^^
    And thanks for that "a dominant Gildor" comment. ;) All the rest of my readers seem to be quite content with things as they are in that arena.

    Ryo.


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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on March 04, 2005
    Hey don't forget; A dominant Gildor is possibly the sexiest thing I can imagine right know. So hurry with the make it up already! I'm going crazy!
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on March 04, 2005
    AAaaah! This is so frustrating! Make them talk to each other! Can't they just be honest and tell what they're feeling for once?! Update soon! Love your work!
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  • From ANON - Shanna on February 28, 2005
    Precious history. I like much how you have written the relation between Haldir and Gildor...you write very well.
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  • From ANON - Minuial Nuwing on February 28, 2005
    **sniffle** **glares at Ryo**

    You were right. I don't like it. No, I don't mean that. Not exactly...the chapter is wonderful, as usual, but I don't like what is happening to them... Oh, you know what I mean! Hurry and fix it! **sheepish grin**

    **hugs**
    Min ;)
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on February 16, 2005
    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! I cant stand it! I have to get more! The plot is excellent and the characters feel so real you can almost touch them. BREATHTAKING. Oh, and pleeeeease let them make it through this!
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  • From ANON - Shanna on February 15, 2005
    Hello Ryo. Precious, wonderful story. He is interesting and intense, I like much...
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  • From ANON - HHS on February 14, 2005
    I think Glorfindel's right.Gildor should tell Haldir that he wants to be dominant too.Communication is essential to a loving and trustful relationship.If he doesn't talk to him,Haldir will always assume that Gildor prefers him to be the dominant partner.
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  • From ANON - Minuial Nuwing on February 14, 2005

    **raised eyebrow**

    Somewhere, I have your promise of a happy ending in writing. I will find it, in case you have second thoughts.

    Silly, silly elves! Their relationship is splintering around them, and all they can think of is what they 'should' say, do, think... AAARGH! Okay, I'm better now. **grin**

    Write quickly, sweetie!

    **hugs**
    Min ;)
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  • From ANON - Monsoon on February 03, 2005
    thank you for updating!
    each chapter adds new dimension and insight to gildor&haldir's relationship, fascination tales
    but by the end of this chapter, i couldn't help feeling sorry for gildor..
    poor him..

    hopefully he and haldir will be able to work things out before one of them gets hurt

    and uh, when do we get to see more 'Glorifindel&legolas' action, please? ^^
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  • From ANON - daughterofthemidnightmoon on February 02, 2005
    Oh dear... There's trouble brewing... There's no doubt about that. Oh dear dear dear me... What is Haldir and Gildor to do? Perhaps it is starting to get to the point that Haldir's going to have to give up his dominant position for awhile back to Gildor. And perhaps at the same time, Gildor's going to have to make his intentions for Haldir know (ie. bonding/marriage) cause I get the feeling Haldir's feeling insignificant to Gildor and that could also be the reason he feels he needs to keep the dominant position; it makes him at least feel as though he's Gildor's equal. I don't know, I'm just speculating here, but it seems like a plausible reasoning to all this brewing tension. I can't wait to see what happens next, though I have a feeling it will sooner than later lead to a temporary breakup between the two... *tear*

    Oh! And what about Legolas and Glorfindel? Any chance of Legolas catching wind of his infedelity? For some reason that really has me interested. I can't wait to see what Legolas does when he finds out.

    I loved the song Gildor and Haldir sung. It literally made me laugh out loud after I read the first line and realized what you were parodying. Awesome. That was really funny, especially the last verse with 'anyone you can't kiss, i can kiss better'... or something like that. Though the last line where Gildor admitted he couldn't kiss Legolas after looking over at Glorfindel was my favorite line.

    All in all, I can't wait for a new update. You aren't going to make us wait for another update for as long as you did this one are you? Please say it's not true. I want to read more now now NOW!!! LOL Hurry with more soon before I go out of my mind!

    -daughterofthemidnightmoon
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  • From ANON - Minuial Nuwing on February 02, 2005
    **sniffle** Don't do it, Ryo! They are so sweet together. **thinks** I will chocolate-dip Elladan and send him to you in nothing but a smile... **puppy dog eyes**

    It didn't work, did it? **sigh** Gildor has made a mistake, I think, in trying to change everything he is to please Haldir. He was bound to become resentful eventually. And your silly Marchwarden isn't helping things, either, is he? **grin**

    Lovely update, dear. Please don't make them suffer too long. (I would be willing to add another elf of your choice to my bribe, but that's as far as I can go...)

    **hugs**
    Min ;)
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  • From ANON - Shanna on February 02, 2005
    This story is wonderful. I like much.
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