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Reviews for Conception Day Gifts

By : JayofLasgalen
  • From ANON - erobey on October 15, 2004
    ooh i just thoroughly enjoyed this! wish there were more, any chance of continuing the tale? these two make a beautiful pairing under the gifted fingers of so clever a word-smith. thanks for sharing this!
    cheers,
    erobey
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  • From ANON - Lianna on October 11, 2004
    Oh, dear Eru, what is this world cg tog to?

    You, of all people, are writing slash. And I, of all people, am reading it. And liking it.

    You write a fine sex scene. If that is what you were trying to prove here, you have succeeded. But I find that my eyes are crossing and my brain is fogging when I try to figure out where and when the story line that includes this vignette diverged from the story line in your non-slash fiction. Certain things are the same; for example, Legolas is still an only child (which gives the slash plotline a certain poignancy that it would not otherwise have, since it deprives Thranduil of grandchildren). But you have written non-slash stories set far later in time than this in which it is obvious that no such relationship exists between Elrohir and Legolas.

    Maybe I should just read this for the sex and stop expecting it to make sense. It is, after all, very good sex. *grins*

    And oh, by the way. [rant] How dare you waste time writing smut -- even though it is good smut -- while one of our favorite Rivendell elves is deathly ill from a spider bite in the infirmary at Lasgalen! For the love of the Valar, can't you at least save his life first, before his brother has a nervous breakdown? [/rant]
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  • From ANON - anon on October 11, 2004
    Jay,

    I have always loved your fics very much, but I must say I very disapointed to see that you are writing slash.
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  • From ANON - Kitty on October 10, 2004
    That was swe sweet. And my favourite pairing as well, thanks to Eresse and her "Greenleaf and Imladris"-stories.

    What a nice surprise for Elrohir, to come home after this wet, tiresome patrol and find his lover there. Their lovemaking was very well written, I have enjoyed it.
    Interesting was how Elladan could sense Elrohirs feelings through their bond because Elrohir forget to shield his feelings. I think this makes sense, because they both share such a strong bond. But maybe Elladan can shield himself against this? Theoretically it could surely work in both ways.

    If you would write more slash, I would be happy to read it!


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  • From ANON - Anon on October 10, 2004
    A lovely, sensual pairing of two beautiful elves.
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