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Reviews for A Father's Responsibilities

By : darkladyd2003
  • From demon2wolf on January 12, 2013
    Good so far I can't wait till you put up chapter four.
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  • From Dawn2009 on May 12, 2012
    please write more
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  • From Dawn2009 on January 21, 2012
    PLEASE WRITE AND UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
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  • From ANON - LitTeachr on August 21, 2006
    The story is great, however you need a better beta. One who knows how to correct the spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors. Your beta missed too many. It's a wonderful thing to say these points are not important to a story but they are. An otherwise perfect story is damaged by such deficits. Yours can be a wonderful story with the appropriate corrections.


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  • From ANON - Haldir's Heart & Soul on July 17, 2006
    HURRY!!!
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  • From ANON - mie on July 11, 2006
    I love this story it is funny and I just can't wait until he gets his hands on elrohir
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  • From ANON - storyfreak on January 21, 2006
    Other then the father/son stuff i loved it.
    Very good story.
    I hope that Ellandal (spelling?) doesn't warn his brother.
    Love the story.
    Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2006
    ohhh you are SUCH a great writer i like this story i hope you finish it!!! UPDATE UPDATE!!!
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  • From ANON - RuThatCurious on December 27, 2004
    please update
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  • From ANON - Kendra on December 13, 2004
    please update!
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  • From ANON - Manders1953 on October 24, 2004
    I'm loving your stories, omg.

    PLEASE continue this!!
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