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Reviews for Smack the Dog

By : Foofy
  • From ANON - Juliette on March 02, 2005
    Uh-oh, it ain't looking good for our boys right now! Great chapter, I love fights. One of the worst things about having no hockey this year is no hockey fights on tv or live at games. I also like how Viggo unconsciously reached for his sword and how Sean was wishing he had his. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Marius on February 17, 2005
    My my, my, poor Daisy! I am curious to see what will happen to my lovely Sean when the guys actually get him in their hands. Kind of. Curious about Vig's reaction IF they try to get to Sean.
    LOVE to see a nice barfight, *evil grin*. LOVE to see Viggo unleashed! PLEASE????? *puppy eyes*
    Anyway, keep going. Keep going. Cant wait for the next chapter.

    Marius
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  • From ANON - A fan on February 16, 2005
    Well this is only the second RPS fic I've ever read, but it's got me hooked! I spent about 5 hours reading the first 28 chapters, and I've been hanging around grabbing every update as soon as it's posted...this is a fantastic story! it continues to surprise me, even after all thes chapters I can't wait to see where it's going. Well done and thankyou! :D
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  • From ANON - Naira on February 16, 2005
    Very nice update :D, can hardly wait for another ;)
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  • From ANON - Juliette on February 16, 2005
    Thank goodness, our Daisy looks like he's going to be okay! You had me worried at the beginning of the chapter. Please update soon, want to know what's going to happen with the bad guys in the bar!
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  • From ANON - Breathless Reader on February 15, 2005
    Oh, let's hope the boys are careful with those bad men.... And maybe Orli will help Dave get more comfortable....with his sexuality, that is!

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  • From ANON - Juliette on February 13, 2005
    ARRGH! Evil Evil cliffie! Get back here and tell us what happened to Daisy!
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  • From ANON - Marius on February 13, 2005
    OOOH MY GODNESS!!!!!! By the Valar, I pray you continue soon. As far as I know you (not that much indeed) I will have to wait a whole week to find out what happened to poor David.

    Good job, loved that chapter.
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  • From ANON - Naira on February 13, 2005
    Don't leave us hanging here, please update soon I wanna know how it continues :p


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  • From ANON - Grateful Fan on February 13, 2005
    Yay for Chapter 33! Will Karl be back for more? Will Sean finally behave? Will David turn up beaten or will they find him tied up in Sean's apartment? Who knows, but Foofy? Write on, dear! Loving every, single word.
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  • From ANON - Shine on February 12, 2005
    Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, Oh mi god, David Oh mi god, did Karl's guys get David Oh mi god.
    Please add another chapter soon! Or I shall die from the suspense.

    Oh mi god!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shine on February 11, 2005
    MORE! I need MORE, OHMIGOD, how could you have just let the chapter end there, leaving hanging like that? AAAAAH I think I'm going to go insane from wating!! Please ad the next chapter soon or I will go insane!
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  • From ANON - Juliette on February 03, 2005
    And you left it THERE! That last line was *such* a tease! I liked it when Sean smacked Karl around. Couldn't have happened to a nicer guy. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - VampireJesse on February 03, 2005
    Geeez, you got me hooked since the first chapter! This is an absolutely fantastic story, love every chapter better.
    Just the updates are not fast enough but oh well, that's life. Can't expect you to write 24/7 a day so I am satisfied, or can I? *puppy dog eyes*

    Anyway, got a little confused at the end of chapter 32. Who's Sean suppose to take? Karl? Orli? *scratches her head in wonder*
    Boy and you got some.. how do I call it in english? change of views? Change of perspectives? But that's just me knitpicking since I started creative writings lessons, never mind! Still love, love, love, really love your story. Keep on going!
    Am I allowed to print your story out and make it into a book for myself to read over and over again?

    XOXO Jesse
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  • From ANON - Naira on February 03, 2005
    Hmm you got me a little confuzzled with some of the dialogues, though I still absolutely love it ... I hope for another update soon.

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