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Reviews for Meleth-nin

By : laeglass
  • From ANON - Naira on February 28, 2005
    I really really liked the update and can hardly wait for more, i'm curious to see where it will go
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  • From ANON - Rose Garden on February 24, 2005
    I just stumbled across this story, and I'm sooo glad I did. Very good and can't wait for more. Don't keep us waiting toooo long.
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  • From ANON - Naira on February 23, 2005
    A lovely update with an unexpected twist, I can't wait to see how it continues
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  • From ANON - Kaiyon on February 22, 2005
    Do you notice that me and Twilights Bane seem to think alike? We have known eachother and were lovers once, but our parents split us up. So that is the reason we can almost read eachother's mind!!!! I love this chapter, you are able to so easily make your reader feel like they are in the character's boots. I feel ashamed as a writer every time another of your chapters comes up. I wish I had your talant, Laeglass. Please keep writing and inspiring me. I haven't even completed the first chapter of MY Aragorn and Legolas story and I need some ideas. Legolas has asked Aragorn to break a filly for him and she will only allow Legolas to ride her, but he was injured recently and can't do it. Please give me your opinion on where I should go with this. Love ya!!!!
    ~Kaiyon
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  • From ANON - Kaiyon on February 17, 2005
    Well, I have to say that that was much better than anything I could have come up with. But I do seem to notice a trend of you making the good people fall in love with evil people, that elf Randir sounds like bad news...I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Please continue!! I love the way you plan out these stories, you have even inspired me to write a fanfic about Aragorn and Legolas. I will review your next Ch. as soon as it is up. Happy writing!!!
    ~Kaiyon
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  • From ANON - dee on February 16, 2005
    This is a really good story Please! update soon.
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  • From ANON - Naira on February 14, 2005
    Lovely update, cant wait to see how it continues
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  • From ANON - Ima on February 13, 2005
    LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - dee on February 13, 2005
    This is goood keep it up I am dying to know the out come of the story
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  • From ANON - lily on February 11, 2005
    ¡¡ HELLO!! I don't know what ideas are already burning in your mind but i hope you're planning a very painful death or punishment for Thomas 'cause he's such a a big bastard!! Of course before the time of punishment comes, you can still use him to create more trouble 'cause i don't think scum like him can just walk away without a vengeance . I agree with you: hurting Legolas with torture or rape it's not a nice idea being pregnant ( by the way : I LOVE MPREG fics). I think your fic has just the right combination fo drama and fluff stuff. The plot, so far, seems very fine to me, specially the way or the reason why Legolas decided to leave Aragorn. What's gonna happen when Aragorn finds out that his step father and husband slept together?? Will he ever find out at all?? Legolas MUST forgive Aragorn BUT ONLY AFTER A VERY DRAMATIC STRUGGLE. Aragorn's dream it's BEAUTIFUL and MUST COME TRUE... in the end. I would love to see Legolas' delivery of his baby though i know it can be very hard writing 'bout it. Finally... I LOVE TWINCEST!!! After all it's only love, no matter what. I BEG YOU!! Call the muses and keep writing, your fic deserves to be finished 'cause it's AWESOME!!! Namarie!! P.S. english isn't my native tongue, so we share something else, don't we?
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  • From ANON - matilda on February 08, 2005
    This is a wonderfull story, I absolutely love it. I am also a huge fan of MPreg and I must say that I love the way you're develping the story. I don't usually read Lord of the Rings but this is one of the very few exceptions.
    Though there is one comment I would like to make, your story plays on emotions such as love and anghst and there could be some improvement there in the description. A great story is the one that makes the reader cry for the character (like real tears) because he/she is feeling those emotions from the writing. Now, I see that you're trying to do that but you're not quite there and that's what you have to improve.
    Good Luck and I hope to see more of this story!
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  • From ANON - jackie on February 04, 2005
    Yes. I liked this one better!!!! The last chapter was good but this one shows more progress in the story line. Its also quite sexy!!!!
    I'm looking forward to seeing the story move on now they have arrived at their destination...... and, I assume the eventual arrival of Aragorn to see Legolas.
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  • From ANON - Ima on February 04, 2005
    Love it!Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Jackie on January 29, 2005
    Well you might consider it writers block - btut I still enjoy reading what you have written!!! I regularly check to see when you have added a new chapter and I'm very keen to see how this story eventually pans out :o)
    Keep up the good work!!!!
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  • From ANON - Laur on January 27, 2005
    I'm loving this story soooo much!! I'm just dying to see Legolas and Aragorn back together!! I'm getting so into this story! I can't wait for tham to be DADDDDDDDDIES!!!!!!! SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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