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Reviews for Sevends ods of Passion

By : KrystalTheElvishHobbit
  • From Mist on October 25, 2010
    I know it's probably doubtful you two will ever update now but I remembered reading this story today and came to find it and read it all again... it's definitely an interesting concept and I would love to see more. :]
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  • From nsyncgirl on February 26, 2009
    I hope you update this story soon
    It is very good
    Sorry about the author's brother with the kidney problem
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  • From nsyncgirl on February 26, 2009
    Hey!Sorry about the author brother.
    I hope you update this story soon.
    I hope Frodo,does more spanking on his adopted daughter tiny behind.
    When he finally founds out when she's dreaming about
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  • From ANON - HyperHenry on November 20, 2003
    Hi All Reviewers! :-)
    I'm the co-author of this story, and may I say: Super-thanks for all the kind comments.
    I can understand if some of you are awfully impatient - we have been taking our sweet time. MY only excuse is that I'm without computer these days (I'm typing this from my work place). In fact, I'm without residence - LOL. Some day, however, I will move into my new house and pack out that computer, and then things might start to happen.
    And my co-author? Well, you will have to ask her. ;-)
    Cheers for your interest. :)))))))
    HyperHenry
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  • From ANON - Lidra on November 17, 2003
    Wow, this is excellent. I hope you post soon.
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  • From ANON - Eh on August 25, 2003
    Any chance this story is going to get updated in the next century?
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  • From ANON - Araniel on July 03, 2003
    I command you to update at once!

    ...

    ...

    ;_; Pwetty Pwease with Frodo spankings on top?
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  • From ANON - MB on June 16, 2003
    ::cries:: Please update! ;_;
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  • From ANON - tig on May 04, 2003
    Wow. This is a very...erm...interesting? story...poor Alana! :-D I just keep wondering when you're going to return her to adult form. I mean, I love the poor "kid's" interactions with her environments @ the other hobbits, but (if I can be blunt) I don't think you're going to be able to progress at all with the relationship between Frodo and Alana until he at least learns something about her true past. I'm not saying that there's anything wrong with what you've written so far -- I just think it's time to move on. Alana's very much attracted to Frodo, but he adores her as a father would adore a daughter. End of story. Really, I'm not complaining, just making a point -- I'm worried that if you drag out her artificial childhood, you'll lose some of the momentum of the story.
    Oh, and could you please email me when you update? Thanks! And really, congrats on what you've done so far.
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  • From ANON - Nike on May 04, 2003
    This is great so far. I'm really enjoying it. I hope you post more soon.
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  • From ANON - Spoonie on April 19, 2003
    aagh you need to update it!
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  • From ANON - Spoonie on April 08, 2003
    I LOVE THIS that was f-in hilarious!! when r u updating next?? cant wait.
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  • From ANON - Mistress Brandybuck on April 07, 2003
    It's me again (sigh) sorry but I could not read that chapter without telling that I was litterally rolling on my bed with laughter at the convo with Alana and Blossom, the bit about sex just tickled me :0P
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  • From ANON - Mistress Brandybuck on April 06, 2003
    Oh brilliant. Wonderful third chapter, to me it seemed kind of 'edge of your seat' sort of thing. Hope HyperHenry gets better soon. LOL :-)
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  • From ANON - Spoonie on April 06, 2003
    CRACKIN! more please! sessay Frodo all bossy...oooh
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