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Reviews for Renewal

By : elisabeth
  • From ANON - Tenar McAaron on November 10, 2004
    This was a lovely story; you have improved increadibly from the first one or two I read from you.
    Giving the characters depth fleshed out the plot nicely. I felt like I was actually reading a y
    ay
    as opposed to turning on the TV for 5 mins. in the middle of a lousy mini-series. If you continue
    to improve at this rate I am sure you will turn into one of my favorite writers here on AFF. I feel
    almost like asking you to ditch 'Butter' and 'Dark (something)'; the one between Boromir and
    Faramir, they stank.

    I liked the way you set a contrast between the Prince Elphir and his sister. The visual description
    of their outfits truely mirrored how they felt about life. Although as soon as I read the Prince's
    name "Elf-ear", it was obvious that he was going to be gay and involved with an Elf. A different
    name would have held that plot twist in a little more suspense. Keep up the good work!
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