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By : Esteliel
  • From ANON - Vuaryn on April 29, 2003
    Boy, I am so mad at Glorfindel now. How could he? First he stole Legolas's innocence, now he forced him to enjoy it. This is good. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Nina on April 29, 2003
    I just like it more and more. Please, continue it.
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  • From ANON - Elflover on April 28, 2003
    @JastaElf -- Intriguing ideas, there! If Glorfindel had indeed known Legolas' identity, at a minimum he would carried him off to Imladris; he'd be too valuable a hostage to miss! (Not knowing of the family dysfunction, presumably...) Considering that Legolas would resist the abduction, one could well imagine a rape in that scenario, due to Glorfindel's temper (and drive towards dominance). Once the prize was secure at Imladris, we can well imagine what the higher Elves (those sitting at Elrond's table) would want to do (having seen this at the identity revelation scene in Anestel). Hostages don't seem to fare too well in Imladris (witneeleieleirdur)! Meanwhile Elrond would have started attempted negotiations with Mirkwood, and there thought fails me. Would Thranduil really abandon Legolas? And if so, *shudders* to what sort of fate, and for how long? At some point, pregnancy would ensue, and then what? There presumably would be no certainty as to the sire... would Glorfindel claim him at that point, with (only) future childbearing in mind? And if so, then what fate for the first child? *shudders*

    On the other hand, supposing none of this had happened (the encounter with Glorfindel).... It doesn't look like Thranduil would ever intend to train Legolas as his birthright would warrant.... so there you would have a life wasted, guarding horses and o low low-level tasks, without parental love, without friendship, without a lover, and presumably long-term, without even the affectif hif his brothers. So bleak and sad!

    I really hate to say it *slaps own face* but maybe, in the long run *slaps face harder*, Glorfindel was the best possible thing to happen to Legolas. *a slave in a d/s scenario the best possible thing... shudder... must. go. bleach. out. brain....*

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  • From ANON - gabriel on April 27, 2003
    oh man.
    this is just... yeah... wow.
    i really love this. man,
    continue quickly!

    gabe
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  • From ANON - sad_she_elf on April 27, 2003
    ah this is just so well written!! I can ine ene every singl detale, the poor prince lying there crying :( this glorfindel is a bastard though somehow if he is nice it's just not him and it will kind of change the whole fic...please write more soon!! And if posible after this fic to write what happens to legolas after all?? About his archery lessons and stuff pleeeease *wink wink* :) U are planning to write more right???
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  • From ANON - JastaElf on April 27, 2003
    Oh OUCH....

    OK, this chapter sheds a Lf lif light on some of Glorfindel's reactions in "Anestel", and on Legolas's reactions as well. Glorfindel bun bundle of HUGE contradictions, and extremely tangled emotions; I really, really like that. Nothing one-dimensional there! I'm glad he realized in time that he was behavas bas badly as the people at whom he was so angry! But I do fear, in retrospect, that if he *did* know this was Thranduil's son from the very start, he either would have indeed raped Legolas in pure anger and then possibly even have killed him, or he would have taken him prisoner--and much, MUCH worse things would have awaited him in Rivendell. Ooo, plotbunny, makes me wonder what would have happened if he had known from his spying.... ;-)

    Literally, Legolas being pregnant with Glorfindel's son is the ONLY thing that let him live long enough for Glorfindel to work up an attachment to him, to learn to love him and desire him--and thus to give Legolas a chance, for apparently the first time in his life, to have someone care about HIM and him only (I recall Glorfindel's line about Legolas not realizing his own worth because he is capable of bearing children....)

    Will we learn why it is that Thranduil despises his youngest son so much?


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  • From ANON - Nina on April 27, 2003
    I want more. Please, update as soon as possible.
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  • From ANON - Mainframe on April 27, 2003
    Wow!

    This is BRILLIANT!!!

    I have to say that I never wanted your first series to end it was soooo good, but all good things come to an end I guess....I guessed wrong!

    This is wonderful and as captivating and sensually diverse as your first. Brutal last chapter though, not that I'm complaining. It is wonderful to finally read exactly what took place that fateful day and whilst Glory turned into a complete and utter bastard, which surprised even himself, I think it wonderful to see just how his mind works and what his motivations were.

    He really scared himself. The part where when violated Legolas and there was no scream was so powerful I wanted to scream! The way you wrote it I empathised with Legolas so much and the cold horror of Glory realising what he had done and that Legolas was, well starting to fade yes? His whispered pleas to his father were so powerful, you really know how to write this stuff!

    I can hardly wait for the next part!

    Mainframe

    x

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  • From ANON - RONKNIGHT on April 27, 2003
    MYYY FAVVV PAR5T WASSSSSSSSSSS

    PIPPIN: DID YOU LIKE THAT FRODO BITCHHHHH!!

    FRODO: I SURE DID

    UNZIPS HIS PANTS EVEN THOUGH THEY ARE ALREADY UBNZIPEDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

    THANKS FOR THE PORN ;}{
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  • From ANON - Anita on April 27, 2003
    He actually has a conscious...I think. I do not think this will be as long as Anestel is, but even thought it will be short, I am glad you have written this. It shows that, however shallow and tortures he might seem, Glorfindel does have some sort of feelings inside, that is good to know...
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  • From ANON - Elfishgal on April 27, 2003
    oi! that was awesome! can't wait till chapter three! you rock!
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  • From ANON - Vuaryn on April 27, 2003
    Opppssss///.....I meant prequel.
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  • From ANON - Vuaryn on April 27, 2003
    Esteliel

    Great job on the sequel. Bad Glorfindel, such cruelty. Angst, can't get enough of it. More soon.
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  • From ANON - C.M. Janburfry on April 27, 2003
    Aww poor Legolas.... Please update!
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  • From ANON - Elflover on April 27, 2003
    Just read chapter 2...

    Well done, Esteliel.


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