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Reviews for The Jewel of Mirkwood

By : harriet

From ANON - Kryspen on February 10, 2004
Thank you Riffraff for a WONDERFUL read. I enjoyed every part immensely! And I dearly hope for sequels... ^_^

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From ANON - Ryou\'sMistress265 on February 09, 2004
*screams in delight* I WAS ECKNOWLEDGED!!!!!!!!!!!! *tear* i feel so loved
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From ANON - Starwind on February 09, 2004
Oh my GOD!!! I can't beleive that this fic is finished!! Oh it was soooo good, i really hope that u do a sequal! Or write anything else for that matter. Well...i'll be waiting to see if u do decide tite ite any more.
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From ANON - Brin on February 09, 2004
Thank you, thank you thank you! This is a wonderful story and I enjoyed
each & every bit of it, in fact I plan to reread it. Sooooo ... sequel please!
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From ANON - Leah on February 09, 2004
I don't think I have ever read such an amazing piece of fan fiction. I don't think one has ever kept my attention as long either! I started reading it probably around October, and have been eagerly checking for updates ever since. Unfortunately, these did not always come at the best of times. You made like a 3 or 4 chapter update last year the day before my Organic Chemistry final. Let's just say that my priorities were not in exactly the right order. =) Hey, it was a great distron fon from studying. It wouldn't be so bad if I could read without going back and reading previous favorite chapters again.
Anyway, it was an extremely well written and thougth-out plot, with just the rigth amount of angst, humor, love, and excitement. Although I was practically squealing with excitement while reading the last chapter, I was also very sad to see it end. I'm a little embarrassed to say that your story had me in tears at several points, these last chapters being no exceptions. I can imagine that you must be very relieved, but sad to see it end. I just wanted to thank you for your dedication to finishing the story, and congratulate you for a job well done.
I hope to see another wonderful epic from you again (after you've rested)!
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From ANON - giggle on February 09, 2004
Your stats were overwhelming. So much time and effort put into a tale for us to enjoy and so may people just hanging on every word.
Thank you so much for this.
This story was one of the first fan fictions I discovered and it sealed my fate. I now avidly search for fun stuff on the net to read. It is all your fault so thank you again.
May Elbereth shine on you for now and always. giggle
PS And sequels are always a GOOD THING
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From ANON - giggle on February 09, 2004
Wow. In Mirkwood, being crowned High King of the Elven Kingdoms. What a far cry from little Greenleaf being cossetted and sheltered not so long ago.
Being the center of attention. He has never had to worry about that postion before. Only two years before his life was so different and now it has been turned upside down. So many changes, some great, some good and some definitely on the down side.
Alone for a moment. He will be more alone than ever before although he'll be surrounded by elves at all times now. At least Glorfindel will be there for him like Filgree always was before.
Lovely remembrances of his childhood and how time and experience change the perceptions of the past.
Nice scene with Legolas, Glorfindel and the crowd.
And yes he did have an excellent adventure elf style.

A/N DARN DARN DARN
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From ANON - giggle on February 09, 2004
My Legolas is being very maternal isn't he? Those childbearing hormones and concerns can really wreak havoc on your sex life for maternal he elves as well as the female of all races. That was a very nice interlude of elf s Alw Always good to read that.
Gracious Lindar and Filgree, what were they thinking right there in the hallway. Have all these elves lost their minds? I hope so and I hope I get to read about it.
See Legolas Filgree was correct. One day you will need that privacy curtain and be glad it is there. Like tonite.
Well we've got Orophin and Elladan consumating their bond in the hot springs and...
Elrohir has fallen both literally and figuratively for a *blond* Figwit of all things.
Well you have everyone taken care of here. One chapter to go so you must feel your work here is done. gigglbe
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From ANON - Amelie on February 09, 2004
It can't be over! It just can't! I feel like crying over this loss, it is so sad, your writing has been wonderful, I even got a chapter dedicated to me for my birthday... Come to think of it, you said you always wished for Orlando Bloom covered in chocolate, I can somewhat grant you that, in PotC, the scene where he is covered with dust from that fire thingy, thats cocoa. So there you have it, Orlando Bloom covered in chocolate. I've been reading since I stumbled upon chapter 54, I remember nearly falling asleep trying to read all of them, and then, when I woke up in the morning, I found that more had been added. I have loved this story and can think of nothing better to say about it than WOW! It was wonderful. I wish I had ideas for a sequel, but I don't, so I can't heou tou there, but it was great. I loved the ending, bringing it full circle was a great touch!

WAIT! INSPIRATION! I have an idea for a prologue! Haldir and Thranduil meeting and conceiving Legolas! That would be a great story! I would even beta it for you, mind you it may take a while to return parts of it, seeing as I might get caught up in it. Come to think of it, if you want me to beta this monster in my spare time so you can post it on a website, or even so you can chanhe nhe names of some things and try to get it published? That would be a good idea... LiveJournal person ChaosManor is writing a beautiful Viggorli fic right now that she intends to "file off the serial numbers of" and get published. You could do that as well, I wouldn't mind helping either, being a part of this wonderful project would be great!
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From ANON - giggle on February 09, 2004
Well I come back from a family weekend and find lots of chapters and the threat of this series ending. Sigh. I will miss it very much.
I thought it was interesting the way you portrayed Legolas beginning to treat his son the way he had been treated. Making time only for his new duties and caring for the baby but no time for his husband, family and friends. Good thing Haldir had the cojones to put his foot down and confront Legolas with his withdrawal from everyone, especially Glorfindel. The new king isn't going to be able to cope without the help of his partner.
Things are winding down now and we just need to see everyone happily ever after. giggle
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From ANON - Teri on February 08, 2004
Harry, I can't believe its ended. What a great ride! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! Please more. In the mean time, while you are thinking about the sequel, you could also write other fics. No pressure! :):):) I am truly going to miss running home from work to check and see if you posted a new chapter. Its been a great pleasure reading this fic and I hope to see more. Take a deep breath and relax. I will keep checking this site for more of your wonderful writing. I noticed you said you were looking for places to archive this fic. You probably know of these sites already but I thought I would throw them your way just in case. http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/
http://www.libraryofmoria.com/
http://www.melethryn.net/melethryn.html
and Elf on a Shelf
Good luck to you, sweetie. Feel free to e-mail me and let me know where you are going to archive and update me on any new fics you write. Take care,
Teri

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From ANON - Twilight on February 08, 2004
A truly fabulous story with love, sex, adventure, action, angst etc with terrific character development and imaginative plot twists and turns. Beautiful emotional nuances in your characters in their thoughts, feelings and actions that causes us to care for all of the elven characters. Although there were a huge number of chapters, each chapter made the story more complete, was never extraneous, and was always well-done. A gigantic thank you for updating on a fairly regular basis and for actually completing it!

( P.S. Thanks for throwing in the passionate sex scene with Filigree and Lindar. I'm so happy these two lonely elves found each other as friends and lovers. Yay for your scene with Elrohir falling in love with Figwit. Never felt comfortable about him lusting for Celeborn. Also, I love that Elladan is so happy with Orophin and there was a nice scene with them too.)

I hope you will consider doing a sequel, and I will look forward eagerly to reading any other stories that may may write. Lastly, BRAVO for a tremendous story!
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From ANON - Trista on February 08, 2004
WOW!!!!!!!!! That was a awesome story. It has helped me get through some rough times by losing my mind in your story. Do you think you could write a sequel please? Your writing is so discriptive. Well thank you so much for your story I loved it!
~Trista~

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From ANON - Indil on February 08, 2004
*______________________* Wow, great, great story really. ^^ I really loved it !!! You really put some heart into it. ^^
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From ANON - m on February 08, 2004
great story!!
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