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Reviews for The Jewel of Mirkwood

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From ANON - _Gilraen_ on June 12, 2003
LORD CELEBORN??????? what on midddle earth does HE have to do with legolas? Yes this is a big big riddle and i didn't expect it... o my god now i have no idea at all how Legolas is ever gonna be saved...
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From Mawgy on June 12, 2003
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!

Sorry, that's all I can bring myself to say right now. That, and I t I n I need to curse in Elvish right about now. Or English. Or Japanese. Or just any other language possible!

Oh, and trust me, you're not the only one who's so wrapped up in your storyline and happy that you're writing until 2am. I am too! (And I'm sure there are a lot of others aswell).

Thanks for the update, can't wait to read more. (Sorry for the short review (again), but I gotta finish this essay!)

Luv Mawgy

P.S. Ok, I think I'll heed your warnings from now on and not jump to conclusions again!
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From ANON - Vermillion on June 12, 2003
Thank goodness for the update. I thought I was going to go mad when aff.net was down and waiting for the new chapters. I don't think the warning was really necessary. The Legolas abuse wasn't that bad. I'm just relieved Glorfindel came before the warning WAS necessary. Please, please, please let Glory find Legolas. This is great, please update again soon.
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From Mawgy on June 11, 2003
No offence, but the Legolas abuse didn't seem as bad as what I thought it would be when you gave out the warning. I was thinking he'd be raped in front of the guests at dinner before everyone got their chance with him or something. And then there'd be stuff that involved BDSM. Just thought I might point that out to anyone readers who may be reading this review and was put off by the warning. It's not as bad as it may seem.

GLORFINDEL'S HERE! WOOHOO! I was wondering why, with Leggy screaming the house down, Glorfindel may not hear hit wit was because he wasn't there yet! But now he is, and now he can finally save the day! I realise that there's probably gonna be some more tension-building strategies you're gonna use to delay the rescue, but I'm just SO excited!

"Apart from that don't jump to any conclusions yet a rea reading this chapter until you read the next part, as all will be explained and revealed then!!!!!!!" what? Awww, you're mean! How can you do this to us (but more importantly, me!)? Now you have me quivering with suspense! Well, just please hurry up and post the next chapter, and the one after that, then the one after that and just keep going until it's all finished! Please?

Anyway, loving this fic (now definitely my number 1 fic that's still be done (WIP in otherwords)), and I can't wait to read more.

Luv Mawgy

P.S. Sorry for the short review, I just REALLY need to get on with my essay.
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From ANON - Nina on June 11, 2003
It seems that Glorfindel arrived just in time. I hope he can find out soon that legolas is there.
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From ANON - neptuneline on June 10, 2003
More time to write? Wonderful! I always love a mystery, and with a really good one involving Legolas, I'm in heaven. I hope there will be lots more chapters, sequels, the works. More, more, more! Hurry, hurry, hurry!
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From ANON - Vermillion on June 10, 2003
Thank you for answering some of those questions in your A/N. I figured Legolas was not too innocent to realize that giving his real name in his situation would not be the wisest thing. I'm glad Thranduil has a reason for what he is doing. He doesn't strike me as a dumb elf. I'm very excited that you will be updating more frequently. This is a great story and I'm dying for more. Imagine my discontent when I couldn't get onto aff.net for two days. Please write fast.
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From Mawgy on June 10, 2003
Forgot to mention, thanks for pointing thout out about Thranduil. It's nice to know someone agrees with me (kinda). And, seeing as it is the author herself, just makes me feel extra special (and right!) lol
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From Mawgy on June 10, 2003
Well, I was kinda expecting it, kinda not. Sort of a gut feeling that there's gonna be a twist, but not that that would be it! So, kinda took me by surprise, but not totally.

I'm glad your little finger is better. Mainly because it means I'll get more fixes from now on (So distraut when I couldn't get on to aff.net. I thought it would never be back! I was so tense during the whole ordeal... *shivers* But let's not think about such dark times because it's back, and you're back and whole again! Yay! I feel like celebrating!), and also because I'm sure it would have been very painful for you. And no one likes to be in pain, do they?

Ok, back to the review.... (I keep seeing this bad habit of mine pop up where I go way off track! I'll try to avoid it as much as possible, but I can't swear to anything) (See! There (and here) I go again!) *trying to focus now* Yes, Leggy.... Awww, I feel so much pity for him right now. What with being a prisoner, and having to wear a collar and a leash. Yet, I feel worse about him not knowing what will be required of him! I hate to think of what it will be like when his master's wishes are made clear. And when he said "I do not know many songs and while I play the harp I am not very entertaining.� my heart just sank, and flew at the same time! There's just something devilly delicious about naievity.

But, oh God! I wish I could be the one to kiss all his tears away. But, I guess I'll just leave that to Glorfindel. Stupid Wargs. Why did they have to come and ruin everything? (Rehtorical question: the answer so abviously being to thicken the plot (and annoy the hell outta me!).

Congrats on getting all your exams and stuff done. I still have 1 essay (due Friday, 3000 words, haven't started), and 2 exams (16th and 23rd of this month) and then I get 6 weeks off! How about you?

Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter (seriously, can't wait! I feel the absolute NEED to know what's gonna happen when Glorf and Erester see Keeldon), so, until then, seeya, and please, make it soon!?

Luv Mawgy.

P.S. Thanks for all the answers to our questions, it's so nice of you.

P.P.S. What about the real Filgree? Are we gonna find out soon what became of him? Or do we have to wait in suspence until Leggy gets back to Mirkwood? (Your call, just curious).
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From ANON - Nina on June 09, 2003
Not good for legolas. So, the same man that Glorfindel will demand help was the man that bought legolas. My poor elf.
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From ANON - Anon on June 05, 2003
You know, I really like to say more than, "Please write more", but unfortunately, I don't have the time I'd like to take to review all the parts of this story that I love. BUT, I also want to leave you knowing that there are those of us reading and waiting desparately for the next installment. So, pitiful as it is, please write more.
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From ANON - _Gilraen_ on June 04, 2003
Hmm something is bothering me here..why if Haldir and his elves saw Legolas and the men...why did they not save him? They're all searching for him but when they ee him , they just let him pass... I don't get it! Doesn't Galadriel and Celeborn not care for Legolas if they just leave him like that? Cos from other side they want to see him..i really don't get it..

Otherways, really great chapters!!
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From ANON - Mawgy on June 04, 2003
Hey, (yes, it's me..., again. *sigh* Trust me, you're not gonna get rid of me any time soon. You're stuck with me until your finish this wonderful fic! So, get used to it!)

Hmmm, well, some wonderful developments have happened here... All of which I LOVE!

First of all (I know this is starting at the end a bit, but I can't help it), but just in defence of Thranduil, I don't think what he's doing is particularly stupid. I mean, it is stupid, because Men can't be trusted, but it also shows how desperate he is to get his son back. And he would never let Glorfindel court Legolas (or anyone else for that matter) unless it was an emergency! So, I think it just shows how terrible he must be feeling right now without his little Greenleaf.... kinda, ac, actually. Like the saying goes, "you don't know what you've got, until it's gone."

Also, (still on Thrandy), like Nina said , please don't make him evil or bad, just really protective of Leggy. I always like him best that way. Please?

And, oh! I think I have just fallen in love with Glorf all over again, when he gave that boy the money! I thought that was so sweet, and perhaps suggesting he'd lto hto have kids of his own....

And, I'm so happy he didn't kill thn thn that sold Leggy, although he did deserve it. I thought taking his money was roughing him up a bit was a much better solution. Though, Glorf could have sold him as a slave too, give the guy a taste of his own medicine. But I guess they didn't have time for all that stuff, so it's understandable.

OH! Thankyou for answering my one of my quetions, without actually answering my question! The way you put it into the story rather than in the author's notes was so much more than what I was expecting, and rather artistic of you. So, thanks. And, I guess now that you've mentioned it, it does seem kinda abvious.

And I thought you portrayed Leggy beautifully! You know, too sick and too innocent to understand what was happening (and what was going to happen to him) to be able to fight the man. He appears much more like the sweet, shy quiet kind anyway. So a fight would have seemed out of character a bit. Although, later on, when the guy tries something and Leggy realises what's going on, (and panics) resistance from everyone's favourite Elf would seem much more likely than him to be submissive. (though, I guess it still wouldn't surprise me if he is submissive if it meant he wouldn't be hurt too much, because he's still too young to be able to withstand much torment).

Poor Glorf and Erester. It seems like everyone knows what's going on except them! Oh, and us, the readers! Please hurry up and spihe bhe beans! You're driving me crazy!

And I must admit, Haldir seems a bit shifty, I don'tst hst him. (much).

Also, Glorf and Erester were meant to be staying in Mirkwood for some time while the wedding was being planned and stuff. So why would Glorf take Leggy to Imladris after seeing his father for such a short time if he were meant to saty there for a long time? (I realise going on this little adventure is taking a big chunk out of their saty, but it doesn't explain everything).

Anyway, can't wait for more,

Luv Mawgy.
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From ANON - Vermillion on June 04, 2003
This is getting more intriguing by the chapter. The suspense is killing me. Poor Legolas, please don't let anything bad happen to him before Glory gets there. You'd think Thranduil would have better sense than to advertise his son is missing knowing Men cannot be trusted. Hurry, hurry, update soon. Pretty please.
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From ANON - Nina on June 03, 2003
I have to know this secret. And please, I don't want a Thr Thranduil" , I would like him to be just too much protective of legolas.
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