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By : ElvenDemagogue

From ANON - Beth on January 06, 2005
Creepy. Aragorn lied blatantly to her face--you would think she would be more upset once she recovers her senses. I suppose that's what you get when you dance with the devil, though. *cackles* I wonder if the palpable change in atmosphere reflects itself in the weather--if I were a citizen of Gondor, I'd be very concerned. Of course, people there might not notice, thet're so used to the gloomy clouds from Mordor...

My question is, what made Faramir feel differently about Valawen? He seemed indifferent to her the first time when she seduced him. There has to be a reason, but I missed it. XD
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From ANON - Sandra V on January 06, 2005
Mmmmh.... just checked your story codes again and realized there might still be one character coming to the rescue after all... ;) Can't wait what happens next!
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From ANON - Sandra V on January 06, 2005
*points at Freya's post and nods her head*

"What she said!" :)

Aaaah... DOOM and a threesome, what more could a girl wish for... *grins*

And poor Valawen indeed (NOT!). I had been wondering before I read the chapter who was going to help her now eventually? Eowyn turned into an empty shell (unless she fakes it or manages to step out of it), Faramir turned into deliciously nasty bad boy and Aragorn is as ruthless as you will ever see him. Uuuuuuhhhh... *rubs hands*

As for Bormir: Oh hon, I have to borrow Arwen's words for once:

"IF YOU WANT HIM... COME AND CLAIM HIM!!!" :P
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From ANON - Dread Lady Freya on January 06, 2005
See? What�d I tell ya? DOOOOOM! *vbg* Poor Valawen, she had such high hopes, not only for herself, but for all of Arda. If Aragorn is using her, the one he loves �more than anything,� I wonder just what he has in store for the rest of Arda. (Of course, one could think of worse ways to spend one�s evening than a threesome with Aragorn and Faramir� )
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From ANON - Sandra V on January 04, 2005
"She will not die. Can you say, though, that what Eowyn now faces is better than death?"

Funny, that was my exact thought, when the Palantir took the essence of Eowyn. That's when I thought: She would rather be dead than live a life like that. You die very well on that part and it is oh so sad!

I am repeating myself again, but I love the fact, that this plot is much more elaborate and the characters - all of them - are much more prominent than in some of your previous stories. One way for me to measure a good story is to see if it is unpredictable or not. With this story I am not sure where you will be going and where you will take things, so it must be good! ;) I think you are on a good way when it comes to your story writing and as Beth mentioned already, you have made so much progress throughout times. Your stories were good to begin with, but as we all know, even good things can be improved. :) And you certainly did improve a LOT throughout your stories.

Oh and about the "elves-human" thing: Please don't worry about that, it really was only just a teeny tiny thing I noticed. The thing is, I tend to read a story not only as a reader but also as a writer and sometimes I stumble across these little observations. I am also not one for beating about the bush. If I see something I say so. Simple as that. No, I will never join the diplomatic corps. :)

And don't worry, you will never find me trying to correct any potential grammar or spelling mistakes, lol! I would never even dare to give you advice on that since I am not a native speaker and will leave it to those who know the English language a little better than I do. :)

OK, drumsticks out and let's see if I can post this review the first time around for a change...
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From ANON - Dread Lady Freya on January 04, 2005
Oh, my. Things certainly have taken a turn. Faramir�s encounter with the Palantir helped him grow a spine (standing up to Aragorn, and all). Eowyn, poor, poor Eowyn, now a shell of her former self. And something tells me Valawen is not going to appreciate Faramir�s reward!

I can feel the tension coming to a head, I don�t think this is going to end the way any of them (even Aragorn) think it will. Or maybe it�s just my overactive sense of DOOOOOOOM! *grins*
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From ANON - Beth on January 04, 2005
Shivers down my spine...
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From ANON - Sandra V on January 02, 2005
*sigh*

OK, so this ^&�)(�"Z&$ son of a review page did accept my review.

Both times...

*glares at page*

I am sorry for the double review again, but hey, that way I will send your review count skyrocketing in no time, hehe! ;)
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From ANON - Sandra V on January 02, 2005
*adultff.net is behaving mighty bitchy again today, but I saved my review before posting, just in case. HA! Kneel, suckers! :D*

It's really getting hard reviewing without repeating myself now, lol! :) I love the fact, that other characters like Eowyn and Faramir are so much more prominent. I also realized during this chapter what it actually IS, that the Palantir is doing (and yes, I know your stories are AU). What I mean is this: In the book, the effects of the Palantir where sometimes described a little shady and I didn't fully realize until I was reading this chapter of your story, what is one of the effects of the Palantir in Tolkien's book: The physical as well as the emotional yearning for it (almost like the ring to some degree). The feeling of not being complete unless you hold it again. I think it fits the moments with Pip and the Palantir very nicely - bookwise and moviewise. :)

I also love the change in Faramir and his talk to Aragorn. Everybody is in for a jolly good time (not!), heheh. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up, girl! And don't you dare let this story end to soon, there is a lot of potential to conintue with this for a while. ;)
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From ANON - Sandra V on January 02, 2005
It's really getting hard reviewing without repeating oneself now, lol! :) I love the fact, that other characters like Eowyn and Faramir are so much more prominent. I also realized during this chapter what it actually IS, that the Palantir is doing (and yes, I know your stories are AU). What I mean is this: In the book, the effects of the Palantir where sometimes described a little shady and it wasn't until I was reading this chapter of your story, that I became fully aware of one of the effects of the Palantir in Tolkien's book: The physical as well as the emotional yearning for it (almost like the ring to some degree or like a drug). The feeling of not being complete unless you hold it again. I think it complements the moments with Pip and the Palantir very nicely - bookwise and moviewise. :)

Oh, one thing I noticed: When your OC is making up her excuse to Eowyn in order to get to see Arargorn and Eowyn asks her what she wants to talk to him about she says: "The elves, I want to know if Elrohir and Elladan said anything to him." Now, that sounds as if she is talking about members of another race, when in fact she is an elf like them. If you leave out "the elves" it works much better. After all, Eowyn wouldn't say: "The humans" if it was the other way round and she was talking about Aragorn or Faramir, after all your OC is referring to members of her own race, so there is no need to stress they are elves and it is not something she would do.

But that is just a little tiny thing I noticed. ;) Keep up the great work! I love the way Faramir is developing now and his talk with Aragorn. Or as one of our lovely ladies here likes to say: "DOOOOOOOOOOOM!" :D
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From ANON - Beth on January 02, 2005
This gets more interesting by the chapter...I don't trust Faramir, but who would? XD

How can you NOT think you're improving? I'm glued to my screen every couple of nights!
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From ANON - Dread Lady Freya on January 01, 2005
Chapter 12 is up? Are we SURE this time? Maybe you posted it in some AU? Okay, I�ll let it drop. Moving on � Boromir and Haldir in a cave� Mmmm� Do you know where it is? And can I buy a map from you?

*clears throat* Sorry, I�m back now. Our stalwart Captain Faramir wasn�t taken in as easily as everyone thought. He is resisting, but will he speak out or follow Aragorn into darkness? *cue ominous music*

P.S. Hope you have a happy, healthy and prosperous new year. Have I mentioned lately that you ROCK?

P.P.S. SANDRA, thanks and right back at you! Hope your holiday was great and that the new year is everything you want it to be! And you, too, Beth! Glad to have you aboard! *waves*

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From ANON - Beth on January 01, 2005
Your writing and descriptive words continue to improve. I like the way you indicated that Valawen grew more uncomfortable by the moment around others; it was well done.
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From ANON - Sandra V on December 31, 2004
"Nothing I can't get after you leave."

Mmmh... something tells me Faramir is not quite done for, the noble son of the Steward is still resisting, isn't he! ;) I know I am repeating myself, but I love the fact that you write a really long story this time, it's really fun to get into the characters heads and as I said before I am totally in love with the dark side's POV this time so to speak. Wonderful!!!

I habe you have a wonderful New Year's Eve, a great start into 2005 and a Happy New Year! Talk to you again in 2005.

P.S.: FREYA , if you happen to read this: A Happy New Year to you as well! :)
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From ANON - Dread Lady Freya on December 29, 2004
Poor Faramir & Eowyn, so noble, so trusting, so DOOMED! I had hoped the twins would have seen past Aragorn and (what�s her name in this chapter? *grins evilly*) Valawen�s evil plot. Oh, well! So, are we gonna meet the Evil behind the Palantir? Wait! I have it figured out! It�s Boromir, isn�t it? Even beyond the veil he�s held a grudge all these years, and is now using his supernatural powers to warp this upstart usurper of a king. Muahaha!
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