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Reviews for Oathbound, Heartbroken *COMPLETE*

By : crossstitcherire
  • From ANON - Haldir\'s Heart & Soul on January 11, 2005
    Been reading this from the start but haven't reviewed.I think.Well,I think that we all know who that was.Glorfindel's scary right now.
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  • From ANON - DragonEyeZ on January 04, 2005
    Yikes! Orcs in Lórien?!? Or.. Is it Celeborn and Galadriel's suggestion of how to get Haldir away...? AAAARGH! UPDATE! CONTINUE!!! Don't leave me without the end to this! I think that the entire story in its whole is adorable, and yet not so fluffy and overly cute that it makes me want to vomit (it's meant as a compliment, in case you're in doubts..). Your story appears very well worked-through, and I have enjoyed reading the chapters that exist at this moment (8, at the time of writing). You do an excellent work at portraying Haldir's fears, and of how he has until now managed to keep them under control, and I long to see how he will manage to overcome them.
    So, please, continue as soon as is possible, so that we may see if Haldir and 'Maen will ever manage to join fully.
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  • From ANON - eawen penallion on December 21, 2004
    Just for folks who are checking, Christmas and RL is getting in the way of a few things but don't worry, there are more chapters in the pipeline!
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  • From ANON - siw-wa on December 18, 2004
    LOVE IT!! MORE SOON PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - Giggles on December 07, 2004
    Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy your stories. I absolutely loved Glorfindel Unleashed and when I recognized your name as the author of this new story, I knew the it would be a good one. Haldir is my favorite character to read about and to have such a great author like yourself write a story about him - well, I'm just excited beyond belief! So far, after only 4 chapters, I'm addicted. Your descriptions of the characters, their emotions and their surroundings always makes me feel like I'm a part of the story. Thank you for all your hard work and for the timely updates. I can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From aimless38 on December 04, 2004
    Oh this is getting so frustrating....(in a good I have to read more way) Haldir is so stubborn! His father was even trying to tell him to follow his heart. Then Haldir made a foolish promise and is honor bound to keep it..AARRGGHH! The last scene with him wondering what it would be like with an ellon and then experimenting was very well done. But it ended disasterously. Oh.. I love this story too.
    Hugs
    Amy

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  • From aimless38 on December 04, 2004
    Chapter two...Haldir...I want to shake him till his teeth rattle! He could be so happy with Mel! Orophin was only doing what he thought best. As with chapter one you very vividly portray stong emotion and even despair. Celeborn was a bastard wasn't he? I loved it! He is more than Galadriel's arm ornament. he is a powerful lord in his own right who has a realm to protect not coddle the emotional upheavals of his warriors. Well done!!!!! I do hope this has a happy ending.
    Hugs
    Amy

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  • From aimless38 on December 04, 2004
    Oh what a wonderful beginning. You have captured the Lorien brothers just how I envision them. Poor Haldir will have much angst ahead I fear. You have made Haldir honorable, kind, loving and kept the touch of arrogance I love so much about him. Your descriptive writing style is a joy to read and you weave a facinating plot. I see there are 4 chapters I hope that you will continue with this wonderful story.
    Hugs
    Amy

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  • From ANON - eawen penallion on November 29, 2004
    Thanks to you both, I am glad that you are enjoying this! More to come, I promise.

    Eawen
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  • From ANON - Likimeya on November 27, 2004
    Ooooh, this is so exciting!
    I love it already! :)
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  • From ANON - Nora on November 25, 2004
    Have I told you how much I love your story? I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon! THANKS!!!
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  • From ANON - Nora on November 23, 2004
    HA!!!!!! I can just picture to look of horror on Haldir's face (I love it)!!! Interesting story, please update soon. Thanks.
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