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Reviews for Oil

By : fishyz
  • From madinsane on November 24, 2010
    brilliant :) i keep coming back to this story time and time again :) thankyou
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  • From zigrachan on March 25, 2009
    oh, they are perfect couple ^__^ and fanfic is simply awersome!
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  • From ANON - MiniMew on July 08, 2006
    OK, ready for some constuctive critism? Here it comes: You seem to have a small problem with sign language (it could also be that something has been changed, in some way. It might just be the computer that screwed it up). As an example: Through the story there is a lot of commas beside each other (,,,). Also, sometimes it seems that someting has been deleted from the text, so it doesn't fit together, (you, you,) (was, was) and some sentences doesn't have endings. And you have a tendence to write 'to' instead of 'too' (take it easy, lots of writers do that).
    On the contrary, I really liked your story and the plot. Except for the small 'to'/'too' problem, I didn't encounter spelling errors. I do want to compliment you, because you are a good writer. Keep on writing.
    MiniMew

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  • From ANON - ElysianDawn on July 04, 2006
    I liked this story it was very sweet. The writing is good and it was very easy to read. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Golden Elf on July 11, 2005
    OMG! I loved this story. I especially loved how sweet and caring Glorfindel was. Great job showing Erestor's fragile side. I am glad that the two 'house elves' got their comeupance. Way to go!
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  • From ANON - Jayn on June 09, 2005
    I luv it!! Heh heh. Gotta luv Glory. Very interesting way of proving them wrong. GREAT story!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Altariel on June 06, 2005
    Perfect!!!! I need a cold shower!!!!! ICE ICE ICE ICEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
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  • From ANON - Kalima on April 16, 2005
    I meant to say, "It SAYs " you continue. I know you love those seduction scenes (so do we), but I love it when you move on with a story too, and develop more.
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  • From ANON - Kalima on April 16, 2005
    It SYA "TBC," so we're all waiting out here!
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  • From ANON - Roz on December 23, 2004
    And oh by the way...I WANT MORE!!! It's just too gorgeous a story to leave as-is. (And I'm with you - the Butler did it - but only because Fim & Sian have me stumped as well).
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  • From ANON - Roz on December 23, 2004
    My second favorite of your stories Fishy! Love your sweet, protective, caring Glorfy! The whole thing is just sooooo sweet. And Oh My what a beautiful love scene!!!
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  • From ANON - fimbrethiel on December 22, 2004
    FISHYYYYYY! I love this story! Even though there's no butler in it. Well, yeah, in a sense there is... but anyway... I love the tender eroticism in this story. Nicely done! Fim~
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