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By : Nephthys

From ANON - Sandra V on May 12, 2005
Nice try, hon, but we happen to KNOW you do more than just typing the story. *g* After all, if it were just Haldir comming up with this, we would only see HIS POV. But we get her POV as well. So my dear, there is no use denying it - you are as guilte as sin in this case! :D

Totally loved the reflection chapter by the stream and what is it with the glowing of the legs? Is something wrong with her? *shudders* The latest chapter was just... *faints*

This story better has a good ending or I will never forgive you, lol!

That's my review for today. See? I can do short onces and simply point at all the other reviews I left you. *g*
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From ANON - Sandra V on May 11, 2005
*waves back at Michelle*

Hi, gal! :) No problem, dear, any friend of his majesty the Horny Bastard and any fan of our wonderful story author is a friend of mine. :D

*Looks at author" You ARE in the middle of writing the next chapter are you?

"Looks at horny bastard* Give her some... *coughs*... inspiration, elf!
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From ANON - Michelle on May 10, 2005
Eeeeeek! I can't believe she said, what she said! Well...actually, I can believe it, but I can't believe it *grins*
Loved these chapters. They've really showed us the how close these two have become, and how hard it will be for them if/when they are seperated. *sigh*

These chapters are so romantic; two lovers, alone in the woods, making love every chance they get....it just doesn't get any better than that. *sigh*

Marvelous job! I'm loving every word of this story, so please keep up the great work! And please keep "Mr. Wicked" inspired! More, more, more...*evil laughter*

Michelle...:D

PS. Hi Sanda V. Nope, I'm not the Michelle from your MC list. But hello to you, anyway. *waves*
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From ANON - Sandra V on May 08, 2005
You know, I wonder if his Royal Majesty the Horny Bastard realizes he is no langer having sex but making love! :D

I guess you know me by know, there isn't a thing I have probably not said about this story by now and I am only repeating myself. But you know I am at awe with it and in love with your characters, so consider me another one sighing happily while she read this. I am just not always sure you realize youself just how good this is. I have to say, that I am normally incredibly picky, I am never 100 % satisfied, I don't flame, but usually give constructive criticism. But with this story all I do is relax, lean back and enjoy every word of it. There is just so much more behind this story then the sex which is what makes it so beautiful. And I tell you something else: When you are through with this story (a day I hope will still be a long time away!) I will print the entire thing and put it on a shelf to have a look at it again every now and then. :)

I also realized that one of the genius strokes of this story is the way you use the "desire", that is so unique! It ads a whole new layer among all those others to the story and the way you describe its effets I swear I feel myself swept away while reading the story. It is almost like a another character. Just beautiful, girl!
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From ANON - Rose Atlee on May 07, 2005
*sighs contentedly while her heart beats out of her chest* You have way outdone yourself this time! I had three chapters to read to catch up, and that last one completely took my breath away! Excellent job! I think my heart stopped for a second when she told him not to leave! I can't wait to read more! *is a bit reluctant for this to end* Hopefully there will be plenty more chapters before the final decisions are made! :)
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From ANON - Sandra V on May 03, 2005
OK... first of all, can I just say that I absolutely HATE Fujitsu Siemens and its repair center? My laptop broke down and I send it in. It took them two months (!!!) instead of one week as promised to repair it and when I got it back they had completely formated the entire harddrive without prior notice! Everything, and I mean everything was gone and I didn't have a chance beforehand to make a propper update.

So I spent the past few weeks recreating my files from memory, reinstalling programms, looking for bookmarks I had... I did everything from scratch. And now that I am almost through I finally have the time to enjoy the finer things in live - like that thing which is perhaps my favourite fan fiction story.

To put this plain and simple:

This was and still is the BEST adult LOTR fan fiction story I have EVER read and I have read a lot of fan fiction of all categories. It has a wonderful storyline that builds up towards a climax, the language is beautiful, the characters three dimensional and fully fleshed out and while a lot of writers deal with the beauty of the elves, you captures their beauty as well as their sensuality just perfectly in the form of Haldir and Legolas. The sensuality, too, is breathtaking. And I am not necessarily talking about the sex scenes but the little moments like Annowe combing Haldir's hair. Beautiful, yet very sensual and intimate.

The other thing is that one feels incredibly sympathetic towards these three characters, I have grown incredibly fond of them, Haldir in particular. He may be a horny bastard after all, but there is SO much more to him it is almost hartbreaking and Annowe is one of the very few OTs I actually like and adore simply because you made her such a strong, sympathetic and sensual women. I never thought I would say this, but I have a littly crush on HH (horny Haldir) now, I fear. ;)

I simply cannot praise your story highly enough and I don't often do that. In fact I have never done it to the degree I am doing it at the moment. I just hope I can get across what a delight it was and still is to be reading it. And I cannot thank you enough for sharing it with all of us. You show people what is beautiful about this kind of literature and I hope that all newbies coming here have the good fortune to run into your story first.

I hope I could bring across what a delight it has been for me and how much I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this story (as well as the others but this one surpases them by a long shot!) and again, I cannot thank you enough for it. :)

That being said... I am not sure she is reading in this section or the other one, but if she does:

Hi, VI JANAWAY!!! *waves* It is great to see you around here as well, we are both members on the MC lst! :) I am not sure whether the MICHELLE reviewing here is the one from the MC list as well, but just in case: Hi, Michelle! :)
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From ANON - Rose Atlee on May 01, 2005
Glowing? Haldir ourt of control? HOLY CRAP!!!!! *laughs* Ah, but these were a nice two chapters, even though the March Warden was very nearly - dare I say it - human in his taking of her that time. *gasp* What a horrid thought! ...or is it?... Keep up the great work, and I look forward to the next chapters!
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From ANON - Michelle on May 01, 2005
Great chapters!

What is Galadriel up to? She's a wise one, so I know that there's more to her ordering Annowe to escort Haldir to the Havens than just wanting him to arrive there safely. Oohhhhh, I wonder what she knows!?

And what is going on with Haldir? His loss of control was very uncharacteristic of him. Oohhhhh, it has something to do with whatever Galadriel knows, doesn't it? Gahhhhh...so many questions, so many questions! lol.

Well, I guess I'll just have to wait for the next update to find out if any of my questions will be answered. I'm looking forward to that update. Super hot chapters, girlie! Keep up the good work! :D

Michelle...
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From ANON - Vi Janaway on April 23, 2005
But she HAS to tell him....You handle emotions so very well.
Honestly...I hope he doesn't leave Arda yet. He still has much to do.
You took an unusual idea and made it work

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From ANON - Anna on April 19, 2005
AUUUGGGHHH!! Please tell me there is going to be another chapter after 42. I need to drink a big glass of ice water after that. Scratch that, I'll just dump the ice water over my head. All I can say is WOW! Now where is that pesky elf, I have a few ideas to try out on him. :-)
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From ANON - Michelle on April 18, 2005
So, Haldir doesn't like the thought of Legolas making a sudden, unexpected, appearance? Aww, does someone feel slightly threatened by the thought? Aww...I don't think dear Haldir has anything to worry about anyway...I don't think so, not after reading all that happened in the last chapter, anyway. :D

Great chapter, Nephthys! These two can't get enough of each other, and I can't get enough of them! lol. They have truly surrendered themselves to one another. I wonder what Annowe was about to say while they were being intimate? Something like, "I love you, Haldir!?"...maybe? *grins*

The pace and flow and mood of this story is perfect. I can't wait for the next update. Great work!

Michelle...
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From ANON - Naira on April 16, 2005
Your story always throws me into a heap of confusement :p I always think im in another section...As again I made the review in the book section of lotr, instead of here and I dont like repeating myself :p

I loved the update, give us some more
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From ANON - Vi Janaway on April 16, 2005
Making up for lost time, they are...:) :) :)
How are they going to let each other go?
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From ANON - Michelle on April 14, 2005
Whew! Is it hot in here or is it just me? *wipes sweat away*

These last few chapters have been extremely HOT! Their acceptance of their "situation" seems to have released them from all of their inhibitions. I love it })

That scene of them on horseback had me swooning and thudding, double time! LOL.
I'm looking forward to reading more about their journey to the Havens...I'm keeping my fingers crossed that Legolas doesn't unexpectantly show up. :/ That would be SUCH a BUMMER! LOL!!!

Great chapters! Can't wait to read more. :D

Michelle...
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From ANON - Phairesse on April 11, 2005
This has been such an intriguing story...sigh...One can only wish...

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